ShaKhi OS || Shor || - Page 5

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Great!! Amazing.......

I wanted to write something on this plot and could definitely tell I would have not be able to do justice the way you did.

Hats off!

Thank you ❤️

Too sweet you are! But you should definitely write. I mean if not this then something else. I would love to read !!

Originally posted by: Akanksha29100

This made me smile hard❤️

Shukriya ...bahut bahut shukriya! Also, I might write since I am kind of obsessed with them now but I am too blank for now. Today I even thought of few plots but nothing came up well. My sunday was wasted. The falling in love part between a teacher and student is too tough to write actually. Like you have to maintain that dignity. It can't be just sexual tension. 😵

Yess, there is so much to take into considereration while writing on such sensitive topic . I don't know how you all comeup with such amazing writings.

Take your time. As you are obssessed with them, I'm obssessed with them and your story too. So will wait for you next work.🤗

Love!!😘

Loved this. I could feel the pain Anokhi is going through. Please continue this if possible ❤️

Akanksha (That's your name right? 😊) This gotta be one of the best OS's I've read for any couple I've ever adored. Like the drama, thrill, sadness & everything was so on point.

The best dialogue for me was how Anokhi dropped the mic saying 'Its you too' like so true! That woman & the 'mother' of theirs needs to understand domestic violence or suppression is no joke & take a stand. In Babli's case she could've divorced the man if she had the guts when she could but she's still stirring the curry for no reason I like how you highlighted the issue with them.

Anokhi's decision of not getting anyone's help was good, like too much help would become a burden. Shaurya's conflict was written well too. Ofc the dude's getting affected because its anokhi!

I was sympathizing with Anokhi throughout & I just hope we can get another chapter for this OS? Like a proper closure for the poor girl who has no ones support for now? Need not be romantic but it would be nice to see how you unfold the problem.

Great job, keep writing more (I've been a massive arshi fan too 😆) & more for ShaKhi!

This is one of the best Os I've read in a long time. 🤩 Loved hw Anokhi stood up against her brother 👍. it's so sad that still parents are ready to make excuses for their sons, even when they turn murderers. N yes it's also the fault of the woman of she stays quiet n bear domestic violence silently. I'm happy that Anokhi broke off al shackles n decided to fly solo wtht takng any help from anyone. 💞

Originally posted by: Cherrydreamsxx

Loved this. I could feel the pain Anokhi is going through. Please continue this if possible ❤️

Thank you❤️

I would love to continue but then I legit have no idea what to write further so this is it for now 😆

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Akanksha (That's your name right? 😊) This gotta be one of the best OS's I've read for any couple I've ever adored. Like the drama, thrill, sadness & everything was so on point.

The best dialogue for me was how Anokhi dropped the mic saying 'Its you too' like so true! That woman & the 'mother' of theirs needs to understand domestic violence or suppression is no joke & take a stand. In Babli's case she could've divorced the man if she had the guts when she could but she's still stirring the curry for no reason I like how you highlighted the issue with them.

Anokhi's decision of not getting anyone's help was good, like too much help would become a burden. Shaurya's conflict was written well too. Ofc the dude's getting affected because its anokhi!

I was sympathizing with Anokhi throughout & I just hope we can get another chapter for this OS? Like a proper closure for the poor girl who has no ones support for now? Need not be romantic but it would be nice to see how you unfold the problem.

Great job, keep writing more (I've been a massive arshi fan too 😆) & more for ShaKhi!

Thank you ❤️

Yup it's Akanksha ! I am so glad you enjoyed reading this. Also, I do want to see Anokhi standing on her own in the show for few times, like legit struggling to survive. With Babli and even Mrs. Bhalla, I hope CV's do justice with the issue.

About continuing, bro trust me I myself would love to but I literally have no idea how to write this further so yeaaa... 😆

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87

This is one of the best Os I've read in a long time. 🤩 Loved hw Anokhi stood up against her brother 👍. it's so sad that still parents are ready to make excuses for their sons, even when they turn murderers. N yes it's also the fault of the woman of she stays quiet n bear domestic violence silently. I'm happy that Anokhi broke off al shackles n decided to fly solo wtht takng any help from anyone. 💞

Awwww, Thank you! ❤️

Really glad you enjoyed reading!!

Loved it! Loved how Anokhi took stand for herself. ❤

This was beautiful! And definitely brought out so many emotions for Anokhi, she is made of rock!