Shivi FF: DeewaniBhabhi ke nuskhe Epilogue, Pg. 127 (finished) - Page 50

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great update😆 Raavi is now to ready to go all the way😆 but yeh show ki tarah, Shiva clueless hai😆 aur Dev bhi kabab mein haddi ban gaya,

I can’t wait to read Raavi’s reaction when she founds out the identity of DeewaniBhabi🤣

Edited by mpks1 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya269


Chalo let me try 🤣

  1. Dhara
  2. Gaumbi
  3. Dev
  4. Rishita
  5. Shiva
  6. Raavi
  7. Suman
  8. Krish
  9. Prafulla
  10. Mausapa
  11. Anita
  12. Hardik
  13. Janardhan
  14. Janardhan’s wife
  15. Rishita’s bua
  16. Janardhan ke gunde
  17. Kaka
  18. Jamna kaki
  19. Kaanta kaki
  20. Suman’s helper kaki
  21. Ribbon waali
  22. Kesar chudail
  23. Godhbharai lady

Kisiko miss kiya maine?


What am I seeing ? 🤓


Kuch der keliye idhar se udhar ho ke kya aayi.

List publish kardi. 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya269


Chalo let me try 🤣

  1. Dhara
  2. Gaumbi
  3. Dev
  4. Rishita
  5. Shiva
  6. Raavi
  7. Suman
  8. Krish
  9. Prafulla
  10. Mausapa
  11. Anita
  12. Hardik
  13. Janardhan
  14. Janardhan’s wife
  15. Rishita’s bua
  16. Janardhan ke gunde
  17. Kaka
  18. Jamna kaki
  19. Kaanta kaki
  20. Suman’s helper kaki
  21. Ribbon waali
  22. Kesar chudail
  23. Godhbharai lady

Kisiko miss kiya maine?


Ranvijay or someone like that . Jiska cycle pe ribbon waali ser kar rahi thi haveli mein. 😆🤣


Chicago wali Kesar madam and Kesar Chudail same hai kya ? 🤔

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites


Ranvijay or someone like that . Jiska cycle pe ribbon waali ser kar rahi thi haveli mein. 😆🤣


Chicago wali Kesar madam and Kesar Chudail same hai kya ? 🤔


Ab chudail ka naam nahi pata. Bas chudail likhti toh sabko lagta Raavi 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya269


Ab chudail ka naam nahi pata. Bas chudail likhti toh sabko lagta Raavi 🤣


🤣 Sab Shiva ka meharbaani hai.

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Posted: 4 years ago

For anybody that's late in reading this story, they'll be wondering how it took almost 40 pages for the next chapter to come 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanyshah

For anybody that's late in reading this story, they'll be wondering how it took almost 40 pages for the next chapter to come 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂


40 and counting.......


Now, only Ananya can pull the brake.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites


40 and counting.......


Now, only Ananya can pull the brake.


But she's just having too much fun on our misery's to even do snything about it 😂😂😂


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites


40 and counting.......


Now, only Ananya can pull the brake.


Main aa gayi break lagane 😎


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Posted: 4 years ago

When Shiva came back, Raavi was disappointed to see that he was wearing a shirt. He sat there and they just glared at each other. Dev came with some French fries and sandwiches for all of them. He took one and asked both of them to take one. Both Raavi and Shiva took one begrudgingly. Raavi wanted Dev out of here, but she didn’t know how. DeewaniBhabhi hadn’t replied to her yet.

“Tu isi liye aayi thi na? Khana thoosne ke liye? Aaj pehli baar maami ke liye bura lag raha hai. Uska saara khana khaa jati hogi tu toh.” Shiva said.


“Main jitna khaana thoosu tujhe kya?”


“Abhi thode din baad saand ban jayegi phir tujhe uthake ghar se bahar kaise phekunga?” Shiva asked.

“Bas jab dekho tum dono aise touchy touchy baatein karte rehte ho.” Krish came there out of nowhere, and immediately reached for the sandwiches


“Tu? Kaha tha tu?” Shiva asked.

“Main Dhara bhabhi ke room mein chain se so raha tha.” Krish yawned.


“Itni der tak kaun sota hai Krish?” Raavi asked.

“Kal raat ko neend hi nahi aayi kya karu?”


“Tu raat bhar phone pe kya karta hai Krish?” Dev asked. “Dhara bhabhi ko bolke shayad tera phone check karana parega.”

“Ab main bara ho gaya hu. Meri bhi kuch privacy hai.”


“Ae gadhera, privacy chorr aur padhai pe dhyaan de.” Shiva said.

Now there were two of them. Raavi frowned. How was she supposed to get rid of them? Shiva was sitting here popping French fries into his mouth one by one, looking least bothered about anything else. Raavi suddenly got up.


“Shiva ki tabiyat kharab hain nn. Tum dono yaha baithke use irritate kyu kar rahe ho? Krish jaa jaake padhai kar. Aur Dev, tu apni girlfriend ke paas jaa na!” Raavi shouted.


“Girlfriend?” Shiva asked.

“Haa girlfriend. Saurabh ne mujhe sab bata diya hai. Dev jaa uske paas jaa. Main Shiva ke saath hu. Ise rest karna hai.”


Krish looked scared of Raavi so he ran away. Dev looked embarrassed so he walked away too. Raavi had finally, successfully scared away the two kabab mein haddis. She looked at Shiva who was just looking at her with confusion on his face.

“Yeh kya tha? Unhe bhagaya kyu?


“Tujhe rest ki zaroorat hai Shiva. Isliye bhaga diya.” She smiled.

Raavi intentionally stumbled and fell onto him. He held her by her arms. Raavi could feel the mood setting. She tried to straighten herself, but she down again on him, very intentionally. This time Shiva didn’t expect her to fall so he lost his balance and both of them fell onto his cot, with her on the top.


Shiva immediately got up and Raavi’s mood got spoilt. How would she feel the passion if Shiva wouldn’t take any initiative? DeewaniBhabhi’s heroes always took the initiative. Then she heard his phone ring.

“Gaumbi ka phone hai.” Shiva picked up the call and went away.


Raavi heard his bike start and knew that he had left for the store. How could he just leave without telling her? She finished eating the sandwiches and the French fries in anger. Why did she have to be attracted to him instead of anyone else in this entire world? Raavi was about to leave too when she felt her phone vibrate. A new mail!


Dear Somnath ki Sabse Beautiful Ladki,


I’m sorry for the late reply. I just didn’t get any time.


I understand you are attracted to this guy. I’m happy you found your passion. At this point I can only suggest that you explore this further. If you want to elicit a strong reaction from him, then you must create a situation like that. Have you ever tried making him jealous? People give out real, strong reactions when they’re jealous. As for privacy, I can’t help you with that. You have to look for your own privacy.


Waiting to hear more about this. Hope my advice works.


Love,

DeewaniBhabhi


Raavi gasped. How had she not thought about jealousy? That was the main ingredient in all love stories. Even in the first story, the guy got jealous because she got engaged to his brother, and in the enemies to lovers story, the guy got jealous when he saw her hugging some other guy.

Raavi could make Shiva jealous with Dev! But she had told Shiva about Dev’s girlfriend. It wouldn’t make any sense making him jealous with Dev. What if she flirted with a random guy in front of Shiva? Would that work? She was Somnath’s sabse beautiful ladki, so any guy would feel lucky if she flirted with them.


She decided her idea was the best, so she went to Pandya store. If Shiva left on Gaumbi’s call, then he must be there. Raavi was right, he was helping Gaumbi in the store. She walked into the store and Shiva looked both shocked and annoyed to see her there.


“Arrey Raavi, tu yaha?” Gaumbi asked.

“Haa Gaumbi. Woh kya hai na, Dhara di ne mujhe zimmedari di thi Shiva ki. Isliye main yaha aa gayi. Yeh gadhera apne tabiyat ko leke bohot careless hai. Yaad hain jab bachpan mein iske pao mein chot lagi thi phir bhi woh football khelne chala gaya tha?”


“Ae maami ki behen ki beti, main khud ka khyaal rakh sakta hu. Aur yaha Gaumbi bhi hai.” Shiva barked.

“Actually main yaha nahi hu. Meri ek meeting hai Janardhan Seth ke saath abhi 15 minute mein. Isliye toh maine tujhe bulaya.” Gaumbi said. “Raavi, tu yahi reh. Khyaal rakh iss gadhere ka.”


Gaumbi left the store. Raavi looked at Shiva and smiled. He rolled his eyes and got back to work. Raavi’s plan was to flirt with any customer who came in through the door. She helped him with his work, but her eye remained firm at the door waiting for someone to arrive.

The first one to arrive was Jamna kaki’s husband and Raavi went to the back. She wasn’t going to flirt with a sixty year old man. The next person to come in was a woman. After that another person came but he was old too. The next two were married. Where were all the hot guys of Somnath? The store was approaching its closing time.


The last customer to come in was perfect! Raavi didn’t know who it was, but he looked her age. He probably wasn’t married, wasn’t that handsome, but she would have to make do with whatever she got. She walked over to him, and asked him very sweetly what he wanted. Obviously he got interested in Somnath ki sabse beautiful ladki.

“Hey you!”


“Hi!” Raavi flirted.

“I’m Rishi. Nice to meet you.” He extended his hand.


Raavi took it. “I’m Raavi.”


“Tum bohot beautiful ho Raavi.”

Raavi pretended to blush. Why didn’t her gadhera understand that she was the most beautiful girl of Somnath? “Thank you.”


Shiva was slowly losing his patience looking at Raavi giggle like that with that man. He finished up packing his order to make him leave, but Raavi kept her hand on his shoulder as he said something funny to her. He got bolder and touched her hand. That’s when Shiva completely lost it.

He asked the guy to leave who quickly ran away looking at the expression on Shiva’s face. Shiva held Raavi’s hand and dragged her to the back room, and pinned her against the wall. Raavi had just followed all of DeewaniBhabhi’s tips on “How To Flirt With a Guy and Make Him Fall Head Over Heels For You.” It worked, the guy wouldn’t stop flirting with her, and it worked on Shiva too. He was currently glaring at Raavi like never before.


“Kya kar rahi thi tu?” Shiva asked angrily.

“Kya?” Raavi feigned innocence.


“Flirt kyu kar rahi thi?”


“Mera mann. Main single hu toh kisi ke saath bhi flirt karu. Tujhe kya?”


Shiva pulled her closer by her waist and Raavi gasped at his force. The anger and intensity in his eyes made Raavi tremble with desire.

“Tu phir kabhi aisa nahi karegi.”


“Kyu?” Raavi asked. “Tujhe kya problem hai?”


“Mujhe problem hai. Aage se aisa kiya toh khud ko control nahi kar paunga. Uski jaan le leta main abhi.”


Raavi didn’t know his reaction would be intense. Why was he so jealous? Did he like her?


“Use touch karne ki kya zaroorat thi? Dev nahi mila toh koi bhi?”

“Mujhe Dev mein koi interest nahi hai.” Raavi said.


Shiva looked shocked. The same girl who would run around Somnath telling everyone that she was in love with Dev was now telling him she wasn’t in love with Dev. What was happening? This anger melted away, and he was just confused.

“Toh tu... Dev ko nahi pasand karti?”


Raavi shook her head. “Pehle lagta tha par nahi.”


“Toh phir mujhe tujhse chutkara mila?”


“Ae gadhere, agle saath janmo tak peecha nahi chorungi tera. Yeh sapna dekhna chorr de.”


“Pata hai. Chudail gale lipat gayi hai. Tujh jaisi bhootni ko na koi pandit bhi na bhaga paye.”


Raavi found a notebook on the table beside him. She took it and hit him with it. “Abhi uss ladke ne bhi kaha ki main beautiful hu. Tujhse bas compliment nahi diya jata.”


“Ae maami ki behen ki beti, compliment chahti hai? Aaj tak kisiko kabhi ek chipkali ko compliment dete suna hai?”


“Shiva tu-“


Raavi suddenly realised her plan flopped yet again. He got jealous but they ruined it the last moment. It was both their fault this time. She got carried away.


“Kya?” Shiva asked.


“Mujhe jana hai ghar. Aaj jaldi sona hai. Kal subah mujhe ladka dekhne aane wala hai. Toh tere saath jhagra karke main time waste nahi karungi.”


“Ladka? Kaun ladka?”

Raavi went back to her silent treatment and didn’t answer any of his question. She simply walked out of the store and back to her home in style. DeewaniBhabhi was a genius! Raavi quickly went home and turned on her laptop to write a thank you mail to DeewaniBhabhi.


Dear DeewaniBhabhi,


Thank you so much for your wonderful advice! It worked like a miracle.


Shiva was so jealous when I tried to flirt with a customer from his store. He literally dragged me away and threatened to kill the guy. We were just an inch away from one another!!! Then we started fighting but I salvaged the situation saying a guy was coming to see me tomorrow for marriage. He again got so jealous. I just can’t wait for tomorrow. I’m gonna go to Pandya house and tell him all about this handsome, sexy guy and make him super jealous. I just hope he pins me to the wall again, and kisses me *blushing*.


Thank you so so much DeewaniBhabhi. You have changed my life.


Love,

Somnath ki Sabse Beautiful Ladki

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