Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 18

Wohooooooo I'm the first one to reply 😃

But res for now 😆

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Gussa mat karna jyoti jaldi unres kar dungi

Jyoti,hayeeeee☺️☺️.

Aisa likha tumne,end mein Chand bhi sharmake badlon ke piche chup gaya, hum kaha chupe🤪☺️

The ending🤪☺️whoa!!Outclass👏

THIS song my gawd,what an outstanding choice of song and what a befitting justice to it through the writing!

Unbelievable Jyoti, I feel through this chapter you have proved how versatile and flexible your imaginative skills and writing power is! Multi-talented writer for a reason👍🏼😳

Not an ounce of vulgarity or discomfort can be found in this delectable chapter👍🏼😳It is just capable of making you blush and blush more! Loved the soft and pacifying descriptions, literally loved every moment👏Fiction no longer remains a fiction , it turns into reality when writers like you mould it according to your creativity👍🏼

Beautiful Jyoti , phenomenal!Thank you for such a good one❤️

Originally posted by: rikara94

Don't be sorry dear🤗 read whenever you feel like❤️

Jyoti🤗 I have unresed😳🤗

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Jyoti,it was so so so emotional!

You awed me and how😳Brilliant👍🏼

Pehle mujhe bohot gussa aya tha Bondita pad, but tumne aise uske character ko banaya hain,i couldn't help but feel sorry , har bakht uske zehn mein sirf patibabu hi hain!And the best part is that voh khud maafi maang rahi thi, uska yeh haalat dekhkar, she was feeling guilty! That entire part has been written so well! Extraordinary writing👍🏼

Thank you so much koyal🤗 glad that you read and liked it❤️

I told you, it's not their fault...if anyone at fault then it was situation

Bon is love...she always think about him before herself❤️

And she was apologizing because she knows it's her fault that she behaved rudely with him, and ignored him😭

And finally , they confessed!To be honest mujhe laga nahi tha pad paungi ki nahi,show ne sab bigaar ke rakh diya hain, but tuk itni acchi likhti ho, everything is so perfect ,well arranged and consolidated that you tend to keep going with the flow, it's that calm and beautiful ❤️ Saudamini se koi aur reaction ki ummed bhi nahi ki jaa sakhti, jealousy is in her blood!

Yup they confessed, finally

And about Saudamini...toh khair chodo woh hai hi aisi😆

I can understand your pain dear, even we are at same place, but if my writing can make smile you people or can change your mood, then I should posts something right?

Thank you so much and I am glad that you found it calm and beautiful❤️

In all, a very very interesting and emotionally uplifting chapter!

How sweet🤗

I have updated the next part also...go and check☺️

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Jyoti🤗 I have unresed😳🤗

Thank you🤗 and I replied😳

You made my heart garden garden...

I was so waiting for this....

☺️

You are brilliant in the romance genre...it's subtle yet intriguing...

Keep bringing girl....

This chapter was 🔥...

Ps sorry I couldn't reply firsr😭

What a heavenly update👏...

Really like your style of writing, simple and sweet❤️

Omg jyoti ☺️

Suno ... I can't comment right now but mai padh chuki hu ☺️☺️☺️

I'll comment tomorrow bcoz abhi sharm aa rhi h 🤪☺️

Okay I read it again 🤣 aur firse I am not able to comment 🤣

Okay jitna ho paa raha hai I am telling.

Pehli baat....It was HOT 🔥☺️🤪

I loved it when Ani said "sachme mere baare me nahi soch rahi thi?" ☺️ awwwwwwwww *blush * 😳❤️

This song is so romantic in itself that sets the mood right 😎❤️ ☺️ I could imagine that playing in the BG

I really loved the way you made way for their

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Yaar bas I don't want to say kuch...

I loved it ☺️❤️

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Omg jyoti ☺️

Suno ... I can't comment right now but mai padh chuki hu ☺️☺️☺️

I'll comment tomorrow bcoz abhi sharm aa rhi h 🤪☺️

Omg😆 kya maine itna jyada likh diya jo tum itna sharma rahi ho☺️☺️

By the way mujhe tera comment padh k sharm aa ri h abhi😆

U underground hone ka waqt aa gya h☺️