ShaKhi One Shot ||Happy Birthday Nikki|| - Page 2

Dont i feel right to you ?? That was the line which hit harder i can feel the heart break and i cried reading this.

You have penned it so so beautifully.

My heart goes out to nikki but then i feel so bad for shaurya i cant pick sides.

Its really beautiful 👏👏

❤️❤️

For some time, she has walked on the same clouds that now cried of hurt. Her heart has paved the path of love, with pregnant steps but leaving strong marks behind.

Doesn’t this feel right to you?!”

“That’s the problem PS. It feels too right” Her words challenged the way her heart beat at his touch.

Oufff the feels!

Loved it Akanksha, you beautiful crazy butterfly! Keep on keepin on!😘😍😍

Breathtakingly beautiful ❤️

Literally have tears in my eyes....

Bro, WHY do you write SO BEAUTIFULLY ???

I had tears in my eyes as I read this. I guess , a warm up for today’s episode ?

simply beautiful :’)

This is so pure n so beautiful 😍😍

I almost cried with ShaKhi 🥺🥺

Akanksha you have penned it so beautifully..👏

Akanksha! 🤗 This was so beautifully written. The poignant depiction of how external factors are barring them to be with each other. They love each other dearly and it feels right to both of them.

I would dedicate these few amazing lines for the lovely electrifying couple who have my heart! ❤️

All of me from John legend -

Give your all to me

I'll give my all to you

You're my end and my beginning

Even when I lose I'm winning

'Cause I give you all of me

And you give me all of you.

Eagerly waiting to read more such amazing OS from you on the future track! Lots of love sweetheart! ❤️

Heartbreakingly beautiful. I don't know what else to say, every line of the one shot was sheer perfection.

Originally posted by: Akanksha29100

“I am not blind to not see how you went out of your way to make this day special for me” She paused, a faint smile forming over her lips

Tamaasha Bana ke rakh diya aapne mera”. This time she didn’t wipe the tears that damped her face “Sabke saamne”

@Bold They specially has my heart. Anokhi's confusion, tormenting were clearly visible & you've portrayed her problems with the perfect dialogues. Making fun of her in front of everyone, it felt the same to me too but here neither he nor she was at fault. It was the wrong timing, wrong circumstances...

His gaze softened as he slowly took her hand, his gaze lingering over her skin fo her palm over his heart, “Don’t I feel right to you?” Not caring if his eyes gave away more than he wanted to put on display, he raised his hand before meeting her gaze and gently placing it above her chest, “Doesn’t this feel right to you?"

Shaurya placing hands over each others hearts was such a soulful thing to read. When imagining these scenes the connection is real, when you're already understanding their sentiments. Nicely penned!

@Bold These dialogues were so deeply etched with what Shaurya & Anokhi has in their hearts for one another. I could literally imagine Shaurya's broken tone. There's nothing wrong in what they're feeling, its just that the moment wasn't in favour of them 😐

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A/N- Maybe it didn't came out the way I planned it to. And maybe I lost direction. But I tried. I tried my best !

Ended up having tears in my eyes 💔

I've no idea how you had initially planned this & whether it came out the same way BUT girl, this is what we all needed to read. This OS right here is heartbreaking, meaningful & feels at peace.

The elements of sadness, sympathy, anger, irritation, smiling through tears, faking emotions & the whole package is present & thanks for writing this beautiful story ❤️

Do keep on writing such great stories!

Originally posted by: smileonandon

Perfect, finished with pain in my heart and tears in my eyes

And I have to say that I am glad about it 🙈😆

Thanks for reading 🤗

Originally posted by: Juwii29

“Don’t I feel right to you?”

Don’t talk to me. I’m crying like a baby.

My beautiful talented Aku! How I love you so much! There’s no other person that puts me in my feels than you do, I swear! The heartbreak that I wanted. The pain I wanted to feel. My heart was clenching. Everything in me was breaking for both.

I love you. 💔🥺😭

Juwiiiiiiii🤗🤗

You have been so kind to me always and the way you motivate me and appreciate my efforts, Its beyond my-

What do I say more?! I absolutely adore you....you beautiful human ! ❤️

Err...okay I love you too. Now get lost.