ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 20

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hyeeeee I'm new to the Shivi bandwagon ! I just have to say, I loveee your fic ! It has everything from pain to love, even obsession and chotu laddoo Shiv ! To see Shiva being soft with Shiv is a side pf him that even his own family haven't met yet ! I also love that the feelings between them was just a natural progression. It wasn't forced and wasn't due to duty on Shiva's side. He felt her absence in those 2 years she was gone. Anjane mein, both of them thought of only each other while they were apart and that made it much more sweeter.

I also like that they're character remains the same even after confessing their love to each other. They still fought, they still have their differences. But with all that, they also show their care and concern with each other. How Shiva scolded Raavi for Shiv and how Raavi naturally looked to him for any decisions.

You're doing a great job ! And I can feel that you love to write as it shows it the thought you put into it ! Keep writing 😊♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Finally shivaaaa😘😘😘dhansoo entry.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanyshah

Hyeeeee I'm new to the Shivi bandwagon ! I just have to say, I loveee your fic ! It has everything from pain to love, even obsession and chotu laddoo Shiv ! To see Shiva being soft with Shiv is a side pf him that even his own family haven't met yet ! I also love that the feelings between them was just a natural progression. It wasn't forced and wasn't due to duty on Shiva's side. He felt her absence in those 2 years she was gone. Anjane mein, both of them thought of only each other while they were apart and that made it much more sweeter.

I also like that they're character remains the same even after confessing their love to each other. They still fought, they still have their differences. But with all that, they also show their care and concern with each other. How Shiva scolded Raavi for Shiv and how Raavi naturally looked to him for any decisions.

You're doing a great job ! And I can feel that you love to write as it shows it the thought you put into it ! Keep writing 😊♥️


Thank you for reading and commenting. It is very encouraging. Writing is my passion😅

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ohhhh intense!!!! Great update!! The idea of the media also showing up is brilliant!! Show everyone the truth!

Poor Raavi ! Hang in there just a little more

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Posted: 4 years ago

Continue continue continue continue.....😭😭😭😭😭

This was so nice the emotions that you put in your story...😘

Loved it.... cried with it..... waiting for the upcoming chapter....❤️❤️👍🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ashsamik

Continue continue continue continue.....😭😭😭😭😭

This was so nice the emotions that you put in your story...😘

Loved it.... cried with it..... waiting for the upcoming chapter....❤️❤️👍🤗


Thank you 😊🌹

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing update👏

We got the glimpse of what Shiva felt for Raavi two years ago❤️

He feelings for Laddoo was beautiful😊

Loved the way you showed Shiva's rage with every sentence of Raavi and others👏

Krish's words were perfect Shiva's tandav😊

What a perfect plan, police, media and Jandardan's security👏

Shiva's entry was terrific👏

You left on another cliffhanger, waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago

Why do you do this to us? 😭

Finally got a view into Shiva's thoughts and feelings in the two years he was away from Raavi and it just makes me love him more ❤️ His love for Shiv and Raavi is so strong and pure ❤️

His helplessness, anger and pain was expressed so well here! Raavi's suffering is profound but the last scene when she draws strength from Shiva just has my heart


Please please update soon!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ahhhh this update was so good <3

I loved how Shiva entered trailblazing and Raavi knew when he was here.

I already knew he would throw a hungama once he was there and save his queen

honestly can't believe how disgusting her ex sasural is 🤢

but it was so heartwarming to see Shiv say papa

update soon!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Absolutely loved it but this cliffhangers are killing me!!

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