ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 21

why did u stop

update next part today plz plz

Pliz pliz update soon ❤❤❤

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update👏

We got the glimpse of what Shiva felt for Raavi two years ago❤️

He feelings for Laddoo was beautiful😊

Loved the way you showed Shiva's rage with every sentence of Raavi and others👏

Krish's words were perfect Shiva's tandav😊

What a perfect plan, police, media and Jandardan's security👏

Shiva's entry was terrific👏

You left on another cliffhanger, waiting for next

Thank you🌹🌹

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

Why do you do this to us? 😭

Finally got a view into Shiva's thoughts and feelings in the two years he was away from Raavi and it just makes me love him more ❤️ His love for Shiv and Raavi is so strong and pure ❤️

His helplessness, anger and pain was expressed so well here! Raavi's suffering is profound but the last scene when she draws strength from Shiva just has my heart

Please please update soon!!

I love to torture my readers🤣

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

Ahhhh this update was so good <3

I loved how Shiva entered trailblazing and Raavi knew when he was here.

I already knew he would throw a hungama once he was there and save his queen

honestly can't believe how disgusting her ex sasural is 🤢

but it was so heartwarming to see Shiv say papa

update soon!

Thank you for reading and commenting. And I am waiting for the os

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

I love to torture my readers🤣

Please thoda kam torture karo aur jaldi update kardo 🙏🏻😋

Let Shiva Ravi unite now pls

Another cliffhanger?

Main nahi khel raha yeh game. 😔 I'm too excited for the next chapter that I can't wait. I wanna read Shiva's tandav upon Adhiraj n Thakurain.

Poor Raavi has gone through hell. 😭 I really loved the way you narrated Shivi's side of the story and incorporated his reactions upon the happenings at Pandya Niwas.

I'm falling hard for this story. Kitne baar dil jeetoge ?

The way you're carrying the story forward is commendable. 👏What I like the most is your way of covering every aspect and angle of the story. And, personally what I notice in every story is the communication between the characters. I voice out the dialogues while I read the story. With this ff,the voicing out of dialogues are on another level of perfection.

Do update soon.

Eagerly waiting...

You are a great writer, I was getting as restless as Shiva was in the story...

just please end Raavis misery.... pleaseeee

Get them Married ♥️

As I was going through the story, it is feeling like I am watching a superhit, blockbuster 😎 with full of emotions n action 👏👏👏👏👏👏

Awsome ❤

Waiting for next part

Cont soon