MG: Be Mine Thread 3 || Authors note on PG 96 - Page 31

precap

She went back home and he followed her there. Doesn't look like they had a talk yet.

Nice update

Waiting for next update....

Very happy with the update

Love geet ka gussa 👏👏

Ab maan ko akl aayegi

Precap is like geet maan ko chod kr chli gyi h aur maan uske peeche peeche gya h

Nice ab geet ko bhi na maan se waisa hi behave Krna chahiye jaisa maan kr rha tha

Maan deserves this

Geet don't forgive maan easily 😉😉

Thnku for mentioning my name ☺️

Congratulations to all winners of the Award

Well Done

Thank you for including me too , much appreciated !!!!

Part 42

Emotional , Awesome and Mind Blowing

Of course Geet's out burst was needed but at the same time

it was unexpected .

the very words Geet ask Maan about his love is something that I asked

too and seeing Geet letting out just a little of her pain

while Maan sees her in that condition now that was something great

yes it is an eye opener for Maan as he always only thought that Geet

betrayed his love , he never not once thought why did she refuse him

though the update was short I liked the fact that Geet stopped herself

to say anything further while it seems a little difficult for Maan

now to express his love or all of his emotions to Geet

this was indeed needed between them

now at least Maan will know that there was something that stopped Geet

he will now know that at that time she held fear and love for him

Curious Precap

Geet is at her home and Maan visiting

did she leave KM and perhaps now Maan

wanting her back , trying to woe her

42

geet's out bust push maan to ask the reason of her rejection

After geet outburst maan desperately want to know her reason of refusal

Precap: is superb

Very short update.

But i'm happy

So maan wants to know the reason..

Hw still loves her.

Precap is superb.

Update soon.

Thank you for your lovely comments about my feedback. I do love your story and I would like to say thank you. It’s lovely coming back from a hard days work and unwinding with such great writing that takes me into another world.

You are correct I feel like killing this Maan at times. Loved the update today, so thank you. I’m glad you have made this Geet strong, i couldn’t have taken it if she kept crying ( I would have pulled my hair out). Ok so she didn’t punch him (that would probably have hurt her more so good thinking Geet!) but i’m So happy that she used all her strength to push him. That knocked him for six.

She is still angry with him, so it obviously means he did not complete the ‘love you’ bit. He will come out with something silly to cover himself for sure, so he is still frustrating, definitely a dusht danav! However, is he melting? He seems to want to make it up with with her which is why he is following her. Looking forward to the next update to find out.

Thank you again!

Great part

N glad Maan will know the reason now

Also precap sounds interesting

Cont soon