SAIRAT FF - Life as we decided not as destined ch4 - pg 5 - Page 5

Originally posted by: sairat07

Much needed ch to solve the ques that aroused in mind...anyways it was superb...continue soon!!!

Thank you 😊

@bold 😊

Thanks for the quick update. Loving the progress and yes it answers most of my questions. Like you did, Sai made the right call

Very Interesting......

A peak into past.....I was waiting for the reason of their separation.....Still not disclosed completely....Eagerly waiting for that....

Both are missing and yearning for each other....

Please give next update soon...

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Wow... multiple chapters! Thank you♥️♥️♥️ Tbh, Its getting kinda complicatrd. From what i can make out- sai virat are staying apart i guess and many little things and one big thing have driven Sai away from virat...but looks like they are aware of how much they miss each other too. So as you write more we will find out what happened in the past...i hope they can solve the issues and also address the things that led to their MUs...

Please do keep writing!

😆

@bold can't really say that, will be covering it in the upcoming chapters but can say that sometimes one particular thing can drive us to think

You are right, they are aware of how much they miss each other

As much as they miss each other, they are and will also be reminiscing their memories

This reminiscing is a positive thing and is not painful, so I am trying to show that, not sure how much is getting conveyed from the story. The idea behind is to not show pain or hurt from their separation, more of realisation, reflection and also enjoying the past moments though not together.

There is love, a lot of love but I didn't want their relationship to turn into a toxic one due to problems that they face and their inability to deal with those issues.

That is why they are able to enjoy even when they are not together and they are able to talk to each other as if they have not even part ways. Will ofcourse show in the future chapters how they have reached this level of comfort even when they have split.

I think you or someone might have found it a little confusing to see how they are able to casually talk to each other. They are comfortable but also know that they need to tread carefully.

Originally posted by: notaquitter

Thanks for the quick update. Loving the progress and yes it answers most of my questions. Like you did, Sai made the right call

Thanks 😍

@bold was needed for the both of them 😆

Lo mein phir aagayi,phone uthaake,vaise iss baar thoda time par aa gayi.

And it was fabulous as always. Loved it.

Toh dil paas hokar bhi hai door,

Akhir kaisa hai inka ye fitoor.

So,coming to the phone conversation,it was amazing and actually even the aftermath. How beautifully you depicted it. They are planning to meet each other,nice,you know they are not at all weary of meeting each other, physically,they are excited they are desperate ,they are planning. But wait,as I mentioned the key word is physically,but both are not ready to connect ,or say they are holding back to connect,one out of fear and the other also of fear that he will hurt her,but not physically,but emotionally.

Here are these two people,who love each other deeply, care heavily,suffer madly but something is missing. I am not saying they are not connected emotionally,cuz I will be a fool if I say so,how can two people in love not connect emotionally. But you know the existence of the speciality ,there is a wow factor,that one thing,something ,you know that forever jittery and fresh feeling, maybe it is still not there,whose absence is pushing them to give up rather than fighting for it. They are together,physically ,emotionally, but not combined ,they are not a blend.Maybe it is there,that feeling ,that sense of completeness,but circumstances,situations,fear,egos are not allowing them to notice it. They are currently like a heterogeneous mixture,they are present together ,proportionally as well,but they are not combined completely. And their desperateness,the blame game they are playing on thwmselves,the care in that fear,oh wow👏

But you may have also given a hint ,and as always

1. There emotions all over the place,that incompleteness, they know what to say,but not how to. And likes repel. That is what is happening. That insecurity ,that fear,and maybe somewhere or the other the unresolved trust issues

2. Arre yaar,the cause of this ruckus,didi. The juggler of their emotions.

But ,I do wnat to know what did she do to regain that position from Virat,chalaak didi.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

P.S.:Romaanchik cheezo mein mera dimaag kam hi doudta hai. Toh agar galat samajh liya toh maafi. But it was really beautiful to read this Sairat complexicity.

Kaash,kaash mein didi ko kidnap kar paati,Sairat humesha ke liye ek ho jaayenge.

Ok... now I got it why Sai is holding back her feelings...loved the story so far...nice to have Samrat back and confides in Sai...and not blind like Virat...thank you so much for all your updates for today...I know it must have taken lot of time and energy to think such lovely stories...please keep writing amazing stories...waiting for the next part...please update soon...👍🏻

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Lo mein phir aagayi,phone uthaake,vaise iss baar thoda time par aa gayi.

Aur mein late 😓

Is baar mein sorry bolti hoon...couldn't reply as soon i read your comment...sorry

Kal kuch zyaada hi likh rahi thi and so couldn't find time later to chk the forum much or to comment too

And it was fabulous as always. Loved it.

Thank you ❤

Toh dil paas hokar bhi hai door,

Akhir kaisa hai inka ye fitoor.

So,coming to the phone conversation,it was amazing and actually even the aftermath. How beautifully you depicted it. They are planning to meet each other,nice,you know they are not at all weary of meeting each other, physically,they are excited they are desperate ,they are planning. But wait,as I mentioned the key word is physically,but both are not ready to connect ,or say they are holding back to connect,one out of fear and the other also of fear that he will hurt her,but not physically,but emotionally.

👏👏 holding back to connect also

however determined she is to not stay together, she gets tempted to be with him in some way but she is strong, will continue to try to be strong

Here are these two people,who love each other deeply, care heavily,suffer madly but something is missing. I am not saying they are not connected emotionally,cuz I will be a fool if I say so,how can two people in love not connect emotionally. But you know the existence of the speciality ,there is a wow factor,that one thing,something ,you know that forever jittery and fresh feeling, maybe it is still not there,whose absence is pushing them to give up rather than fighting for it. They are together,physically ,emotionally, but not combined ,they are not a blend.

Yes

It is more like they lack to think about the other sometimes and does things ignoring other's feelings and they need to work on it.

They should be able to guess the other person's opinion under any circumstances. Not just opinion have to learn to wear their shoes and act, not always assume they will be okay and apologies will not always help.

Maybe it is there,that feeling ,that sense of completeness,but circumstances,situations,fear,egos are not allowing them to notice it. They are currently like a heterogeneous mixture,they are present together ,proportionally as well,but they are not combined completely.

Beautiful analysis 👏👏👏

And their desperateness,the blame game they are playing on thwmselves,the care in that fear,oh wow👏

😍❤

But you may have also given a hint ,and as always

1. There emotions all over the place,that incompleteness, they know what to say,but not how to. And likes repel. That is what is happening. That insecurity ,that fear,and maybe somewhere or the other the unresolved trust issues

Something of that sort but not exactly

2. Arre yaar,the cause of this ruckus,didi. The juggler of their emotions.

But ,I do wnat to know what did she do to regain that position from Virat,chalaak didi.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

😆

P.S.:Romaanchik cheezo mein mera dimaag kam hi doudta hai. Toh agar galat samajh liya toh maafi. But it was really beautiful to read this Sairat complexicity.

Lol, thanks

Kaash,kaash mein didi ko kidnap kar paati,Sairat humesha ke liye ek ho jaayenge.

🤣

Thanks 😊

I read all the 4 chapters in one go.... They are so beautiful... First 2 chapters are like walking through memory line along with virat and sai... And 4 th chapter is very interesting.... Awesome... Plz update next chapter

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

I read all the 4 chapters in one go.... They are so beautiful... First 2 chapters are like walking through memory line along with virat and sai... And 4 th chapter is very interesting.... Awesome... Plz update next chapter

Oh wow, read it all in a go? I have been thinking if I should shorten the chapters since they are too long and you are saying you have read them all in a go 😍😆

Thanks 😊, will update soon

Right now, I am updating my other ff, so might update in a day or two