No Shaurya... No Ahir... One sided love story of laal lenga :'(

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Just for fun... I am definitely missing Shaurya and ShaKhi's confrontation alot... Hope he is well and back soon so that I can stop thinking in all other stupid directions apart from the main story...

I felt bad for dress today... Anyways... I still feel my theory of Astha kidnapping stands true... But woh Shaurya ko aise nai rakhegi😆

Here is laal lenge ki aatmakatha... It's love story... And it's love for Anokhi! ☺️


Reminds me of my school time when writing Autobiography was headache and task for marks... But now here is one stupid attempt...


I was manufactured in a small loom of Goa... To be honest, I don't have details about people who made me, nor is it important to my love story... But all I knew was that I was worth every penny for the top class material being used to make me and rich and simple design... I had a wish that a beautiful angel... Aka pari wears me and flaunts around... I had everything a woman would adore... I demanded to be displayed in the shops of Hilton Goa... And guess what!! That's Exactly what conspired... Things have always been my way... And there.... I saw my angel... Before she could see me, I had seen her rejecting some of my friends for the price tag they carried... I was little embarrassed... My tag was much higher... Afterall... I was the best choice...


She was just about to see me... But some guy called her and her attention shifted to him😡 if Anokhi was love at first site... Shaurya was hate at first sight for me...


I would never forget happiness in her eyes when she first saw... She was excited about everything she saw in me😳 but Mr. Shaurya Saberwal... Criticized me..

... She was upset with him and left without buying me😭


Aage ki story everyone who has seen SAAKK @7 knows... But let me just fill in emotional gaps..

1. I was dancing with her joyfully when she danced happily just by seeing ne in a box packed by that guy I envied..

2. I loved how she admired herself after wearing me...

3. I hated when her almost bf kept coming closing to us... But somehow I learnt to make peace with this love triangle... Then I realized there was another one too... Some Ahir... Haddh hai...

4. She continued to enjoy with me...

5. Shaurya didn't help her out when her heart broke in million pieces... On seeing him get re engaged to his ex... I could feel her broken heart... I was still with her...

6. How I wish I could have helped her when she was almost hit by car.. But this Ahir.. 🤪

7. She went to Ahir's hotel room wearing me... I was still by her side... Along with Babli and Ahir...

8. Right in front of my eyes... She told off to Mr. Saberwal to get leave her alone... I was happy knowing I had a chance with her... Ahir didn't seem like competition..



Till........


💔💔😭and it's all because of Mr. Shaurya Saberwal.... I hate him... He got me in her life.... He is the reason of my untimely demise!! I want justice... I will take rebirth and haunt him...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved the autobiography. Anokhi going round and round holding the dress made me feel I was watching some high level foreign language film where I can never understand who is doing what and why. The last shot of the dress hanging from the tree in such a tattered condition was quite scary so it is possible it can come back to avenge its gruesome demise.

They have now turned SAAKK into a whodunit. How I wish it was Aastha but she wouldn't keep him tied up like that. I don't want to rack my brains in finding out the culprit. Tomorrow we might see some Sabharwals vs Aastha and then Anokhi might go on detective mode. I feel really bad for the people behind the show. First lockdown, then the lead absent and the channel breathing down their neck with closure notice. How can they write a proper story in such a condition.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Idiotboxer

Loved the autobiography. Anokhi going round and round holding the dress made me feel I was watching some high level foreign language film where I can never understand who is doing what and why. The last shot of the dress hanging from the tree in such a tattered condition was quite scary so it is possible it can come back to avenge its gruesome demise.

They have now turned SAAKK into a whodunit. How I wish it was Aastha but she wouldn't keep him tied up like that. I don't want to rack my brains in finding out the culprit. Tomorrow we might see some Sabharwals vs Aastha and then Anokhi might go on detective mode. I feel really bad for the people behind the show. First lockdown, then the lead absent and the channel breathing down their neck with closure notice. How can they write a proper story in such a condition.


I cannot tell you... How frustrated I am with the show... How do I even not feel bad for TRPs... There have been shows facing similar situations yaar.. But other show can manage the storyline...


They are literally screwing up here... They can definitely focus on Non Shaurya track.. Not every track has to be him... Like Babli - Vineet Track or Astha-Shaan, or Devi Astha...


So many things... But stupid kidnapping track is literally 🤪 I am literally on verge of saying good bye... But then... No other show is interesting right now... What will I do for next 1 month of my free time... 🤣 haan.. Serials ke alawa in real world is stressful... But show is also on same route... And literally laal lenga seemed star today..

Edited by shahsb_26 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Show has gone for a toss. Poor execution and waste of airtime , with story not going anywhere.


What are they showing. Anokhi has become so annoying

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Watch Pakistani Serials - very nice - set number of episodes...


Watch Meer Abru if not already done!!


There are many more!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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its plain horrible !!! They are wasting air time and not progressing the show at all.. Its stuck in no man's land !!!


All characters seem to be giving half hearted attempts !!! Acting is pathetic specially Deba !! Her dresses are horrible and her look too !!! What are they doing !!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Isn't chai premi ACP back?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: bsfan

its plain horrible !!! They are wasting air time and not progressing the show at all.. Its stuck in no man's land !!!


All characters seem to be giving half hearted attempts !!! Acting is pathetic specially Deba !! Her dresses are horrible and her look too !!! What are they doing !!!


🤣 you are way more annoyed than me🤗 it's okay.. We are all in the same boat...let's just use IF to rant these frustration out...


One thing.. I do agree that they are just adding these tracks to fill in KVs absence which is wrong! They should have rather focused on getting head start on tracks related to Anokhi and uski family... Or get Vineet Babli head start for divorce... Rather than this kidnapping drama..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pighalta_Bhoot

Isn't chai premi ACP back?


He cannot do anything na🤣 he is just here to help Anokhi.. I guess..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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The question is who kidnapped Shaurya? Vineet kidnapped him. Itna lamba 6 feet ki aadmi ko aise kaise din dahare hotel premises se uthake le gaya koi? Kisiko khabar bhi nehi hua. Ajib baat hai.....aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki wo waha aaya hi na ho, koi bich raste mein hi uthake le gaya ho. Jaha tak hum Shaurya ko jante hai, wo aagar Nikki-Babli ki convo sunke disappointed ho bhi gaya, phir bhi do-chaar baatein sunake, confusion ko clear karne ki koshish zarror karta. Bande ke pyaar pe yakeen hai mujhe.


Bade papa is a cunning man. He might find out about Vineet's money concern, himself appoint people to kidnap Shaurya, frame Anokhi and her family in kidnapping and introduce them as lalchi, gold diggers. If Bade papa is involved in kidnapping, tab to trp aunties ko maaza aa jayega. Uss din Shaurya na kaha bhi tha "Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha aap log mere pith peeche kuch karne ki koshish kar rahe hai?"


Mein bhi na kiya likhe jaa rahi hu 🤣

Kekta, Gul, rashmi saare bhi shocked ho jayegi ye plot ke thoughts jaankar 🤪

Shaurya hota to definitely mujhe kehta "Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai tumhara?" 🤣


Have a fun reading, guys 😝

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