Immj os - The Angel's Devil.. chap 27 page 21 completed - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
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That's amazing👏

Loved the choice of your actors!!

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Chapter 6- New Beginning, Kidnapping and Torture part 1


After Riddhima was discharged from the hospital, Ayan took her to his house and no amount of argument could stop it. Riddhima was in awe of how beautiful and quaint the house looked.


Ayan looked at her and said- I have a suprise for you. He took her towards another room which was completely bare.


Ayan - This is your room, i know you want to start afresh and what better way to start with your room, a place where you can be you, you can decorate it the way you, and dont worry about the money i will pay for it and you can pay me later as i know your self respect wont allow you to take anything free.


Riddhima listening to all of this suddenly hugs ayan and starts crying, and even though it was difficult for him he let cry so that she can feel relieved, after a while riddhima sniffles and he lightens the mood by joking.


Ayan - Kya yaar, jaan you destroyed by shirt by making it wet and rubbing snot on it.

Riddhima hits him and glares at him. He asks riddhima to change and rest in the guest room since her room was not yet done.

Days go by and Riddhima was slowly returning to her chirpy self, arranging her room with beautiful curtains, and various knickknacks, in the evening Ayan used to take Riddhima to Marine Drive and they would often fight over how many panipuri one could have, and it was usually Riddhima who won.


One day they were both sitting in the balcony watching the sunset when riddhima spoke- You were right that day, when you told me not trust Kabir and not help in his, now i think i would have saved myself from heartbreak and humiliation if i had refused him.


But now what happened is happened but i want to punish them for playing with feelings, torturing me and humiliating me.


Ayan (rubbing his neck) - Will you be angry with me if i say that i already started the revenge.


He showed the video of Ishani shoplifting and the humiliation she faced, and also told about her miscarriage and divorce. And for the first time in months she laughed, and though she was sad that an innocent baby died but then she thought it was for the better because maybe in the future it would turned into another Ishani or Vansh.


Ayan - So, whom should we pick next for your punishment. ?


Riddhima- How about Chanchal and Aryan? And i have positively horrifying plan for them.


Chanchal pov


It was Rudra and Chanchal wedding anniversary and she thought she should ask the jeweler to polish her precious gold ornaments so that she can wear it in the party.

She went to the jeweler and give her ornaments and in the evening when she was returning with jewelry, she got a video message in the phone which horrified her to the core, and along with the video was an address and instructions to come at the place along with her jewelry and also a warning to not tell anyone.


PS - What do you think was in the video? Also suggest some romantic ideas for riddhima and ayan, most moments are cliche and done with riansh already😂😂🤭🤭

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Loving it though I find hard to accept Rids would torture anyone.. as in series she is show shown so forgiving 🙄

Loving her grayer side

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: veil_of_roses

Loving it though I find hard to accept Rids would torture anyone.. as in series she is show shown so forgiving 🙄

Loving her grayer side


Just to ease you🤭🤭Well she is planning only and execution is done by Ayan and his various men...😂😂

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chappy 7 is so lovely update between two friends I didn't expect ayan start his revenge so fast I think revenge and romance have balanced equal in coming update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: KV2711

Chappy 7 is so lovely update between two friends I didn't expect ayan start his revenge so fast I think revenge and romance have balanced equal in coming update


In my mind he is a bit impulsive and reckless so if someone hurt riddhima he wont stop so easily. And any suggestions if you can give on how to go about taking revenge from the trio( vansh , Ahana, and kabir)..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter-7 New beginning, kidnapping, and torture. Part 2


Warning- Torture, kidnapping.


Aryan and Chanchal pov


For most of his life, he has only one thing Vansh this, Vansh that, even his own father praises him, he resents that his father was not strong enough to take over the business, and he resents vansh for not ever giving him a chance to prove himself.


This resentment has grown into hatred, he doesnt care about Vansh anymore, he just wants to enjoy his life partying, having fun girls or gambling vansh's hard earned money.


But even in gambling his luck doesn't work, he had pawned some of her mother's jewelry but he lost them as well, not able to digest losing he went to drink in his favorite bar, while returning he didnt see men following him, they hit him on his head and took him away.


The video which Chanchal saw was Aryan getting beaten and tortured, she hurried to reach the address, it was an abandoned factory when saw Aryan tied to a chair she ran to save her heel got stuck in glue she removed and moved towards her son, but when she kept her first step her feet were pierced with glass and nails.


She shrieked and shouted but the kidnapper took aryan away from there.


Man 1- First give us all your jewelry to us and till the time we check it is real or not you have to walk on the glass.

Aryan who had woken up shouts- Mom dont do this run away from, but the kidnapper hits him again


Man-2 Walk or else he dies!!


Chanchal had no other option then to walk on the glass, her feet were bleeding and here the kidnappers realized that the the gold was not real.


Man-1 This all gold is fake, you dare play with us.

Chanchal falls down and begs to leave them, the kidnappers get a message on their phone, they made them unconscious and left them lying near the gate of VR mansion.


Here the family were all in tension as they didnt know where Chanchal and Aryan, when a guard came running and told both of them were lying unconscious at the gate.


The family were horrified to see them in this state and vansh ordered Angre to take them to hospital. He saw a chit in Aryan's hand, he opened it and saw someone had written " The Destruction of your family has begin. Save them if you".


Author pov


The jeweller was a friend of Ayan, and he had switched the real gold with fake gold, and it was Ayan who gave money to people whose money Aryan had taken to kidnap and torture them. It was he who messaged him to leave them at VR mansion and ordered to leave that chit as well.


Riddhima had seen the video of them being and she was surprised that she didn't feel bad, but then she thought when did they ever cared about, and tried to kill her multiple times so why should she bother.


She slept feeling nervous and excited because she was going to rejoin the hospital, she was finally taking control of her life and this time she won't allow anyone to walk over her.


Hey guys, tell me was this okay or too much. Also due to want Angre to switch sides, in the show he was mute spectator do you want him to be angry with vansh and help Ayan and riddhima to take revenge from him.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#48

Angre should help Riddhima ❤️


It was less their pain, so not too much dear. 😉

Riddhima has endured way worse than what they are going trough.


Take care. 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice update👏

Thanks for uploading so fast🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Milalal27

Angre should help Riddhima ❤️


It was less their pain, so not too much dear. 😉

Riddhima has endured way worse than what they are going trough.


Take care. 🤗


Aare abhi chachu hain na unka raaz bhi samane aa wale hain.

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