ShaKhi OS - ENDLESS LOVE - Page 3

Originally posted by: SapSur

That was such a beautiful one shot..The way Anokhi was fiercely protective of Shaurya, that was absolutely wow... I loved it totally..Shaurya and Anokhi's conversation, it warmed my heart on so many levels...Her rage at the thought of being away from Shaurya and he being there to comfort her, it was really well expressed...And finally Shaurya having the perfect solution, she can study abroad and he will be with her..Simply brilliant.....👏

Thankyou so much for this reply ,I am glad you liked it and I really hope we do see a protective Anokhi about Shaurya once she understands him and he will be supportive 💜.

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

What should I even write to appreciate this one?

I mean, the concept.. The execution and the whole os was so touching and beautifully weaved from beginning to the end.

The emotion you portrayed of them was serene!! ❤

Loved it so much!

Please do write more stuff on them! I would really enjoy reading your work❤😋

Thankyou so so much,glad you liked it.I do hope to write more soon.

Originally posted by: Fahmida21

Aahhhggg im all jelly. Omg this is sooo good. The possessiveness and love. Shaurya and Anokhi both deserve something like this. Omg im in love. ❤️loved it!!!!

Thankyou so much.So glad you enjoyed reading it.And truly both Anokhi and Shaurya deserve this kind of love.

This is so endearing and basically the perfect evolution of their relationship. This is what I want to see in the future. I don't read lot of FF/OS because I like sticking to the narrative of the show and keep those characteristics intact. But this goes so well with the show... keeping their characteristics and awesome character growth. Loved it

Originally posted by: Nomadic_Vibe

Now that's what I called life comong to a full circle and growth in character. Both Anokhi and Shaurya showed that you can choose love and career both. There is no need to choose btw the two. You wrote beautifully. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one. Do write more. Look forward to reading it.

Thankyou so much.And indeed one can choose both.So glad you enjoyed reading this and I hope to write more soon💜

Originally posted by: krazykaju

Woww.....

This is just phenomenal. 👏

I soo want them to get the love they want, the love they deserve. This exactly gave them that.

Someone chose him before everything.❤️

Someone stood with her so she can fly.❤️

Loved Astha Anokhi part too. Astha needed to see what her actions resulted in.

Beautiful.

Love!!🤗

Bold: so beautifully said. This is so touching

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Hey! I'm new to the SAAKK forum though I've been around here for years. The first thing I read on this forum is this OS & this was just amazing!

Prolly what everyone would wanna see as a characteristic change in Shaurya. The soft hearted demeanour with sense. The present Shaurya's personality is in contrast with how you've portrayed him, who actually understands reality, supports his partner & maybe even ready to sacrifice for Anokhi. It would be interesting to see how their dynamics change later & I just realised that after reading this OS 😆

Great job!

Hey I am glad you liked this OS and honestly Shaurya might be even more supportive for Anokhi once he is in love with her.Right now his views are just veiled which will sort out soon I hope.

Originally posted by: Luilui

wowwwww!!!!!!!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰what an awesome OS!!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰I really loved it...... it makes me calm and relax as it was a happy ending OS😁😁😁😁thank you for such an awesome OS🥰🥰🥰🥰

Thankyou so much,I am glad it could calm you and make you happy.Happy Endings are needed atleast in fiction.

Originally posted by: deepshiii

Oh gosh!😍😍Totally in love☺️ This has to be the most soothing and heart pleasing story🙈♥️ I really wish we get to see this in the show where Anokhi takes a stand for Shaurya. Also, the choice of words and the way the story was written and presented was par excellent. Loved it to bits and pieces❤️❤️

Please do write more🥰

Thankyou so much Deepshii and I hope the same too that we see Anokhi taking a stand for Shaurya someday soon.Hope to write more soon.

Originally posted by: Vishi-

This was the first ShaKhi OS that I read and must say it deserves endless love

You have penned it down brilliantly

Just loved it

I so wish we get something like this in show too

I think you and Anokhi here in this OS understands Shaurya the best

Btw Aapne toh Shaurya Anokhi m thoughts mein hi nai unke mind ki bhi progress Kari hai

Shaurya can teach anywhere

And even Anokhi is right padhai zaruri hai vo Kahi se bhi ho sakti .👍🏼

This OS deserves stars stars and lots of stars

Thankyou so so much Vishi.This compliment really means a lot to me and I hope I continue to understand him and do them both justice.