Mamta OS (Rajvi + Shobhit)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hello!

Another one from me!

This is a very short one shot (it rhymes!😆)


It's a Rajvi-Shobhit duo story.

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Title: Mamta.


Note: italics is Rajvi's thought process.

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Rajvi paced across her room. A particular issue had been persistently nagging her.


'I just don't get it. Why am I so hard on Shobu? Darsh is fine and I am so proud of him! Why can't I be proud of Shobhit too?

I mean, hasn't he apologized a hundred times to all of us? I do know that he repents that day and that he still feels guilty. Maybe it human nature to hold onto one single mistake of others and ignore all the good they have in them. I can't believe I fell for that bias. Why!'


Her thoughts raced and she was in a fix that hadn't been untangled in 3 years.

Someone calling her name brought her out of her introspection.


"Ma, Darsh bhaiya apko bula rahe hai."

Called a voice that so couldn't ignore, not this time. For the past 3 years she had been ignoring him, treating him less than a son, as if he didn't matter, as if he was no one. But her heart ached and she had no clue as to why she behaved in such a way but she knew it had to stop. She reprimanded herself for being such a poor excuse of a mother. She had to make amends, it was now or never. She had been treating him in a way no mother should ever treat her child.


She had come back to her senses.


She went out of her room as quickly as her steps could take her, going in direction of his voice. A few more steps and she stood right behind him as he typed away on the phone unknown to what life was going to give him next.


In a swift movement Rajvi turned him to face her and his face immediately contorted into a visibly fearful one and squeezed his eyes shut. He couldn't see her anger and hatred reflecting on her face anymore. He prayed to Dwarkadheesh to save him from his mother's wrath and the lord did just that.


The next moment he was enveloped in a warm embrace. He stood still wondering if this was a dream and that it would vanish once he woke up.


But it wasn't.


His mother, who he had believed to be a stone cold lady, especially towards him, was hugging him. She was sobbing heavily indicating by her trembling self. He quickly wrapped his hands around his mother's back and cherished the moment lest it would be snatched away from him.


"Shobu, I am sorry. I am so so so sorry beta. Mujhe maaf kardo. Meri mamta pe parda padh gaya tha ki maine apne dusre bete ko struggle karte hue nahi dekha. Bas uski galtiya hi dikhi mujhe har baar."


Her voice quavered as she expressed her feelings, almost plead for him to forgive her.


"Shh shh ma it's okay. Galti ki maine and I deserve it."


"Nahi Shobu, you don't and you never did. It was my fault ki main bas ek galti pakad ke baith gayi aur tumhari sab acchi points ko ignore kiya. I'm sorry.."


"Ma, it's okay.."

Shobhit tried to pacify his mother, wiping away the tears that were strewn across her face as she gave him a genuine smile and a peck on his forehead, something he had longed in these 3 years of emotional distancing from his mother. After 3 years he felt his heart swell with happiness, contentment and peace while hers swelled with pride for her younger son.



There! You have It!

Feedback is most appreciated!


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Am I the first one.. Loved it.. Penned down beautifully..❤❤ would love to read more

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Just loved it....feel bad for shobit....😔

👏👍🏼

Hope he gets the love he deserves from his mother... as I think he will even sacrifice his love for darsh....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it

Hope she realizes in the show too before the marriage track

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Really wonderfully written👏

I hope we get to see something similar in the show but you did a great job on writing about Rajvee n Shobit...😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow!! Wonderfully written... 👏 👏 👏

It's really sweet and emotional... Loved that Rajvee realised her harsh behaviour towards Shobhit on her own.

You have penned down Rajvee's realization and Shobhit's fear when Rajvee turned him to face her so nicely.

Wish something similar happens in the show too...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel_Diya

Am I the first one.. Loved it.. Penned down beautifully..❤❤ would love to read more

Thank you so much! glad you liked it!😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashsamik

Just loved it....feel bad for shobit....😔

👏👍🏼

Hope he gets the love he deserves from his mother... as I think he will even sacrifice his love for darsh....

He really does deserve better. Yes, i think he will get married to Gunben, sacrificing his love for darsh and more so, the precap showed his mother asking him to do something, practically pleading him and if i remember correctly, Rajvi had once told him that he can't do any work correctly. But now, she is asking him to do something, something potentially dangerous and i think he will do it, because Rajvi told him to...


Thank you for liking my work!!😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swetyz

Loved it

Hope she realizes in the show too before the marriage track

Thank you!!😳

Yes, i hope there is a twist where she does realize how she has been treating her younger son and i hope she also realizes that Shobhit loves Charmi and just how she did for Darsh, she would take a stand for Shobhit too.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: J.y.o.t.i

Really wonderfully written👏

I hope we get to see something similar in the show but you did a great job on writing about Rajvee n Shobit...😳

Thank you so much!! I enjoyed writing it as much as you enjoyed reading it!😳

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