Love is all you need (original fiction) - Page 55

Knock.....knock......How are you???

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Knock.....knock......How are you???

I'm good. And you?

Just been busy with stuff, no time to work on the story! 😒

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

I'm good. And you?

Just been busy with stuff, no time to work on the story! 😒

Don't worry about story....I just pinged to say Hi to you....and check how are you doing....🤗

Don't take any pressure to write the story....write only when feel like writing....

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Don't worry about story....I just pinged to say Hi to you....and check how are you doing....🤗

Don't take any pressure to write the story....write only when feel like writing....

Thank you for checking! And thank you for your patience with the story! 😊

I have gotten busy with my other IF duties (being a beta reader and some contests we have coming up) so I haven't been finding time. I'm also taking a break from this story and writing others (that I've posted).

How are you doing? How's the situation in Hyd? Were you affected by the cyclone?

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

Thank you for checking! And thank you for your patience with the story! 😊

I have gotten busy with my other IF duties (being a beta reader and some contests we have coming up) so I haven't been finding time. I'm also taking a break from this story and writing others (that I've posted).

How are you doing? How's the situation in Hyd? Were you affected by the cyclone?

Lockdown started in Hyd, it is a kind of relief, have it till May end..no cyclone impact here.....

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

I'm thinking of changing the approach to my story a bit....

What is the change???

Originally posted by: Anjani9

What is the change???

I’m toying with the idea of doing away with the alternate POV chapters and just telling the story in one single narrative with Ryan and Sara’s perspective appearing together. As it is, I’m nearing the end of this story and I’m finding that I’m just adding more detail to fill one chapter from one person’s POV. Instead I’d rather keep it crisp and concise now that it’s the final few chapters.

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

I’m toying with the idea of doing away with the alternate POV chapters and just telling the story in one single narrative with Ryan and Sara’s perspective appearing together. As it is, I’m nearing the end of this story and I’m finding that I’m just adding more detail to fill one chapter from one person’s POV. Instead I’d rather keep it crisp and concise now that it’s the final few chapters.

I had given this suggestion to another writer on this Forum.....the more short or crisp you make the story....it will lose the charm.....

Detailed story is more interesting to read....again this my POV....

Originally posted by: Anjani9

I had given this suggestion to another writer on this Forum.....the more short or crisp you make the story....it will lose the charm.....

Detailed story is more interesting to read....again this my POV....

You could be right as a reader! But as a writer, writing 25 chapters of almost 8000 words each can be quite draining! Besides, events will happen quickly moving forward and I want to get in both Ryan and Sara’s reactions to certain things so it just made more sense to me to take this approach. But I will know for sure once I start to write!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

You could be right as a reader! But as a writer, writing 25 chapters of almost 8000 words each can be quite draining! Besides, events will happen quickly moving forward and I want to get in both Ryan and Sara’s reactions to certain things so it just made more sense to me to take this approach. But I will know for sure once I start to write!

Writer's POV is absolutely right.....appreciate all your effort.....👏

Am fine even if you start after an year also....🤗

How is your duty and other roles on the Forum??? 😊