ShiVi story- Queen and her pawns BONUS CHAPTER UPDATED - Page 9

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It seems as if ravi has started the game but now being played by shiva but I liked earlier version more.Shiva being unknown n doing everything in his jealousy and possessiveness has excited me more but here it seems ,shiva is the main player.What about making dev too burn?Is it about punishing him for even thinking of marrying his ravi .so, until last moment he would also gonna suffer for marrying someone else other than rishita.But I would say again, I was liking unknown but possessive shiva n determined ravi more.😘😜

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lourel24

It seems as if ravi has started the game but now being played by shiva but I liked earlier version more.Shiva being unknown n doing everything in his jealousy and possessiveness has excited me more but here it seems ,shiva is the main player.What about making dev too burn?Is it about punishing him for even thinking of marrying his ravi .so, until last moment he would also gonna suffer for marrying someone else other than rishita.But I would say again, I was liking unknown but possessive shiva n determined ravi more.😘😜


Who said he knew?😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update, no words for it👏

Shiva is a devil, what he is upto😈

Shivi's moments were sizzling hot 🔥🔥

Is Shiva aware of Raavi's plan, does he want Raavi to confess her true feelings

Waiting for next


Who knows if he knows or not!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#84

What is Shiva saying? God, you surely know how to keep the reader hooked and thirsty for more

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Part 5


"Ye lo ji Dulhe ki haldi ka paani bhi aa gayi..." One of the women called out and she turned to see Shiva and Krish march in with the haldi. Shiva was holding the pot of haldi water in his hands and he walked towards her and placed the pot right before her while staring at her intensely. She watched him back till the heat in his eyes didn’t become unbearable for her and after that she looked down shyly. He stood back up and went to stand by Krish who watched him in confusion.

The women slowly started to apply haldi on Raavi and each time they did, she watched him. She could feel his cheeks on hers still. She could feel his hands on her arms and waist. Everything he said in the morning was coming true. Each time they applied her haldi, she was reminded of how this ritual was already completed with him. He smirked at her and she looked away.


this was so intense and intimate


“Please please please Bhooth ji mujhe kuch mat karna. Meri shaadi hone wali hai.” Raavi pleaded. “Aur tumhare head ko main janti hoon. Complain kar dungi main tumhari.”


this was hilarious



“Itna besura gaakar?” Prafulla 🤣


“Haan to tu thehra Bhoothnath. Tere bhoothon ki complain tujhi se karungi na?” Raavi said 🤣



“Main bas dekhne aaya tha ki meri haldi tujhpar kitni aachi tarah se chadi hai. Dekhna chahta tha ki kya sach mein jiski haldi chadhti hai usi ke rang mein dulhan dhalti hai ya nahin.” Shiva whispered to her. She shivered and watched him tongue tied. Was this the same Shiva she had known before? Why did it feel like he was flirting with her? in bold and capital HE IS FLIRTING


“Teri haldi ka rang Dev ki haldi mein beh gaya.” She said, voicing out the thought that had been troubling her since a long time now. her complain to him was so cute



“Kaha tha na? Teri koi rasam main Dev ke saath poori hone hi nahin dunga?” Shiva told her simply. “Ye khel tune shuru kiya tha par iska anjaam tu likh nahin paayegi. Hoga wahi jo meri marzi hogi.” Shiva declared as he pulled her nearer by her waist. She felt her heart thunder. What was he on about? 😳


“Kaha tha na? Dev se door rehna? Sun leti to kya jata? Par meri tu sunti kab hai. Chal theek hai fir. Tere hi tareeqe se tujhe samjhaunga...” Shiva promised and blowed softly over her lips freeing her and moving out of her bed within some moments. She was left a shaken mess. “Kal milte hain.” He saluted and with a smirk he left her room through the window. She collapsed on the bed.


☺️

•••••

“Kya soch rahi hai? Itna chalegi na to kahin zameen mein gaddhe na pad jaayen.”

he is everywhere and its overwhelming in a good sense


“Itne mein darr gayi?” Shiva asked with a smirk and then pulled her flush against him. She squealed at the suddenness of it all. He pushed a strand of her hair behind her ear and bent down to her ear. “Abhi to bahut kuch hone wala hai.” His lips were warming up her ear. She felt her heart flip. What was he doing to her? Why was she feeling like she was being entrapped!


my heart was beating so fast and hard that i could listen it myself........


“Kaha na. Tune shuru kiya. Khatam main karunga. Sab kuch. Tujhe shuruwat karni hi nahin chahiye thi. Peeche hat sakti hai to hatt ja warna Somnath jalega aur tu bhi. Lekin jis aag mein tujhe jalaunga na us aag ko bhi mein Dev ko choone nahin dunga. Use aur ek aag jalayegi. Tu kabhi bhi uski ho nahin payegi.” He vowed.


m officially dead.........cant handle this hotness and intensity


She fisted her hands on his arms. What had she started? She gulped. Never before had she witnessed him like this. Did he hate her to such an extent? Her eyes teared up.


no he doesnt hate u silly gal


i again forgot what i was going to write 😳☺️🤪

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Typed in haste ignore the mistakes.

See you soon, ila liqaa’.


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Posted: 4 years ago
#86

i love and adore krish for the way he is......freaking lovable and adorable cutie🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#87

Read all the parts in one go today and omg hot 🔥


Shiva is so intense and Raavi is wannabe master manipulator 😂😂😂

I love this!!!! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️


I can’t wait for all this to unfold and Shiva’s feelings and manipulations to come to the forefront 🥰


Also how adorable is Krish! After both the shaadis are done there needs to an appreciation day for him where he finally gets the recognition he deserves for being the best devar 😂😂



Great writing! So excited for more

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So should I believe ,he still don't know anything n get excited again 🤔😰😁. His behavior made me feel like that.Anyways I am happy reader now😁😹 just thinking he doesn't know anything.I was getting disappointed to feel like that.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#89

Beautiful update......even shiva planning something like was so unexpected.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#90

ek aur update pls.........m chking again and again🤪

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