MG: Be Mine Thread 3 || Authors note on PG 96 - Page 33

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hoping that with the pm you update Part 43 as well. 😉

you always leave us wanting to read more....

Ahh it may take late chetna..

Glad that I make you feel anticipated

Will try to update soon

Originally posted by: Kuttisri

Ahh it may take late chetna..

Glad that I make you feel anticipated

Will try to update soon

hi the wait will defn be worth it

Originally posted by: MA1970

Nice update. Maan is tipsy will he be able to remember the conversation he and Geet had. He almost confessed and Geet opened her heart out on his insist. Precap is interesting.

Thank you Glad you likes it :)

Originally posted by: coderlady

He almost said the words. Why did he stop? At least she told him she had a reason to say no. She might as well spill it out now.

You will know in the next part why did he stop 😉

Hmm what do you think she does?

Originally posted by: shalinimaaneet

Very happy with the update

Love geet ka gussa 👏👏

Ab maan ko akl aayegi

Precap is like geet maan ko chod kr chli gyi h aur maan uske peeche peeche gya h

Nice ab geet ko bhi na maan se waisa hi behave Krna chahiye jaisa maan kr rha tha

Maan deserves this

Geet don't forgive maan easily 😉😉

Thanks for mentioning my name ☺️

Glad you felt the update was nice and Happy feeling 😉

Haha you will see what geet does next..

Originally posted by: taahir004

Congratulations to all winners of the Award

Well Done

Thank you for including me too , much appreciated !!!!

Part 42

Emotional , Awesome and Mind Blowing

Glad, thank you

Of course Geet's out burst was needed but at the same time

it was unexpected.

Yup I didn't thought of that yet but it came of naturally when I wrote!

the very words Geet ask Maan about his love is something that I asked

too and seeing Geet letting out just a little of her pain

while Maan sees her in that condition now that was something great

yes it is an eye opener for Maan as he always only thought that Geet

betrayed his love , he never not once thought why did she refuse him

though the update was short I liked the fact that Geet stopped herself

to say anything further while it seems a little difficult for Maan

now to express his love or all of his emotions to Geet

Maan will always be a tough one

this was indeed needed between them

now at least Maan will know that there was something that stopped Geet

he will now know that at that time she held fear and love for him

Thank you taahir

Originally posted by: pallavimn

Very short update.

But i'm happy

So maan wants to know the reason..

Hw still loves her.

Precap is superb.

Update soon.

Will try to update a longer one next time Pallavi... Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: simranDi

Thank you for your lovely comments about my feedback. I do love your story and I would like to say thank you. It’s lovely coming back from a hard days work and unwinding with such great writing that takes me into another world.

Really great to hear such humble words simran, Thank you so much.. Can't express my gratitude.. Makes me happy to see that readers of being felt like it

You are correct I feel like killing this Maan at times. 😆

Loved the update today, so thank you. I’m glad you have made this Geet strong, i couldn’t have taken it if she kept crying ( I would have pulled my hair out). Ok so she didn’t punch him (that would probably have hurt her more so good thinking Geet!)

Haha I didn't made her to punch him cause he will be more sober and I didn't want him too😆 but i’m So happy that she used all her strength to push him. That knocked him for six.

She is still angry with him, so it obviously means he did not complete the ‘love you’ bit. He will come out with something silly to cover himself for sure, so he is still frustrating,

It's funny and irritating at the same to see how you get to know what happens next lol definitely a dusht danav! However, is he melting? He seems to want to make it up with with her which is why he is following her. Looking forward to the next update to find out.

Thank you again!

Thank you so much for your kind words dear ❤️

Originally posted by: Kkiran

WOW your welcome but thank you mujhe nahi malum ke meri galiya itni achi lagti hai LMAO

Tum itne ache gaali joh detii hoo Maan koh 😆 It makes me happy to see that readers are so involved into the story Anyways but girll I am so proud of Geet like she gave him a piece of her mind. Like this sucker shuted up and listened to her and now all of a sudden he is interested in the reasoning ebhind the rejection. Geet let him suffer a bit because the behavior towards you was unforgivable make him work for you!

Smack him when you get a chance so his brain stays in place moving forward.

🤣

Thank you So much kiran ❤️

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Loved it. Finally they are making headway. Talking fighting yelling but talking !!! Geet yelling and telling him

Exactly what I have been saying. Did you stop to think why she refused you in shrimps! Ego. Huge one stopped him.

Looks like he did not finish his statement. No ek see geet is mad and has gone off to her dads. And our maan Babu has followed. Is he trying to manofy her???

Thank you so much dear glad you likes it 🤗

You will see why Maan went there in the next 😉