ShaKhi TS| Jo Tera Hoyega (completed) |

It was so beautifully written that my eyes got brimmed! Can't wait to read the next part!!❤️

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This is so beautifully written Jyoti🤗

Loved how you explained the connection in the beginning and about the mended father daughter relationship. I was so thrilled to read that Ramesh accepted Anokhi😁

Shaurya’s pain of yet another incomplete love was really heartbreaking to imagine 🥺Nikki’s battle between the head and the heart and these two being guilty of rejecting the proposal and spoiling the friendship respectively was too evident.

But we know "Jo tera Hoyega, Zaroor Aayega"

Waiting for the next part already. Do update soon❤️

Also, can I call you Jo?🙈

Amazing start

Anokhi left for Kapurthala leaving Shaurya heartbroken😒

Hope she realise soon her love for him nd come back

Cont soon

Okay I need lots of gaali for reading this so late but you know me...😎 I am kacchua ... me is turtle 😎

So here I go,

TICKETS? SAMAAN PACK? God this reminds me of the time I had to pack my bags from Hostel and head back home 😭 It was SO PAINFUL! 🥺

Hmm so SS took time to confess his feelings .. Good and she said NO?😭 Poor SS 🥺

OMG! Please I can't see this happening 😭 I am crying already 😭

It is so painful for both of them and trust me I can totally relate with them... you have written it beautifully! 😭

Baapre.. poor Shaurya ... He seems to be so low.. ye padhke mai khud dukhi ho gayi hu 😭

Jyoti 😡

Next part me happy ending honi chahiye

Waiting

You are amazing and you know that already 😎🤗

next part jaldi dena. cant wait for Anokhi to get offthat train and run into Shaurya's arms

Hey jyoti,

So this was so beautifully written. Shaurya & Anokhi's feelings, how deep their relationship is with regards to their bond of friendship is what I really liked. After 3 whole yrs Shaurya confessed his feelings to her & obviously Anokhi would be in shock. Best friends hiding feelings from eo theory eh?

Anyway.. When you went on writing about Anokhi telling Shaurya about leaving Chandigarh, I was expecting him to barsao his stupid comments on her as ush 😆 That's such a Shaurya thing to do! Then her realisation was so nice.

When it came to Shaurya's feelings, I didn't want Anokhi to rightaway return back to him but read the right amount of emotions like you had written for Anokhi & you had written it well too. His constant battling, controlling his senses were sad. Hope you'll write the next part soon 😊

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Sorry, Having a busy day 😬

Unres!

Woah!

Jyoti this is a very interesting concept and you have me glued! I'm already excited to see what happens when Anokhi goes back home and how ia Shaurya going to bring her back 🤩🤩🤩

Special mention to the description of how they have grown from their fights! Reading about their friendship makes me wish for an elaborate dating phase for them ❤️❤️

And as usual your writing is just fab! The way you have written it shows how well thought out it is 😍😍

Beautifully written, girl. I loved reading this. Shaurya and Anokhi becoming friends and then Shaury falling in love but Nikki's denial. Ahhh everything makes sense and is wonderfully written.

I can't wait to read the next part. Hope you update soon.

Keep writing 💕🌼

Fantastic story

Shaurya loves anokhi but anokhi doesn’t

I’m feeling bad for shaurya

Please update soon