SAIRAT OS : Love and trust - Page 2

It's amazing loved it you written it beautifully.

Originally posted by: notaquitter

thanks for the lovely feedback :) what ending did you expect?

Firstly, the start too was an unexpected one. Didn't expect them to sit close, for him to confess. Was all a surprise ❤️.

The way the story kept going forward, didn't expect Sai to say, she wants to stand in her own legs, loved that part. The story ended for me here, sorry 😆❤.

Though it ended for me 😂, I read further and I didn't expect Virat to give her time and tell that he will wait for her. I also didn't expect her leaning on his shoulders ❤❤.

It was filled with surprising elements for me.

Originally posted by: laksh

Firstly, the start too was an unexpected one. Didn't expect them to sit close, for him to confess. Was all a surprise ❤️.

The way the story kept going forward, didn't expect Sai to say, she wants to stand in her own legs, loved that part. The story ended for me here, sorry 😆❤.

Though it ended for me 😂, I read further and I didn't expect Virat to give her time and tell that he will wait for her. I also didn't expect her leaning on his shoulders ❤❤.

It was filled with surprising elements for me.

It starts with them being away for few days. Sai has rehashed her feelings and comes to a conclusion. So I didn’t want to show the anger from her side . Also despite what happened they love and miss each other badly. Hence craving the physical closeness even when they should be angry

Haha I can’t bring myself to write an OS that doesn’t have some future for them. I just can’t. I feel when you have a complete hold of what you want and what you can fight against. Everything becomes clear.

In my POV for this story

Sai is in love with Virat and she can’t shake that feeling but she knows she can’t be dependent and vulnerable like before. Virat is it for her and she tried to shake it off but didn’t so she accepted it.
For Virat he knows no amount of apology and justification from his part will erase the hurt, except for giving her the space and time to heal and do her thing. He wants her to lead how she wants the relationship to move forward. He chose to let go for now

Beautiful OS😍

Emotionally beautifully written

Did not expect Sai will confess her love too

And Virat said I will wait for you😍

And the ending beautiful Love it❤❤❤

Sai's expectations were perfect.nice one.

Wow awesome OS dear

Loved it

It's true love without trust that relationship cannot sustain

Nice OS.

Actually this is a perfect ending or I should say logical beginning.

Coz when they come together after all this, it will not be because of deal but because they want to be together ❤️

Originally posted by: sukri

Nice OS.

Actually this is a perfect ending or I should say logical beginning.

Coz when they come together after all this, it will not be because of deal but because they want to be together ❤️

Yeah they will be on equal footing. I am a sucker for sairat ending , so I have to atleast leave a thread for future reconciliation:)

Beautifully written!!!

PS: ughhh Idk why I am tagging wrong people! (Sorry)

Superb.....lovely.....wonderful......👏 😍 😍

Beautifully written.....loved it a lot...👏 ❤

They had a heart to heart talk...... they understand each other...... so Beautiful....

Keep writing more....