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Posted: 5 years ago
#11

Confrontation!! My fav thing to read!! 👍🏼

I love it when you make these characters actually talk with each other, show main to bus ayen byen shayen hi krty rehty (means bus jb bhi frame main hoty hain to idhr udhr hi bol k chl dety aagy)

Abhi I'm not watching show, update kbhi kbhi read krlety....mera dil to itna bada toota tha na k aankhain aisy khul gyin k sara craze khtm hogya!!💔💔 Never thought k aisa hoga?? If I was busy in the day to mjhy sab say pehly yh hota tha episode k liye time nikalna hai jaisy agr main nhin dekhoongi to pta nhi kya hojayega??🤣 Itna time invest krny k bad mjhy akl aye k hua to kuch nhin end main main hi hurt hui 🤪 Yh to apki meherbani hai, trust me k buri memories nhim hain in characters ki😭

Mjhy yh smjh nhin aaty k itni bakwas or tashan bazi krny k bajaye bta dain aik doosry ko kya masla hai?? Ya agr nhin bta skty to uski koi reason di jaye!! Khair Masha Allah say humary Cvs k oopar waly hissy main bhoosa (hay) bhara hua hai...unka bhi fault nhi...🤣😡

Ab to bura bhi nhin lgta k kya krdiya inhon ny most fav characters k sath.....yar ap bhi mat socho zada inki bewakoofana harkaat k bary main!!😳

Coming to OS, i really really loved how both put forward their points!

Vansh did wrong....instigating her to tell her truth??

Wrong move!! Pehly say hi things aren't going fine between you guys and then further bring 3rd person to humiliate your parther! Us say to further door hi hogi na woh!! How complicated is this to understand!! Kbhi yh proverb nhin suni

"Zurroorat k waqt gadhe ko bhi baap banana padta hai!!" 🤣If he wants truth from her to shi say mangy na, tashan bazi dikhany ka kya mtlb hai...chlo she is playing a game na...woh to nhin kar rha tha na...woh to normal rhy...woh bhi aisy behave kr rha jaisy aik doosry k husband wife nhin opponents hon...Donon hi immature hain!!!!😡

Phirr Vansh k points bhi kafi had tk valid hai!! She is also meeting with another person at night and alone to woh bhi kuch ghlt mtlb to nikal skta tha but usny nhin nikala kyun k us waqt usko woh riddhima lg hi nhin rhi thy lekin if he was sure at that time k she is his wife phirr shak krta ya nhin?? Does he really trust her to that level?

Vihaan waly bat kuch hazam nhin hui!! Woh to mana krty hi thi usy...wohi barh barh k flirt kr rha tha!! Ab throwing it her face! 🤔

Apny actions ki koi justification hi nhin hoty in k pass na hi dety!! Bus roz kehty rehty hain mai yh krskta, main yh krskti, main tumhra, tum meri?? Kya?? Mtlb kya?? Sirf jismani had tk hi na?? Kyun k husband and wife they make it a point k har khushi, har dukh, har pareshani main doosry ka farz or haq hai k woh help kry ya atleast sun hi lay?? 😔

Mjhy to us bachy bechary par tars aata hai?? Kya soojhi thi Cvs ko isko dalny ki??🤪 Na riddhima ko padi hai uski,vansh ko bhi situationally yad aajata k bacha bhi hai or ghar walon ko to waisy hi nhin padi?🤪

Actually CVS drama nhi bna rhy they are doing a research k kis had tk audience shit tolerate kreygi??🤣 Triple blinded trial (blinding is a technique used in research, in this na subject ko pta hota, na experiment krny waly ko or na analyst ko ho kya rhy...they just follow the steps)

To bus na CVS ko pta hai, na vansh ko, na riddhima ko or na audience ko!! Kisi ka POV to dikhaaya krain na to get an understanding k ho kya rha!! Just frame set kr k characters ko khara krdety!! Inko drama bnana hi nhin aata😭 Rrahel k liye bhi nhin dekha jata mjh say to!! I hope and really hope one day we get to see them in a story with more substance!!😭

Good job 👍🏼 I really like the confrontation and conversations you write up!! Shows how much mature and logical you are as a writer and also real main bhi hogi hi tabhi to you can come up with such pieces!! I admire such qualities in people!!❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#12

Very well written.....

I am so pissed with the current plot... It's utter Shit.. A chewing gum I could say... Come on VR cannot get weak.. And how can someone change in just a mere 6 hours... That too a pregnant lady.. Shashu has lost it.. I pity the actors.. They are doing so much for the show.. And these writers are not using their brain...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#13

they are too much into eachother that they sometime forget who the other person is. they just keep thinking about eachother's well being while forgetting that more than well being a person need companionship.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#14

Actually I think we all are pissed off right now.... They are just somehow dragging the show....i am just watching it for rrahel because ab toh riansh bhi dekhne ko nhi milta.....

After the note I can totally understand the feeling..... We are on the same page...

This one shot is brilliant.... They should have these confrontation more often ....

Wonderdul update...

Thanks

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Posted: 5 years ago
#15

All they have to do is talk and get over with it...but ...these idiots...😡

Nahi sudhregi...

btw...I loved it...baat ko badane ke RiAnsh se seekho...lolz..what started as lil rile up ended tiring each other..I loved it ...

😚🤗


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Posted: 5 years ago
#16

Thank you Gur for this amazing update

Really this made me cry ..Tears on my eyes..😭😭

U made it 😒

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Posted: 5 years ago
#17

Confrontation was bomb man🔥🔥🔥🔥

As I said both are high class kameenas for each other. None of them are Saints and are no less than each other in making mistakes n betraying. But have guts to accuse each other none the less.

NOTE : ME TOO🙋🏻‍♀️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

I fcking hate this. Even in FFs we still can't get them to make up. And why ? Because to us, after all that they've been through and are going through, we can't see any other way for them to make up 🤬


Thank you, thank you so much for understanding the point of view of my fic ! This is exactly what I was trying to convey and in a way yours also kinda gave a picture of what I want to say. I hate this track. I hate that Vansh brought up the past. I'm not defending Riddhima, but she was helpless from 2 out of those 3 men. Only with Vyom she's doing all this with her eyes wide open. But Vansh ? F*ck dude DELIBERATELY brought these other women between them. Either it was the secret of Ragini's death when he tried to mislead her that Karwachauth night, bringing Ahana the f*cking tramp sl*t as his supposed wife and now Kiara ? All for what? Just to get a reaction out of his wife ? It was humiliating, even for me just to watch !!! As a woman, imagine standing in between your half naked husband and a tramp trying to seduce him. It's okay if he defends you, but he's encouraging that stupid b*tch ? No just no. I was damn well about to skip this show for that. Ughhhh so frustrating !


Great job as always in voicing out most of the viewers point of view ! The way you emote both their feelings, even when you claim you can't connect to them as well as before is such a treat to watch ! Please please never stop writing about them. Be it about past Riansh where all this filth is nonexistant, just don't stop ! Your stories are the forum fandoms saviour ♥️🥺🎉🎊🥺♥️


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Posted: 5 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Sgayuiyer

Amazing gur 🤗❤️

Thanks Gayu ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: missriley

given how she's added such a short note at the beginning, you can clearly tell Gur's pissed lmao


this is amazing<3

Thank you!

Also sorry for last night. I didn't mean to use your reply as a way to vent. I was just too frustrated last night.

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