RaghVi TS: Kinda Business Trip (ending on pg no 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: __VIHU

wow... Your dialogues made it so easy to picture Raghav’s expressions. Good work dear.

Thank you !! Hopefully I was able to portray Raghav's personality properly!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Fantabulous OS! well written

enjoyed reading it

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice, bahut acchha likhta hai tum👍🏼

Loved it, RR dialogues were really good👏, could clearly imagine Raghav saying those lines.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavya1994

Nice, bahut acchha likhta hai tum👍🏼

Loved it, RR dialogues were really good👏, could clearly imagine Raghav saying those lines.

Thank you.

Hopefully I portrayed RR well!! His wholesomeness is what I wanted to potray

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Raghav can totally do this 🤣

Amazing

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aye haye! Farhad u r right! Something "else" is definitely going on inside ur Raghav anna's mind n heart both, that's why he's taking Pallavi to Delhi in the name of business deal! 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
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this is so cute... you got their nok jhok perfect ... Please update soon...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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umm.. aur likhte na ruk kyu gaye.. ending tog dete.. btw kafi mast hai

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 2: Ending

Raghav was waiting outside the Deshmukh house to get Pallavi. The chipku girl was constantly talking and making him go mad. What is taking so much time for Pallavi to get ready to come out? Pallavi rushed out in a light blue salwar. And needless to say, Raghav was mesmerized by her beauty. The salwar hugged her figure and graciously showed her curves. Raghav thought " Yeh saree ka dukhan , chudhidar ka dukhan kabse ban gayi".

She came near him n said " Sorry Raghav. Der hogaya" . WHen Raghav continued looking at her without saying anything. She snapped her fingers ,shook him and said " Raghav!! Raghav!! Ghamandi Rao"

Raghav snapped up from his trance n said " Saree ka dukhan , kya naya dukhan kol rahi thi, inta time koi lagatha hai " Pallavi said " Sorry Sorry"aand took his arms n said " Ab chale"

When Amrutha tried to talk Raghav, Raghav ignored her. But now all his attention was glued to Pallavi. As if there was nooone else except Pallavi here. Amrutha couldn't take this anymore . So she ran inside house in tears.

Pallavi saw her but she ignored her. She knew well abt the childishness of Amrutha n her obsession behind Raghav. But she knew about Raghav too, he didn't like her attitude and she didn't wanna ruin her present equation with Raghav for this. She is his business partner n She would like to be courteous with him.

Pallavi was about to sit in her car when Vijay called " Pallu, aakar dahi shakar khake ja, Baba ke haath se" Her baba was sending glares to Raghav. She knew that her baba didn't like Raghav but still her baba has come to the conclusion that he is just a business associate to me n there will be nothing sorts between us. So, baba has been courteous to him and Raghav too behaved infront of him. Pallavi rushed to her baba n ate dahi shakar n went off in car saying" bye baba. apna dhyan rakna . Mai jaldi ah jaongi " Her baba threw a glare at Raghav as if warning him and smiled n waved at Pallavi a bye

Pallavi was nervous not only about the business deal , but also about travelling in the plane. She has never rode a plane. When they were seated , Pallavi nervously clutched her seat n closed her eyes tightly when the plane was abt to take off. Raghav smiled at her and said " Yehan horror movie nahi chal rahi hai , saree ka dukhan. inta darawana expression mat do " Pallavi said " mujhe dar lag raha hai. Mai kabhi plane bpe nahi bethi hoon"She looked very pale. So Raghav got worried n asked for a lemon juice from waitress, gave it to Pallavi and said " Saree ka dukhan , Relax !! yeh lemon juice bhi lo n aake band karke so jao. Toh travel ka patha hi nahi chalega. And socho ki mai tumhare saath hoon tho kuch nahi hoga". She nodded n took the glass from him n gulpped down the juice n closed her eyes n tried to sleep thinking that she is safe n Raghav is with her.

Pallavi dozen off soon n her head started lulling around. So to keep her head safe, Raghav placed her head on his shoulders. She continued sleeping till they reached Delhi. when they reached Raghav said " Oh, kubakaran ki behen, saree ka dukhan. Delhi ah gya uth jao " Pallavi got up n saw that she was lying on his shoulders. She looked at him n said " Thank you" Raghav smiled inwardly. His shoulders went sore but yet it was fruitful to get a mild thank you from her.

Raghav and Pallavi took a car . Raghav said " pehle hotel mai freshen up hote hain . uske baad khana khake . Shaam ko meeting mai chalte hain. Tumhe Kahin jana hai ". Pallavi said " patha nahi socha nahi. Par aai, baba , mansi , nikhil , kaka , kaku aur amrutha ke liye kuch kharidna chathi hoon"

Raghav said , " Saree ka dukhan , apne pure Dukhan ke liye gifts khareed lene after having lunch". Pallavi corrected him" Family . Ghamandi Rao " Raghav shrugged her off. They reached hotel and went to respective rooms. They got ready and came .

Pallavi came out in a pink salwar looking ethereal as always. Raghav came in Red causal shirt. Pallavi asked " kahan jaa rahen hai khane ke liye." Raghav said " maine ek restaurant book kiya hai, kafi famous hai yehan pe ". Pallavi sighed n said " Delhi aaye hai, phir bhi restaurant . Tum restuarant jao. Mujhe Chandni chowk chod do."

Raghav said " Saree ka dukhan, yeh chandni chowk kya laga raka hai. Wahan kya kahane waali ho". Pallavi said " chalo, ghamandi Rao, tumhe bhi khilathi hun street foods " Pallavi took him to a chole bature shop n ordered two plates.

She was enjoying the chole bature . while Raghav ate smilingly looking at her childish ways of eating food. The way she was making faces of satisfaction while eating one bite and other. After they completed eating , Raghav said " Kya saree ka dukhan. Ghar mai khana hi nayi khaya kya. Itna kha rahi thi " Pallavi said " Abhi tho bas trailer hai, Ghamandi Rao. Puri film baki hai "

She dragged him to lassi shop n ordered two lassis n they drank them. Pallavi got a white mustache after drinking it. Raghav started laughing " Saree ka dukhan, tum toh apne baba ki tarah ho gayi ". Pallavi asked " kya bol rahe ho, Raghav " . raghav said " tumari muche aur dhadi ah gayi hai " Pallavi tried to wipe it off but still some remained on her lips. Raghav tried to wipe it from her lips. Suddenly his breath struck, he was touching Pallavi's lips , the soft petal like lips. He couldn't take off his fingers n He could hear feel that Pallavi was also breathless. They both looked at each other with the unknown feeling. They couldn't take off their eyes off each other.

When a boy came " bhaiya, glass leke jao". Raghav and Pallavi broke out of their trance and both nodded. Pallavi and Raghav went out awkwardly. Pallavi awkwardly said " Mai yeh dukhan mai gifts lethi hoon". Raghav awkwardly nodded n followed her. Pallavi started collecting gifts, when she saw an angry bird keychain. The angry bird was red n looked fiercely . She remembered Raghav seeing it. She brought that. She came near Raghav who was looking at some shops n said " Haath dikhao " Raghav said " kyun, saree ka dukhan. mere liye gift liya hai kya?" She nodded. Raghav opened his hands . SHe dropped the angry bird keychain . raghav said " Saree ka dukhan, mai chota bacha nahi hoon. I m 27 yrs old . Yeh cartoon na tum apni chipku behen ko dena". Pallavi said " isse dekhe mujhe tumhari yaad ayi, toh kareed liye. agar tumhe nahi chahiye toh dedo wapis". Raghav put that in his pocket immediately n said " ek baar gift dene ke baad lete nahi, manner nahi hai tum mai, Saree ka dukhan". Pallavi shrugged at his childish behavior.

They continued walking while they saw a kulfi wala. Pallavi dragged raghav and while Pallavi was eating Kulfi leisurely .Suddenly Raghav said " wo dekho Bindiwaali aunty " n pushed Pallavi which made her dash her kulfi on her face. Raghav laughed seeing her angry face n she rushed behind with her kulfi to make him pay for what he did . Time passed by and it was about to be evening.

Both went to hotel and got ready and went to the client. Both greeted him. Pallavi as usual showed him her cataolgue . The client was very impressed. The client was ready to sign the deal today itself. Raghav asked " Harish sir, apne bola tha kal contract sign karoge karke . Phir aaj ..?" the client said :" Par raghav sir . mai aapka time nahi waste karna chatha tha . ISliye maine aaj hi apne lawyer se bolkar sab ready karva diya". Raghav shrugged n thought " sab plan waste. ab Saree ka dukhan yehan kabhi nahi rukegi " They signed the papers .

Pallavi asked "aaj hi jaa rahen hai na, tickets ?" Raghav tried to tell " tickets nahi mil raha.. " Pallavi searched something from her phone n said " mil gaye tickets. maine book kar de. aane ke liye tumne pay kiya. ab mai pay kar dethi hoon. Par economy class hain". Raghav shruuged and said " Economy ? teek hai adjust karlunga". Pallavi smiled at him happily. Raghav was lost in her smile.

Both went off n arrived at hyderabad late at late. Pallavi was totally exhausted. Farhad came to pick them up at airport. Farhad immediately rode towards Pallavi's house. Pallavi was so exhausted that she slept on his shoulders again. Raghav was looking at her naïve and childish face while sleeping care free in his arms. He removed the hair from her face n placed his head on top of hers n slept off.

When they arrived at the place, Farhad looked at Raghav . He saw his anna n Pallavi sleeping so peacefully. he didn't wanna disturb them. His anna never looked peaceful n happy like this. He wished they both stay together like this. When he suddenly heard the knock on his glass panel of car. He looked and saw Vijayji. Farhad immediately called " anna, utto". Raghav got up but Pallavi was still sleeping hard.

When Vijay knocked at the passenger door, Farhad rushed n opened it. Vijay glared at him like he was gonna kill her then n there. He called" Pallu beta, utto.. utto.. baba ke saath ghar jalo"Pallavi woke up sleepily n saw her baba n went with him.

Raghav gave the gifts to Farhad n told him to give it to Pallavi's house. As he didn't wanna deal with her scary baba. Raghav remained in the car n bend his head to sleep when he noticed a strand of hair on him. He took it n remembered their trip. Eventhough he planned for a two day trip but this also wasn't that bad. Raghav thought" first date ke liye okay tha.. aage aur ache se plan karna hoga "


The end ~

P.s. Spare me for this . I had actually planned this one to be a one shot but as many ppl requested for a second one , i came up with this sloppy one. Hope u ppl like it


Edited by christobelle - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you all for the comments

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