Life beyond quest | Completed - Page 18

Originally posted by: -Mitu-

just wow ... please make deviyani to question Patralekha intentions to destroyed her life too... what a fabulous part your wrote... jaya is awesome damn I loved her witty gestures... Patralekha is turning mad day by day and now bhavani n gang will surely disowned her very soon

Thanks so much 💜

Chapter updated

Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Awesome......superb.......👌

Pakhi is seriously out of control......she is completely obsessed with Virat..... she definitely needs psychiatric help....

Sai gave a befitting reply to pakhi.....and Virat to Bhavani..... I loved it a lot.....

Eagerly waiting for next part...... please give really soon.....

Hey.... request from my side.....

You are really wonderful writer.....❤

If you are interested..... please write story on Sai’s trauma regarding jagtap incidents... she is being harassed for long time.... at some point those memories may trigger and bother her....

I saw in some other thread... many people eagerly want to read story on this topic.... please write story on this topic if you are interested..... sincere request.....

Thanks so much 💜

Thank you for the suggestion. I have recently read something around this on the forum. But will definitely think through this and see if I can work out a story around it. Your words are really encouraging. Thanks a lot🥰

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Super fantastic update

Loved the confrontation between Sairat and Pakhi

But she is still a 🤬 ...I think Sai is right pakhi truly need a mental asylum...

Are Sai and Virat pregnant???

Please update next part soon

Thanks so much 💜

Chapter updated 😊

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

ok i loved it

loved how jaya insulted pakhi didi

and yeah everyone gave her some gyaan which was necessary

please do continue

wanna know who is pregnant now

bye sumi

Thanks so much 💜

Chapter updated 😊

Originally posted by: methebest

👏👏👏!!! Loved Fido’s beizati!! Endorse grappas would be nice too😂😂😂!! Great job overall, I am enjoying it totally!!!

Thanks so much 💜

Originally posted by: linakusharberry

awesome update dear

just loved it

pakhi seriously need medical attention

finally virat cleared everything and loved how sai showed pakhi and kaku mirror

i thought woh sairat ki babies , but looks like shivani bua was hinting about sai being pregnant

waiting for ur next update

Thanks so much 💜

Chapter updated 😊

Originally posted by: sherry_24

Thanks so much 💜

Haha just realized my typos. I meant to say loved didi's beizati and ek do thappad would be nice too!!

Originally posted by: aarushi04

Amazing story.....

Read it all in a go.....

Loved it🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

The epic beizzati of Patralekha was superb 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

One of the Best story of current track I have read so far.....

Can't wait to read the next update!!!

Waiting very eagerly!!

Post today if you can please

Thanks so much 💜 Truly encouraging

Chapter updated 😊

Originally posted by: esha143

Waah Waah.... Kya dho ke beizzati hui hai PP ki 👏👏👏....loved it.....Sai ne itne saal ki poori bhadaas nikal di lagtha hai 😄....even Virat told her off in clear words..... sach mein PP deserves this and much more.... Even the house help there did her beizzati 🤣🤣....loved that small detail 🤣....

The whole family is there.... Such a sweet moment..... And you even have a twin surprises here😍🥰.....Modu and Mishti.... But I can't help but observe you haven't clearly stated whose kids are they? 🤔....I mean even Sai loves modak na... Sooo are the twins Sairat's kids?? 🤨see what you have done.... I'm always searching for the unpredictable aspect in your story 😂...and the new arrival Shivani bua is talking about might be Samrat Nandini's kid!??🤔what do you think of my version?? 🤣

Sorry about trying to hijack your story.... I'll patiently wait for you to update the next part and see if I managed to get any unpredictable aspects right or not.... Waiting eagerly for the next amazing update ....❤

Thanks so much 💜

You were pretty close 😊. Hope you enjoy the chapter!

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Wow! Loved it. Patralekha's bubble world got burst by Virat and Sai. And, even Kaku couldn't do or say anything. Jaya didi too was no less to show Patralekha her place.

Thanks so much 💜