Hyeeeee I'm new to the Shivi bandwagon ! I just have to say, I loveee your fic ! It has everything from pain to love, even obsession and chotu laddoo Shiv ! To see Shiva being soft with Shiv is a side pf him that even his own family haven't met yet ! I also love that the feelings between them was just a natural progression. It wasn't forced and wasn't due to duty on Shiva's side. He felt her absence in those 2 years she was gone. Anjane mein, both of them thought of only each other while they were apart and that made it much more sweeter.
I also like that they're character remains the same even after confessing their love to each other. They still fought, they still have their differences. But with all that, they also show their care and concern with each other. How Shiva scolded Raavi for Shiv and how Raavi naturally looked to him for any decisions.
You're doing a great job ! And I can feel that you love to write as it shows it the thought you put into it ! Keep writing 😊♥️