"Becoming the Perfect Shaberwal Bahu"!!! Shakhi Shaberwals OS - Page 6

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Posted: 5 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

It was amazing.

Loved ShaKhi to the core, especially the way Anokhi made Shaurya aware his bad temper.


One minute silence for "badi maa." 😆

She should get used to such badass reply for her 18th-century midset.


The change Anokhi made for Kanchan and Gayatri was really nice. In the show, they were treated like servants and Bebo-Kitty are considered equals to the men of the house. Saberwal hypocrisy!

Felt really good that you noticed it and brought such a nice turn.


Overall, awesome OS.

Exactly I didn't like it initially where Devi rebuked Kanchan for her cooking skill and insulted her in front of the family. She treats Kitty Bebo and Kanchan different and it irked me. And Anokhi doesn't seem like a girl who would tolerate such crap. Even Shaurya pointed it out at that time. Al though his response seemed misogynistic too at that point. Thank you for pointing out my effort. I am blessed to have readers like you who read and observe in such details. Thank you for your detailed and amazing feedback. Much appreciated. Lots of love 😊🙏
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Posted: 5 years ago
#52

This was amazing. Anokhi's 'lecture' was on-point. And Shaurya was having fun seeing his girlfriend lecturing others for a change. Hoping to see something like this in the future.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnokhiKaShaurya

This was amazing. Anokhi's 'lecture' was on-point. And Shaurya was having fun seeing his girlfriend lecturing others for a change. Hoping to see something like this in the future.

Ha ha thank you for the review much appreciated. 😊 Do stay tuned
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Oh man I absolutely loved how intelligently Anokhi replied back to Badi maa! 😂😂

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Oh man I absolutely loved how intelligently Anokhi replied back to Badi maa! 😂😂

Ha ha thank you 😊 I am so glad you are enjoying yourself here. 🙏😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
#56

loved it.

waiting for your next work.

all the best.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonia.himk

loved it.

waiting for your next work.

all the best.

Thank you so much for the lovely comment😊 much appreciated 😊😀
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Posted: 5 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87

Anokhi though a serial "aastha" chanter is actually a quiet and sensitive girl. I really can't picture her being this sassy. So this is indeed a refreshing change. 😀

She challenged Devi for a debate competition 🤣. N that roti of all map sizes, I can almost hear myself speaking. 😝


Girl u'r one versatile writer. U'r equally comfortable writting dark stories and such light frivolous ones as well for our entertainment. 👍🙂 Do keep writing. 😀

I am so very sorry....somehow I missed your comment at the end of this bad and I feel horrible. Thank you so much this really amazing review. I am so truly touched humbled and grateful 🙏❤ Hope you enjoy my future work too.😊

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