24/03/21 A Jeeva Shiva SS part16 p. 33 epilogue p.34 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Got it....😊 waise awesome ss..

Just read chapter 12 now... I loved this improvement in virat and pakhi... That's actually nice... Your wonderful writer... I guess it's samrat and vineeth ka mili bagath I love how vineeth make Kaku shutto bring virat and Didi in line..🤣🤣i so wish sai is also part of this kandh ,I don't know why🤣🤣

I also loved writing specifically those dialogues that are about Vineet and Bhavani.

Hmm. Let me add something in the part 12 about Sai. I won't be able to do much, but I'll try. Let me modify a bit😉

So there is some connection btw vineet and Sam

Is vinnet grey or is he also part of the plan of Sam.?

Waiting to see how this unfolds ?

Lat line,

man that have my attention

lovely update

OMG love it yaar😍 amazing

Twist pe twist😆

Lagta hai yeh Dr Vineet aur Samrat ka plan hai

Looking forward to read next chapter😁

Great !!!!

It was awesome.. Ninad's dialogue "dhol bhi sahi hai"🤣...sry for commenting hilariously in the serious one but I couldn't stop😁😂

Glad to read that everything is clear and guilt of Virat and Pakhi has been out !!!

U have written it in a very different way...loved it!!😍

But as always u end up with a great twist...👍🏼...waiting for the next one eagerly coz the last one" missed me?"has left many unanswered questions... Please continue soon💜!!!

Happy Writing❤❤❤

Made a little modifications. you can read it again.

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

So there is some connection btw vineet and Sam

Is vinnet grey or is he also part of the plan of Sam.?

Waiting to see how this unfolds ?

Originally posted by: maahi11

Lat line,

man that have my attention

lovely update

Well, that was intended to hold attention😆

Thankyou.

Originally posted by: Tasu06

OMG love it yaar😍 amazing

Twist pe twist😆

Lagta hai yeh Dr Vineet aur Samrat ka plan hai

Looking forward to read next chapter😁

Fir se khush kar diya aapne with this update.

Chalo Virat and Pakhi mein sudhar aaya.

Vineet villian hain ya pyarost 😉?