Originally posted by: -Yaz-
I havenât been watching GHKKPM for long and Iâm mainly a silent spectator on the forum cause I donât get much time to fully engage, but I have been reading this story since last week and I have finally caught up and I just have to break my silence and say that this story is one of the best I have read in a while on IF. From the start to now, the concept, the characters, the dialogue has been outstanding, they have been moments where I was able to literally visualise the scenes in my head with Neil and Ayesha and to me that is a demonstration of a wonderful and talented writer, because honestly itâs not easy to achieve that, itâs very rare for me to get so deeply into the plot that I forget whatâs real and whatâs not.
the characters and the way you have portrayed them are so real and just normal, itâs refreshing to read that compared to the run of the mill stuff (although not going to lie, I do love those stories as well, I have been guilty of writing them myself haha)
Also can I just say the Virat in your FF sounds ridiculously HOT. Donât get me wrong the show Virat is handsome but heâs missing that spark and passion for me, but this guy youâve been writing, I swear I just melt. His aura, his style, his personality... I can imagine Neil being like this and itâs a shame that the show doesnât show that side of him.
I also love how you have progressed with Sairat, the comfort they felt with each other from the start, the confusion and then the acceptance, followed by the passion AH-MAZING!, it has me hook, line and sinker. I canât promise that I will comment on every chapter, unfortunately I have a very hectic personal life with work and home but I promise that you have a regular reader in me and that whenever I have a chance I will drop a comment, but for bow just know I think you are incredibly talented and I hope you continue this story post marriage as well and hopefully weâll get some steamier Sairat parts to read.