ShaKhi TS| Jo Tera Hoyega (completed) | - Page 3

Originally posted by: Dafoodiles

Woww..the 💗💗

Thank you❤️

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Amazing start

Anokhi left for Kapurthala leaving Shaurya heartbroken😒

Hope she realise soon her love for him nd come back

Cont soon

Thank you so much...i'm happy that you are liking the concept😳

And don't worry 'jo uska hai uske pas jarur ayega'

I will update soon...stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: richi4sonu

next part jaldi dena. cant wait for Anokhi to get offthat train and run into Shaurya's arms

Lol nice observation😆

Thank for reading....will update soon👍🏼

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Hey jyoti,

Hey choco chips🤗

So this was so beautifully written. Shaurya & Anokhi's feelings, how deep their relationship is with regards to their bond of friendship is what I really liked. After 3 whole yrs Shaurya confessed his feelings to her & obviously Anokhi would be in shock. Best friends hiding feelings from eo theory eh?

Thank you so much dear ❣️ yup he has feelings for her but on the same time she considers him friend only as she never thought about love...that was the main reason behind her shocking state👍🏼

Anyway.. When you went on writing about Anokhi telling Shaurya about leaving Chandigarh, I was expecting him to barsao his stupid comments on her as ush 😆 That's such a Shaurya thing to do! Then her realisation was so nice.

Haha yes😆 these little things describe his character...the way gets angry even in normal situation too😂

When it came to Shaurya's feelings, I didn't want Anokhi to rightaway return back to him but read the right amount of emotions like you had written for Anokhi & you had written it well too. His constant battling, controlling his senses were sad. Hope you'll write the next part soon 😊

Thanks 💞 for noticing those little things. And glad that you liked this chapter ❣️

As i mentioned i have already written the part...as i was planning to post it as an os but then it was getting long so i divided 😂

I will post next one soon...stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Okay I need lots of gaali for reading this so late but you know me...😎 I am kacchua ... me is turtle 😎

Le me-🤣

So here I go,

TICKETS? SAMAAN PACK? God this reminds me of the time I had to pack my bags from Hostel and head back home 😭 It was SO PAINFUL! 🥺

Yup tickets and smaan pack...she is going🤪 what? This reminds you hostal? Acha nahi lg raha tha kya ghar ja ri ho😆

Hmm so SS took time to confess his feelings .. Good and she said NO?😭 Poor SS 🥺

No kehna hi tha because she don't feels the same...or may be not🤪

OMG! Please I can't see this happening 😭 I am crying already 😭

It is so painful for both of them and trust me I can totally relate with them... you have written it beautifully! 😭

Awww please don't cry🙊🙊 yup they are not gonna meet each other on regular basis toh they are feeling pain😭

Baapre.. poor Shaurya ... He seems to be so low.. ye padhke mai khud dukhi ho gayi hu 😭

Jyoti 😡

Obviously he will feel low... because uska dusra pyar bhi adhoora hone ki kagaar pe h😂😂

Kya hai? Ghoor mat🤭🤭

Next part me happy ending honi chahiye

Dekhnege...sochenge🤪

Waiting

You are amazing and you know that already 😎🤗

*Flipping my hair*🤭😂

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Res

Sorry, Having a busy day 😬

Unres!

Woah!

Jyoti this is a very interesting concept and you have me glued! I'm already excited to see what happens when Anokhi goes back home and how ia Shaurya going to bring her back 🤩🤩

Aww thank you Akshu❣️ me too excited to see what happens next. Let's see kon kiske paas ata hai🤪

Special mention to the description of how they have grown from their fights! Reading about their friendship makes me wish for an elaborate dating phase for them ❤️❤️

And as usual your writing is just fab! The way you have written it shows how well thought out it is 😍😍

Awww you are such a sweetheart ❣️ you never forget to appreciate the way i described the things

..thank you so much buddy🤗

Wishing to see some of their scenes like this on the screen too

Originally posted by: RaitaPhailGaya1

plz continue

Yup i will... stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: Abhipyaarhua

Beautifully written, girl. I loved reading this. Shaurya and Anokhi becoming friends and then Shaury falling in love but Nikki's denial. Ahhh everything makes sense and is wonderfully written.

I can't wait to read the next part. Hope you update soon.

Keep writing 💕🌼

Awww so sweet of you.. thank you so much❣️❣️ glad that you liked the concept...

I will update today evening...stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic story

Shaurya loves anokhi but anokhi doesn’t

I’m feeling bad for shaurya

Please update soon

Thank you so much❤️

Hopefully she will love him too🤪

Stay tuned for the next update👍🏼

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Ohhhh so sad...but interesting turn of events...looking forward to see what they would do😊

I'm so glad that you liked it❤️

Thank you so much for reading....stay tuned for the update👍🏼