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Posted: 5 years ago
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I felt funny ๐Ÿ˜„ when Anokhi said aap ke har ek Birthday mein, mein hi yaad aaungi, mere bina aap Birthday nahi mana sakte.

In this scene mein kuch aur nahi likh sakte the writers๐Ÿ˜”

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Posted: 5 years ago
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๐Ÿ˜† Agree with you..

It could be written like - aapko aapke har birthday par main yaad aaungi.. as what have you done today.. that I tried to make it good but you ruined it..

N your birthday would be incomplete without thinking of me... mera tarika galat hai, par irada nahi...

Mere bina janamdin nahi manega is categorically middle class...๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indulatha

I felt funny ๐Ÿ˜„ when Anokhi said aap ke har ek Birthday mein, mein hi yaad aaungi, mere bina aap Birthday nahi mana sakte.

In this scene mein kuch aur nahi likh sakte the writers๐Ÿ˜”

Direct bhavishyavani from the horseโ€™s mouth

How did Anokhi connect herself directly to shaurya ๐Ÿคช

Ok understand that he will remember the incident every birthday as per her saying

But what was the need for saying that dekiyega ek din mere bina aap apna birthday nahi manaoge ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Poor shaurya was more confused than all of us ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

He must be thinking do I have to invite her every year ???

Whoever is writing is way to excited to push the story ๐Ÿ˜†

Pls control take it slow

We are all here no rush ๐Ÿคฃ Aaraam se pls

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: brat2008

Direct bhavishyavani from the horseโ€™s mouth

How did Anokhi connect herself directly to shaurya ๐Ÿคช

Ok understand that he will remember the incident every birthday as per her saying

But what was the need for saying that dekiyega ek din mere bina aap apna birthday nahi manaoge ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Poor shaurya was more confused than all of us ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

He must be thinking do I have to invite her every year ???

Whoever is writing is way to excited to push the story ๐Ÿ˜†

Pls control take it slow

We are all here no rush ๐Ÿคฃ Aaraam se pls

๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: brat2008

Direct bhavishyavani from the horseโ€™s mouth

How did Anokhi connect herself directly to shaurya ๐Ÿคช

Ok understand that he will remember the incident every birthday as per her saying

But what was the need for saying that dekiyega ek din mere bina aap apna birthday nahi manaoge ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Poor shaurya was more confused than all of us ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

He must be thinking do I have to invite her every year ???

Whoever is writing is way to excited to push the story ๐Ÿ˜†

Pls control take it slow

We are all here no rush ๐Ÿคฃ Aaraam se pls

He must be thinking do I have to invite her every year ???smiley44

Whoever is writing is way to excited to push the story smiley36

Pls control take it slow

We are all here no rush smiley37 Aaraam se pls

Ha ha true 100%

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: brat2008

Direct bhavishyavani from the horseโ€™s mouth

How did Anokhi connect herself directly to shaurya ๐Ÿคช

Ok understand that he will remember the incident every birthday as per her saying

But what was the need for saying that dekiyega ek din mere bina aap apna birthday nahi manaoge ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Poor shaurya was more confused than all of us ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

He must be thinking do I have to invite her every year ???

Whoever is writing is way to excited to push the story ๐Ÿ˜†

Pls control take it slow

We are all here no rush ๐Ÿคฃ Aaraam se pls

Shourya will think, isse accha mein apna Birthday nahi manaou,

Aaj ke din par bhi Entertainment, Entertainment and Entertainment ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It reminded me of Shaguns curse - what is it with mega predictions for the future ๐Ÿ˜† and so specific but they do the trick in our minds ๐Ÿ˜†


but yes we know whatโ€™s going to happen in the future, they will celebrate many bdays together someday ๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

๐Ÿ˜† Agree with you..

It could be written like - aapko aapke har birthday par main yaad aaungi.. as what have you done today.. that I tried to make it good but you ruined it..

N your birthday would be incomplete without thinking of me... mera tarika galat hai, par irada nahi...

Mere bina janamdin nahi manega is categorically middle class...๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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Anokhi beta your dialogue was utterly down market and middle-class.๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ

Maya Sarabhai my favourite.

Yours?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: somewhereover

It reminded me of Shaguns curse - what is it with mega predictions for the future ๐Ÿ˜† and so specific but they do the trick in our minds ๐Ÿ˜†


but yes we know whatโ€™s going to happen in the future, they will celebrate many bdays together someday ๐Ÿ˜†

but yes we know whatโ€™s going to happen in the future, they will celebrate many bdays together someday smiley36



Celebrate tab karenge jab Shaurya bachega.


Already Anokhi was trying to physically harm him by pepper spray, shoe and flying noodles ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ


But now she is playing mental games with him to make him insane.


R I P Shaurya's brain cells ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

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Posted: 5 years ago
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100% agree with you. The word choice could have been done differently.

Edited by Duaa2418 - 5 years ago

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