ShaKhi OS || The Luckiest Man - Page 3

Wow 😍

I've fallen in love with this OS. It was heartwarming as well as emotional.

Hats off to your bhavishya vaani dear. 👏

Every sentence, every word had the essence of ShaKhi. Shaurya's inner tumult, his denial, his longing, his undying want to feel belonged, his gravitation towards Anokhi.......you portrayed them gracefully.

Coming to Anokhi, your words were literally breathing out Anokhi with utmost grace.

Their conversation was so organic.... loved it. ShaKhi chemistry ka toh infinite points. And, I should say, way of representation was ❤️.

Thanks for such a lovely OS.🤗

Would love to read more from you. 😊

More power to your pen.

Wow...what can I say? You did it again...that was just astonishing💖🌹...Shaurya so hesistant to voice out his feelings but not hesistant at all to act on it😉...Anokhi unique as always & not such a tubelight any more🤭...thank heavens...such cuties...and since it is open-ended my thoughts are running in all directions😊😅🤣...that was a lovely read...thnx

omg.i loved it. Hope sooner ir later we get this kind of scene in hostel also.

Wow I loved anokhi’s confession. It’s beautifully written and so hot.

Rimi this is so beautiful.😳I was actually seeing it happening.☺️ This is going to be my all time favourite OS. Keep writing. 🤗

Rimi! 🤗 What a beautiful OS!! Just amazing! I loved the Anokhi here. She has understood his feelings and ramblings so well. His actions and words don’t corroborate the same story! He is so scared of not being around her that he ended up at the hostel. It was bound to happen. Keep writing more! Thoroughly loving it! Lots of love ❤️

Wow! Just WOW! Enjoyed reading. ❤️❤️

Awwww

Rimi awesome ❤️ yr kitna pyaara tha ye !!!!! Thankyou so much for this beautiful os!!!

Rimi,what a fantastic work yet again

Tam tah bahut heavy writer ho bhai

Ek se badh kar ek dhaasu patakho ki bauchhar ho raha hain iss forum pe, meri khawashiyen puri karne ke liye shukraan dost

Mujhe yaad hain maine cc pe ekbaar zikr kiya tha ki Shakhi pe kuchh likho , and look how astoundingly you've lived up to the expectations

Kahaani ke baareme zyada kuch nahi keh paungi! It was very surreal and smooth , ek hi saans mein padh liya maine

The transitions from disappointment and annoyance to confusion, to complains and possessiveness , to dubiety and inhibitions , to confessions amidst denial,to the warm and mellow unpredictable intimacy , to acceptance and elation , to an ambience full of love

Shaurya sudh budh kho chuka hain voh.A College director trespassing and sneeking into the room of a fellow student and doing ! Aur kya kaha usne , " Maine warden ko hire kiya hain"

"Dekho Anokhi , kisine dekh liya toh problem ho jayegi"

Accha he knows?

"Guilty pleasure" ke liye people become khatron ke khiladi

And how come Anokhi is so receptive and welcome to his touches and words

"She immediately clung onto his shirt not wanting to let him go"

Buttery twacha ke consequences , leading to digging her fingers in his soft hairs☺️

Matlab,you're my student you're my student karte karte.....

Koi toh rokh lo, aisa hi chaltah raha toh bohut jaldi

Anyways, Beyhadh mazaa a gaya padhkar .

Aur last mein " thank you for making me the luckiest man in the world".

You're indeed lucky to have been blessed with such a wonderful talent of writing

With love and gratitude

Beautifully penned... lovely portrayal of emotions. Great narrative... 😍