ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 22

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Another cliffhanger?

Main nahi khel raha yeh game. 😔 I'm too excited for the next chapter that I can't wait. I wanna read Shiva's tandav upon Adhiraj n Thakurain.

Poor Raavi has gone through hell. 😭 I really loved the way you narrated Shivi's side of the story and incorporated his reactions upon the happenings at Pandya Niwas.

I'm falling hard for this story. Kitne baar dil jeetoge ?

The way you're carrying the story forward is commendable. 👏What I like the most is your way of covering every aspect and angle of the story. And, personally what I notice in every story is the communication between the characters. I voice out the dialogues while I read the story. With this ff,the voicing out of dialogues are on another level of perfection.

Do update soon.

Eagerly waiting...

Thank you so much.

🍫🍫🍫

Ohh noo. You did it again. Why must you torture us with cliffhangers?!

But it felt good to know that Shiva got the call and was aware of everything. And he and there in time. Hope police and press arrives on time as well. And maybe I am just pissed at the chaudrain, but I want someone to just scare her by forcing her to live the widow life. Not actually, living it, but I want her to get taste of the torture she's caused Raavi and see the fear in her eyes for what she forces innocent soul. How dare she kick Raavi down the stairs yesterday? And I feel good that Shiva's back. Hope they don't harm Shiv in his arms though.

And it was nice having insight into Shiva's mind over the past two years. Can you please update the next part in few hours. Pretty please?!

Finally finished reading all the parts

Man!! It was like a roller coaster ride. You play with words beautifully👏

Everything is amazing, from concept to emotions. And the last chapter😒

P.S. You really have a bad habit of leaving at cliffhangers🤔

Originally posted by: EmeraldPrincess

Finally finished reading all the parts

Man!! It was like a roller coaster ride. You play with words beautifully👏

Everything is amazing, from concept to emotions. And the last chapter😒

P.S. You really have a bad habit of leaving at cliffhangers🤔

Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🌷🍫

Yeah the cliffhanger thingy is quite entertaining 😂

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Ohh noo. You did it again. Why must you torture us with cliffhangers?!

But it felt good to know that Shiva got the call and was aware of everything. And he and there in time. Hope police and press arrives on time as well. And maybe I am just pissed at the chaudrain, but I want someone to just scare her by forcing her to live the widow life. Not actually, living it, but I want her to get taste of the torture she's caused Raavi and see the fear in her eyes for what she forces innocent soul. How dare she kick Raavi down the stairs yesterday? And I feel good that Shiva's back. Hope they don't harm Shiv in his arms though.

And it was nice having insight into Shiva's mind over the past two years. Can you please update the next part in few hours. Pretty please?!

Cliffhangers are always entertaining👍🤣

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🌷🍫

Yeah the cliffhanger thingy is quite entertaining 😂

for writers? Yes!!

But for readers?? 🤣

Originally posted by: EmeraldPrincess

for writers? Yes!!

But for readers?? 🤣

Absolutely not🤣

r u updating today plz do it soon

Any chance of update

update today plz

can u tell wen u will plz