Originally posted by: ImHemangi
boommmmmπ±π±π± ππ»ππ»ππ» jabara tha ye
Thank you β€οΈ
Originally posted by: ImHemangi
boommmmmπ±π±π± ππ»ππ»ππ» jabara tha ye
Thank you β€οΈ
Loved itππ
Please continue this oneπ³
Originally posted by: cozy_vibes
oo girl i was thinking about it , coz pallavi ne last to last epi mein kaha ths ki tumse shadi karne sa better hai mein apni jann de dungi..
Exactly
I based the scene on those dialogues π
RR deserves silent treatmentπ........ stupid Don that he is........π
I really felt the dread, the way it is written "kuch der aur" ..... and then "ab bas khatam" gave me the chills...
Well written π
Will you pls continue???ππ
Haan I knew my hindi was wrong when I wrote it but couldn't guess where....
There it is"Kuch dher aur" and I had written it as 'Kuch aur dher' π€£
I'm glad you felt exactly what I tried to convey in that scene
Thanks loads for the encouragement π€
Originally posted by: blackdress
Wish pallavi gives same shock treatment in serial also, please continue
Me too
Even I want a little drama from her side instead of a meek submission
Thanks for encouraging π€
BTW... does he know that she is a widow here???π³
No I didn't want to bring it up here....
If not the repentance will loose all its charm π
Thanks for the encouragement π€
Bingo! Now I can guess the plot of the next part.....π
(Took liberty to assume you will be continuing)
Wow...i thought woh shaadi se pehle sucide karengi but i didnt make sense in my mind. and now reading this, i think this could have been a possibility.
Bingo! Now I can guess the plot of the next part.....π
(Took liberty to assume you will be continuing)
Lol had not planned a next part
But actually wanted to see it in that way in the serial but wonder what we'll be given π
Hope it's not revealed before the marriage... I really want Raghav to repent a loooooot π