FF Kal Kya Hoga- part 4 pg7 11.5. ntpg9

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hii

This is my 1st full-fledged FF. have written 2 SS before. And another stupid SS is running. But trying to write a serious one. I have no idea of Indian geography( as I m not an Indian gal). So please ignore my geographical bloopers. And please forgive my grammatical mistakes.

Couldn't find any suitable name. Suggestions are welcome.

Ok. Enough of my bak bak.

Happy reading

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Kal Kya Hoga

pg # 1, 3, 4, 7

Part 1

Walia Mansion

A 23 year old man and a 21 year old lady are standing in the drawing room. A very angry Uday Walia and a do-not-know-what-to-do Krishna Walia is looking at the couple.

U: Mr Jai Uday Walia. May I ask you what is the meaning of all these?

J: Ermm….Papa if you do not know the meaning of shaadi let me explain you. In English shaadi is marriage. When you put sindoor and MS around my mother's and take vow in front of the sacred fire….

U: Shut up you moron!!!!! Krishna dekha tumne iski karnama!!! My one and only child had a court marriage!!!! I had so many plans for his wedding!! My sons wedding will be the greatest wedding of the decade!! Everyone will talk about it. But no!!!! Court me jaake shaadi karli!!!!!

Kr: Beta why court marriage? You could have at least told us.

J: Mamma wo. Katha is an orphan. But she is a very nice girl. We both love each other. I thought that you would not agree as she is orphan so….

Kr: Beta, bolke to dekhte. Kitni sunder bahu hai meri. (she smiled at the girl standing beside Jai) But why so fast? You both are too young.

J: (sheepishly) Well….umm….the thing is…..(he closed his eyes, took a deep breath) she is pregnant (he announced in one go)

Uday and Krishna gasped. Katha bended her head even lower.

U: You rus*** !!! What got into you????!!!!!

J: I was drunk and it was raining and she was looking so beautiful an…(Katha nudged Jai to stop. She was very embarrassed )

U: Rus*** kahika!!!! God!!!! Apna muh bandh rakh duffer !!. Khud to besharam now why embarrassing my bahu?

J: What??!!

U: Katha beta. (Katha looked upto her FIL's face) are you sure you can manage this duffer?

Katha: (giving a shy smile) If you help me then I wont have any problem.(she touched is feet to take blessing)

Kr smiles looking at them.

JW: Hey hey wait a minute!! What's happening here?? Omg!!! You 2 are already teaming up!!!

U: Abbe tu chup kar. 'You will not acceept her'. Arre do you even know about your mom? She herself was an orphan!

J: I didn't know that.

U: I would know something only if you want na?

Kr: (going to Katha) Welcome to Walia family beta.

Katha took blessing from Krshna.

Kr: Lets go. I will show you Jai's room.

U: No. Not Jai's room.

Everyone got startled. Katha's face lost color.

Kr: But why?

U: She will be in the guestroom until their wedding. Their will be a real wedding. Walia style wedding. Arre ye court marriage koi tareeka hai?

Everyone got relieved and smiled

Kr: Aap bhina. You made us scared for a while.

U: (smiling) I m calling Pandit for an auspicious date. Jai, you come with me.

One week later Mumbai witnessed a wedding ceremony that one can only dream of. Jai and Katha sat in the mandap staring at the sacred fire. Thinking about their new life.

*****

In a village, beside a river, a 7 year old girl was also starring at the fire hiding behind a tree trunk. Fire from her mother's chita.

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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well 23 yr old boy and 21 old boy?shaaid aksie ki/?😆teek akr

use.. boy nahi girl shayd women after jai's anughtyness

made her pregnant

so munna munni has almost 16 yr of differnt...

soo jai made ehr rpegnant int he rainy day uff ye jai sis soo naughty woo bhi itna nauhgyt upar se besharam..

apr bani😭😭😭

her mother died ab kay hoga agae ki lfie mein

pls cotninue soon

me first😆

well naughty ness of aji walai the ff anme shd be😆

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great starting
jai and katha...?? wheres bani
and who is this little 7 year old girl?? 😕

continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lovely start Tropa... 😃 ...

Jai married Katha... ... how did that happen... ... and on top of that she's pregnant... 😕 ... how will bani fit into all these... 😕 ...

You know the girl standing beside the chita...is Bani right! well not so sure... ... please do cont soon... 👏 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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haila... our jai already married... 😲
the storyline is really very interestin...
do continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Tropa:


Nice start Jai got a girl preg and then married her. His dad and mom like her. And then you end with a girl who has lost her mother....

Ok title, it's hard to give a name...dont' know if this is about Jai and Katha...are they going to adopt the 7 year old, or is the 7 year old somehow going to come into JW's life in ten/twenty years...
Edited by divan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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will be back... 😳

okay... i am back....

so jai is married... bani's mom is dead over there.... dont tell me u r gonna give us leap!!! 😆
Edited by abhilashasharma - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pls continue soon,, katha? what a name never heard of it before 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful beginning cant wait to read more
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tropu.. darling..
change the first sentence.. to 23 year old boy.. and 21 year girl.. not boy.. hehe
i was like. what in the world..

hehe
waht.. where is bani??

continue soon

i mean it

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