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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: SundariP

First of all hearty congratulations on completing this story, after reading I know what a daunting task it must be to come up with this story. And really it's not immature, atleast didn't seem like that to me.


>> Oh thank you dear... I started this story out of excitement and plot was really difficult, and then I cut link with it in between, so took a toll on me to complete it. 🤪


So coming back to story i'd read the prologue before but couldn't muster courage to read the story, I was not into paranormal you see, but recently one of my favourite writers said it's her favourite genre, then I saw your post recommending this and you said it's complete, so I couldn't resist coming here.


>> Not that I am into paranormal stuffs much (unless sometimes I am🤣) , but this concept of rebirth is always so mystical that it produces an awesome storyline. So gave it a try.😆


Though it cost me a lot of studying time, but no regrets.


>>Glad that it was worthy


Again coming back to the story... I don't know if this reincarnation thing can really happen but I can't dismiss this as just an imagination as well. I've dipped a bit in meditation line and I've experienced things. the things you say about subconscious mind, it being a layer of memories over the various births, I don't know your source of knowledge but agree with it.


>> Wow that is a really important information from you! Most of the knowledges I have gathered from internet or movies, not that I have done a lot of research or read any big books. A lot came from my imagination only.

Tell me more about your experiences if it is okay...


In the beginning chapters I was always thinking why does she not remember it like he does? Then by the middle parts I was like what if she never remembered because that's completely possible right, I started to dread whether his story will remain incomplete again.


>> To be honest, when I started writing I did not know when she will get to remember, or if she will remember at all... if she is also Jodha's rebirth, or everything is in Rohan's head and nothing is real. As I moved forward with the plot, everything sort of came to me. Only thing I knew that Rohan and Pragya will be together and finish the unfinished story at the end.


I don't know how you managed to write 2 love stories with one couple. The time travel element was amazing as well.


>> Thank you so much dear.


But the most striking part for me was the conversation before going to the tomb, when he made peace with it, because we can't possibly find a solution unless we accept our problems first.

It was a rollercoaster of emotions for me because I've watched the show almost 10 times in last 5 months, and I feel more and more connected, maybe I would need a psychiatrist in near future as well. 😆

>> OMG you are totally invested in the show. Happened to me once, now that phase is over. But when I write my stories those days come in front of me. 😛


I've some reading recommendations for you if you're interested.

>> Please please give me some. I am lacking my reading recommendations now. Also becoming too lazy nowadays 🤪

Keep writing.❤️

- Pooja😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Meditation experience is very strange it can't be described.

Sometimes I felt like me and my body are 2 different entities, once I felt like my body, my mind and me are all different.

Sometimes I felt weightless like I'm not on ground just floating around, and sometimes I felt there are others around me, not people more like energy or soul whatever we want to call it.

These are few experiences, though it's been long since I felt something, it happens unexpectedly. And it's different for everyone.


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: SundariP

Meditation experience is very strange it can't be described.

Sometimes I felt like me and my body are 2 different entities, once I felt like my body, my mind and me are all different.

Sometimes I felt weightless like I'm not on ground just floating around, and sometimes I felt there are others around me, not people more like energy or soul whatever we want to call it.

These are few experiences, though it's been long since I felt something, it happens unexpectedly. And it's different for everyone.


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Tumhara FF toh iss janam mein padhne ko nahi milega lagta hai

Edited by MahiraSingh3030 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti


>> 😃 😃


>> Aww Thank you smiley4


>> Awwsmiley43


>> I got emotional writing that part smiley19 Time was hard on Akbar in his last days...

For all the Mughal Emperor's I think...


>> 😞


>>Oh If we could see this. smiley36

>> Yes right


>> Maybe I was in hurry to complete the story at one sitting. smiley36 However, I wanted to keep their conversation short and crispy. And rest is on the readers' imagination 😃

we want more....plzz......smiley4

>> Now incarnation of Shahjahan Mumtaj?smiley8smiley37


you're right last days were not peaceful for any of them....😔


Shahjahan Mumtaz .......NO plzzzz😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Tumhara FF toh iss janam mein padhne ko nahi milega lagta hai


You will have to come back in next life to read what you couldn't now 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Beautiful love story which touch the heart directly n involved reader immers into story, excellent keep up ur work ur really a good writer.


Thank you whole heatedly for the great story.

Indrani

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Posted: 5 years ago

Beautiful love story which touch the heart directly n involved reader immers into story, excellent keep up ur work ur really a good writer.


Thank you whole heartedly for the great story.

Indrani

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Indranilakshman

Beautiful love story which touch the heart directly n involved reader immers into story, excellent keep up ur work ur really a good writer.


Thank you whole heartedly for the great story.

Indrani


How did I miss replying you!


Thank you so much dear 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Hello Guys...


Ultimately I finished the impossible work! I finished humari Adhuri Kahani (So proud of me!)

I don't know how many of you are still interested, but I would love it if you all read and put a small comment, because it took a lot of afford to complete it.😛


I don't know if I was able to keep up the tune till the end, because there was a big gap in middle. Please feel free to share your thoughts.


As I said I never want to keep any story unfinished, ending this one gave me confidence about DL as well. Hope I will return with DL later this month. Till then enjoy HAK😃

I READ..... I do... I like the Ending.... Though it seemed rushed.... ..but then ... probably it was to be....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Thank you Stuti😘


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: selvi1275

I READ..... I do... I like the Ending.... Though it seemed rushed.... ..but then ... probably it was to be....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Thank you Stuti😘



🤗 Thank you so so so much! Yes, maybe it was really bit rushed, since I planned to end it in one sitting 😵 but so so glad that you read it and liked it as well. ❤️

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