FF: A Dream Long Lost, Ch 32+epilogue, pg 73 - Page 18

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Posted: 17 years ago
Loved to see how Jai and Bani's relationship has gotten a bit more comfortable 👏 The disapproving look of Bani on seeing her hubby dearest smoking to him reassuring her of her importance in his life and family 😊 😳 was very sweet. As for college, chsmish Pushkar seems to be a typical dork 😆 poor thing dropping salt water on his pants and panicking 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Melonie:

Just read the entire FF in one go! Very interesting and sweet. So Jai married her and brought her back. Her parents and villagers seem like they are too conservative.

Jai is very sweet and seems to be falling for her and she too is nursing some feelings for him. It's a very sweet FF. Please continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice update, cute lab scene. Do update soon, thanks ;)
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part
loved the interaction between jb
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi
Poor Pushkar studying chemistry in University level but doesnt knoe that NaCl soln is harmless 😆 😆
must be very bright student 😆 😆
I like Jai he is so understanding.
it was lovely
Waiting for next one
thankssssssssssss

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Posted: 17 years ago
Introduction of puskar ,,, hmmmm is competition for jai?
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Posted: 17 years ago
again you had a given a small part dear where you promissed to post large.

waiting for next

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi Mel,
It was a nice part 😉
It's good that Bani and Jai had this conversation.
It's a big step in their life.
Puskar seems to be a numb 😆 😆 😆
i really can't imagine what will be WM's members reaction when they will know the truth. 😉
I can't wait to read the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part.
loved it.
like the understanding JB share...the way Jai rescued her and married her....trying to help her to adjust in her new life style and all...awesome
Pushkar 😆 😆 😆
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *Guli*

haila chem class!!

brought back memories!!!!

wow!! they are hubby and wife!!

let some sparks happen!!....may be after some time 😉

jaani u better add jaz

cuz if she finds out that in chem class we are with pushy!!

she will surely kill u!!!!!.....OMG 😲

so u better bring her in!!!

she's a huge naman shaw fan!!!!!!!!.....No wonder she taunts us all in Bani's Secret 😆😳

and i mean huge!.....Yaar, she will come but after some time 😉 😳

Originally posted by: davia389

haial i am shocked ...why 🤔

soo jb are cool well that salt water think was funny😆....glad U liked that 😛

so 0psuhky ki enternace hgoayi hope banif alsl for hima nd jai get jealous

😆....I don't think Pushkar has the capacity to make Jai Walia feel jealous 😆 😉

pls continue soon

dav

Originally posted by: ~Pachu*n*Abhi~

OMG...MEL..OMG...you sure..?? Me and Chemistry???😲😵...hayee..kaash yeh sahi hota😍😆......haye 😆 😆

Awww...Jai is such a sweetie yaarrr...truly understands Bani to the T!!☺️.... I know...isn't he 😍


LOVED it Mel
👏.....Thanks yaar 😃

Originally posted by: *Piku*

Apni tho paatshala, masti ki paatshala
Be A Rebel

Chorus:
Naa koi padne waala, Naa koi seekne wala
Naa koi padne waala, Naa koi seekne wala
Apni tho paatshala, masti ki paatshala
Apni tho paatshala, masti ki paatshala
Loose Control🤪.....awww....I like this song 😛


mein aur chemistry, hey bhawgan, haven't taken that since highschool.😆😆😆......really, Oh God what is up with this chemistry anyways 😆

hey bhawgan please tell me pushkar is gay or something, he sounds to girly,......he is just one of those types....but not gay 😆 😆OH my gosh who crys over spilling of salt water😕 on their pants, puskhar please be an man😆.....Hey U can convey that message 😉

Gupa, do you guys know what that means, we can have Puskhar take chemistry notes, and we bunk classes🤣🤣🤣.....U know what it took me some good 5 minutes to figure out who Gupa is😆...then it clicked....Guli+Pachu=Gupa..... I think lichu also would have been nice 😉 😳

Kash college mein Salman Khan hota😍😍😍.....Don't U think he is tad bit old to be in college 😆 😳

Jai is like an elephant🤣🤣🤣 now i really feel short🤣🤣🤣 that cracked me up. U found that funny 😆 When Gupa, and I meet Jai we will feel like elfs😆.....lets see what happens then 😉

.....yaar this elephant is so skinny ...poor thing.

Awww loved how they are refering to each other as hubby and wife😳so they got married in luvnagar you should have just used premnagar.😆.....Just didn't think hard 😆

Massi and them don't know that Bani is the Walia bahu, loved their talk in the garden.Glad U liked it 😃 I can't stand smoking its so gross, ewwwwww what it does to your teeth.🤢 Smoking is worse then drinking, well both are bad.😡...Yup me don't like it either, it just makes me wanna run away from that person

Jai dropped his wife to college...How come U girls didn't notice him 😉

please write soon😛 it was to short😭....sorry, will try next time 😃

Originally posted by: niruba

I love this Jai 😳 ..awww 😛....yes, bani was right, he is indeed a really good man. Why this Bani always 'bump' into Jai....when will she 'fall'.....you know what I mean 😛 😉....ofcourse, what do U think about the 'falling' 😉....this update is too good.....thanks yaar 😃..the chem lab incident was very hilarious...glad u liked it 😛...and how did Pushkar got a place in that prestigious college 😉??? ...U will know 😉

please continue....

Originally posted by: cheeze

Aawww Pushkar, chashmish???? 😆...yup he is the chashmish 😉

Got terrified of salt water!!! 😆 Call the teacher!!!! 🤣

Jai and Bani are so cute together 😳 Loved the way Jai assured Bani that she is just right for him 😳 He called her a wonderful person..........☺️...glad U like their convo😃

Oye girls, Gupa and Piku.....................help Pushkar to fan his pants re!!!! 😆 🤣....OMG that cracked me up 😆 😆 😆...yes girl listen to cheeze 😉 😳

Originally posted by: rogna

Great part!! 👏
Please Continue Soon 😃 😃 ...thanks dear 😛

Originally posted by: pooks

Loved to see how Jai and Bani's relationship has gotten a bit more comfortable 👏 The disapproving look of Bani on seeing her hubby dearest smoking to him reassuring her of her importance in his life and family 😊 😳 was very sweet. Thanks dear, glad U liked it 😃As for college, chsmish Pushkar seems to be a typical dork 😆 poor thing dropping salt water on his pants and panicking 😆 😆 ...ya 😆

Edited by melonie - 17 years ago

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