ShaKhi OS || The Luckiest Man - Page 7

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Aww.. Since morning & afternoon has passed I'll say you made my evening happy 😆💛

This is just what I needed to read in the aspect related to a confession. The Shaurya you've depicted is exactly the confused bean in the show, who at one time thinks he has started liking Anokhi & the next he might love her 🤣

I liked the way in which Anokhi let Shaurya speak & it felt bad seeing her vulnerability, trying to hide her tears but when she kissed him, taking him by shock I was like 'yeayyyy....!!!!!' 🥳

My fav dialogues were Shaurya telling her that 'people' tells him that he likes her & the confession of Anokhi. Made me go awww ☺💜

Less like a Hot OS, more like a heartfelt one with an amalgamation of the sweetest feelings ☺️ Now seeing KV's receny insta stories, it feels as if he'll meet her in her hostel (Hope he's not there for just relaxing LOL 😂😆) & say sorry or smtn. But it was easy to imagine this OS happening right there

Great stuff, so adorable & waiting for that kicka** holi OS too!!!

Awwwwww

I totally love reading your reviews they make my day too 😆❤️

Anokhi, yes.. I definitely enjoy girls being a bit shy in front of the guy but i love it when the girl makes a bold move when it is required 😆

I wanted to portray how she was able to understand him all this while and finally confessed confidently that she loves him 'too'😆

Yes, this was an emotional one..😆 that's why no warning 🤪

I am really hoping for a nice scene in hostel room now ❤️

Yes, I'm working on the Holi OS 😆 Hope I'll finish it soonish 😳

Thanks a lot for your review 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: deepshiii

Unres..

Rimi, you know, right? how much I love reading your stories💗

Damn, the dilemma and the emotions here🥲 I’m awestruck as always Everything was perfect. Super dreamy and yet so real

The actions were opposite of the words and the reactions. Awesome. I wasn’t expecting Anokhi’s confession but I was like aww, the girl has understood what dear PS is saying and running from😳

I’m still waiting for the Holi OS because I’m very sure that’ll be very sizzling hot😎😆Looking forward to read it supersoon🤗❤️

Deeps 😳🤗❤️

Thank you so much 😳 glad u liked it

Yes he was in denial state 😆 but Ano is a smart girl, understands her PS well 🤣

Yes.. Holi OS is in Progress 😉🤪🤗

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Wow 😍

I've fallen in love with this OS. It was heartwarming as well as emotional.

Hats off to your bhavishya vaani dear. 👏

Every sentence, every word had the essence of ShaKhi. Shaurya's inner tumult, his denial, his longing, his undying want to feel belonged, his gravitation towards Anokhi.......you portrayed them gracefully.

Coming to Anokhi, your words were literally breathing out Anokhi with utmost grace.

Their conversation was so organic.... loved it. ShaKhi chemistry ka toh infinite points. And, I should say, way of representation was ❤️.

Thanks for such a lovely OS.🤗

Would love to read more from you. 😊

More power to your pen.

Ohh that's so sweet of you 🤗❤️

Thank you so much for dropping your encouraging comment 😳❤️

While writing I really try my best to connect with the readers ❤️

So happy to see that you liked it so much 🤗

I'll write more 😳👍🏼

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Wow...what can I say? You did it again...that was just astonishing💖🌹...Shaurya so hesistant to voice out his feelings but not hesistant at all to act on it😉...Anokhi unique as always & not such a tubelight any more🤭...thank heavens...such cuties...and since it is open-ended my thoughts are running in all directions😊😅🤣...that was a lovely read...thnx

Thanks 😳 glad I did not disappoint 😆

Yes Shaurya has just one problem and that's his resistance to accept things 😆 Baaki he always acts as per his feelings 🤣

Yes i kept it open ended so that everyone can end this in their own creative ways 😉😆

Originally posted by: richi4sonu

omg.i loved it. Hope sooner ir later we get this kind of scene in hostel also.

Thanks a ton 🤗

Me too hoping the same 👍🏼

Originally posted by: kin8

Wow I loved anokhi’s confession. It’s beautifully written and so hot.

Thanks for your comment 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Nidhi14

Rimi this is so beautiful.😳I was actually seeing it happening.☺️ This is going to be my all time favourite OS. Keep writing. 🤗

Thanks a lot Nidhi 😳 that means a lot! ❤️

Originally posted by: -Fedex-

Rimi! 🤗 What a beautiful OS!! Just amazing! I loved the Anokhi here. She has understood his feelings and ramblings so well. His actions and words don’t corroborate the same story! He is so scared of not being around her that he ended up at the hostel. It was bound to happen. Keep writing more! Thoroughly loving it! Lots of love ❤️

Aww thank you 🤗

Yes I want Anokhi to be more understanding towards his feelings because he himself is not so good at it 😆 I am glad you could get what I wanted to show... thanks a lot! ❤️

Originally posted by: Nan_ArHi

Wow! Just WOW! Enjoyed reading. ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Sakshi_04

Awwww

Rimi awesome ❤️ yr kitna pyaara tha ye !!!!! Thankyou so much for this beautiful os!!!

Thank you so much for your comments guys! 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Rimi,what a fantastic work yet again

Tam tah bahut heavy writer ho bhai

Ek se badh kar ek dhaasu patakho ki bauchhar ho raha hain iss forum pe, meri khawashiyen puri karne ke liye shukraan dost

Mujhe yaad hain maine cc pe ekbaar zikr kiya tha ki Shakhi pe kuchh likho , and look how astoundingly you've lived up to the expectations

Kahaani ke baareme zyada kuch nahi keh paungi! It was very surreal and smooth , ek hi saans mein padh liya maine

The transitions from disappointment and annoyance to confusion, to complains and possessiveness , to dubiety and inhibitions , to confessions amidst denial,to the warm and mellow unpredictable intimacy , to acceptance and elation , to an ambience full of love

Shaurya sudh budh kho chuka hain voh.A College director trespassing and sneeking into the room of a fellow student and doing ! Aur kya kaha usne , " Maine warden ko hire kiya hain"

"Dekho Anokhi , kisine dekh liya toh problem ho jayegi"

Accha he knows?

"Guilty pleasure" ke liye people become khatron ke khiladi

And how come Anokhi is so receptive and welcome to his touches and words

"She immediately clung onto his shirt not wanting to let him go"

Buttery twacha ke consequences , leading to digging her fingers in his soft hairs☺️

Matlab,you're my student you're my student karte karte.....

Koi toh rokh lo, aisa hi chaltah raha toh bohut jaldi

Anyways, Beyhadh mazaa a gaya padhkar .

Aur last mein " thank you for making me the luckiest man in the world".

You're indeed lucky to have been blessed with such a wonderful talent of writing

With love and gratitude

Awww Koyal meri sweetie pie ❤️ Thank you so much! Kitni baar bolu bol bol ke thak gayi hu that I love u so much 🤗❤️

Yes.. Shaurya was acting like a confused soul shuru se hi 🤣🤣 usko bas andar ghusna tha room ke samjha karo 😉

Actually u know what, when I left the other show, i thought mere pyaar readers chhoot gaye 😭 But I am so lucky that you chose to follow this show and hence u r here to read my work as well 🤗❤️

PS: Butter jaisi Twacha is forever in my mind whenever I see him on screen! I mean it, forever! 🤣