HIS PRECIOUS POSSESSION - HIS WIFE | PART 14 to 24 UPDATED @ P.N.4 - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
#21

Parts 5 & 6


Awesome , Panic and Tensed


Geet had lost her memory from childhood

but doctor tells Maan that Geet's brain is basically taking a rest from all

the stress and problems she underwent

Geet when she calls out Saheb because Maan told her so

still he gets happy with that

and when his tears were seen by her she asked him why is he crying

making Maan realize even now his Jaan cannot leave him

Dadima learned everything about Geet and was sad

and she tells Geet that she is married to Maan

and Geet accepts that too

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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

Parts 7 & 8


Relief , Pain and Fantastic Updates


Its only Maan and Dadima that loves and cares for Geet

while she has always been innocent and her kindness has always been there

though Annie scolded her and was very rude with Geet

later Geet wanted to eat with the family and again only she receives their hatred

Maan though does not mean to put fear into Geet but his love and possessiveness

makes him angry at the fact that his mother and sister cannot leave Geet in peace

even now when he tells them she is his wife

and wow he even told his mother he loves Geet

but none can see the change in him all are just seeing that she is not rich like them


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Posted: 5 years ago
#23

Part 5

Thank God Geet gained consciousness

of cos Maan is relieved

oh no she does not recognise him

Maan is shocked and worried

the doc questions Maan

Gosh she lost her memory

feeling for Maan

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Posted: 5 years ago
#24

Part 6

emotional update

feeling for Maan and Geet

sad that Geet lost her memory

she is shocked that she is married

dadima is worried about Geet

Maan tells her what happened

of cos Maan is shattered

at least feels that she knows dadima

dadima is happy

she tells Geet that Maan is her husband

liked that Geet accepted this

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

Part 7 and 8

nice update, well written

so she is affected by his touch

liked her innocent confession

Maan is embarrassed

he is concerned about her

awesome moments

she is happy

of cos he is happy not seeing her

hate how Annie treats her

feeling for Geet

Thank God Maan came and shouted Annie

loved that Maan assures her

glad that Maan slapped Annie

his mom was angry

but Maan was correct! Geet is his wife and Annie should respect her

loved Maan response to his mom

he married Geet as he loves her

Maan takes care of Geet

despite what Annie did, Geet tells Maan he should not have spoken to Annie like that

sad that Geet feels she did something to Annie

nice that Maan teases Geet

Hate Annie

Maan's anger is understandable

Geet is so innocent

oh no she is unwell

she is scared of Maan

great that comforts her

Edited by khwaishfan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Parts 9 & 10


Fabulous and Feisty


Maan and Geet still in the car when he kisses her

and her innocent demand makes him chuckle only to make

Geet annoyed and she leaves the car walking on the road alone

rain came and Geet enjoyed herself while Maan admired his beautiful innocent wife

knowing it could be dangerous Maan ask the villagers for a place for the night

and this scares Geet but Maan also wants her to come out of her fears

she now gets angry something that is new for him but I like her it

when she gets angry

Geet wanting to put mendhi and Maan finally allows her only to see her happy

but later at night she was having a fever worrying Maan

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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Parts 11 & 12


Superbly Awesome with Romance


Maan already tried calling for a doctor but due to the fact that his cell had no signal

he had to use body heat to get his Jaan normal

and seeing her for the very first time naked before him he admires her beauty

but hearing her and seeing her getting so cold Maan instantly

decides to give her his body heat and thankfully she did get normal

however he loses himself in her and forgets that because of her weak body

she cannot handle his passion and cries but I'm glad that Maan stops himself

every time he hears Geet's sobs

Geet now at the Temple remembers getting married to her Saheb

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Part 13


Fantastic and so Fascinating


I think that with Geet studying she is also slowly gaining confidence

within herself

I liked that when she heard the door bang close she did not get scared

and it does make Maan proud

every small step Geet takes in progress Maan gets happy

Mrs Singh is also back to teach Geet

Maan and Geet are now staying in the Outhouse and he is happy

about this fact because they have freedom to do anything any where

Maan wants Geet to stop calling Saheb and that will be great but now

he just forgot about Geet's condition and mentions about her been a maid

which now she remembers her time as a maid with the Khuranas

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

9to 13...

All parts were nice...

Geet is very weak to handle any stress...

Village scenario were too good...

Maan has become a very good husband...

Again geet studies started...

Annie & her mom still don't like her..

BTW, where is Rajeev?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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