Jo tum na ho rahenge hum nahi...if you aren't there, I'll not be there... Part 1
Dedicated to Varshatomar2 who wants me to write a Namish Ada story.Dedicated to Insanesoul who wants me to write a story with Ada Sudha Aashka combination.
A group of girls were discussing about their dream man.
One girl was silent.
One girl:Hey Swati..why are you not saying what kind of boy you want?
Swati smiled.
Swati:I prefer a calm,cultured,well mannered boy who does not flirt with girls for time pass.He should respect women.
Another girl:But is this possible to find such a boy in today’s era?
Swati:Of course yes.There is one.
She smiled remembering her first meeting with Vivek.
On the first day of college…
When Vivek entered the college
all the girls were flattered by his appearance.Even Swati was lost in him.Vivek turned out to be her classmate.Swari observed how calm Vivek was to the classmates.
Swati’s eyes were always on Vivek.
A beautiful middle lady entered the college compound.
The boys were drooled over her beauty.
One boy:Avantika Ma’am is so hot.
Another boy:I attend physics class only to see Avantika Ma’am.I can’t take my eyes off her.
Vivek felt disgusted.
Vivek:Are you not ashamed to talk like this about your teacher?She is much older than him and our teacher too.A teacher is equal to our mother and Goddess.Then how can you see Avantika Ma’am with such eyes?Pathetic thought!
Another boy:Why should you care if we look at Avantika Ma’am like that?It’s none of your business.We will enjoy her beauty.You stay out of this.
Vivek stared at them angrily:If you don’t know to respect women go to hell.If you stare at Avantika Ma’am with wrong intention I will not keep quiet.Understand?
Get lost.Otherwise I may hit you.
Vivek walked away angrily.
Swati who overheard this got impressed by Vivek’s attitude towards women.
Swati:He fought for his teacher's dignity.Such a nice guy!
Later Swati noticed the bonding of Avantika and Vivek.Being the best student of class he became Avantika's favourite.
Vivek:Ma'am,I have doubts.
Avantika:You are always having doubts.
Vivek had an embarrassing smile on his face.
Avantka:It's ok.Having doubts is a sign of intelligence.I will explain this portion again.
Vivek:Thank you Ma'am.
He always asks her doubts regarding the academic topcs and she clears his doubts
while he listens to her carefully looking into the book.
Swati observes them and smiles.
After some days…
Swati was walking on the corridor holding some books.Seeing Vivek coming she lost her concentration and walked gazing at him.Because of her carelessness she collided with Vivek and the books fell down.
Vivek:Oh I am sorry.
Swati was on cloud nine as the person she adores secretly talked to her for the first time.She was gazing at him without blinking eyes.
Vivek:Hello…
Swati came back to her senses.
Swati:Don’t say sorry.It’s my fault.I am sorry.
Vivek:It’s not your fault.Sometimes it happens.
Swati thought:Vivek is so calm nd sweet.
Vivek started taking the books from the floor.
Swati was amazed by his helping mentality.
Swati:I will take them.
Vivek:It’s ok.I will help you.
Swati smiled.
Swati too took the remaining books from the floor.
Slowly they both looked at each other.Unknowingly they shared a sweet eye lock.
Vivek broke the eye lock.Swati blushed.
Swati:Thank you very much.
Vivek:No mention please.Bye.
Swati:Bye.
Vivek walked away.Swati smiled.
Swati was walking on the college compound thinking of Vivek.
Suddenly she collided with Avantika.
Avantika:Where is your mind Swati?
Swati:I am so sorry.
Avantika:It’s ok.But be careful.
Swati:Ok.By the way..can I ask you something?
Avantika:Yes.
Swati:What is your opinion about Vivek Chaudhary?
Avantika:He is a nice boy.He is a good student too.
Swati smiled.
Swati thought happily:Avantika aunty is my guardian now.She likes Vivek.So there is no obstacle on my path of love.
Avantika:But why are you asking me about Vivek?
Swati was embarrassed.
Swati smiled:Just like that.I felt that he is the only good boy in our class.That’s why.
Avantika stared at her face with a smile and asked:Really?Only Vivek is good in your eyes?Something fishy.
Swati was embarrassed.
Swati:Nothing like that.
Swati just walked away shyly.
Swati danced joyfully in her room with excitement.Her mind was full of Vivek.
Aaj Main Upar Aasman niche
Aaj Main Aage Jamana hai pichhe
Aaj Main Upar Aasman niche
Aaj Main aage Jamana hai pichhe
Tell me O khuda abb main kya karu
Chalu sidhee kee Ulatee chalu
Aaj Main upar
Aasman niche
Aaj Main aage Jamana hai pichhe
Tell me O khuda abb main kya karu
Chalu sidhee kee Ulatee chalu
Aaj Main Upar Aasman niche
Yunhi bin bat ke chhalke jaye hansee
Dole jab hawa lage Gudgudee
Yunhi bin bat ke chhalke jaye hansee
Dole jab hawa lage Gudgudee
Sambhalu gir padu
Arre arre arre arre arre tauba kya karu
Chalu sidhe kee ulatee chalu...
Aaj mai upar aasman niche
Aaj mai aage jamana hai pichhe
Aaj mai upar aasman niche
Aaj mai aage jamana hai pichhe
Tell me O khuda abb mai kya karu
Sar ke bal ya kadam se chalu
Aaj mai upar aasman niche...
Jhoome jaa mauj me rukna naa jane jaan,
Dekhu yeh tarang rukatee hai kaha
Jhoome jaa mauj me rukna naa jane
Jaan, Dekhu yeh tarang rukatee hai kaha
Main bhee tere sang in lehron pe chalu
Sar ke balya kadam se chalu
Aaj main upar
aasman niche
Aaj main aage jamana hai pichhe
Aaj main upar aasman niche
Aaj main aage jamana hai pichhe
Ho, Tell me o khuda abb mai kya karu
Chalu sidhee kee ulatee chalu
La la la la la...(Khamoshi)
Present….
After the college hour got over…
A middle aged man came to the college to pick up Vivek.Vivek was so surprised that he hugged him.
Vivek:What a surprise Vardhan chachu!
Vardhan:I came this way.So I thought that I will pick you up.We will go for a drive too.What say?
Vivek:That’s cool.
Suddenly Vardhan’s eyes fell on Avantika who came downstairs.Avantika also saw him.
They looked at each other emotionally.
Avantika walked away.Vardhan became upset.
Vivek:What are you thinking chachu?
Vardhan:Nothing.Let’s go.
Vivek:Ok.
At home…
Avantika was gloomy.She was thinking of seeing Vardhan at the college.
Avantika’s mother Yamini came.
Yamini:Avantika…did you think about the marriage proposal?
Avantika:Maa,I already told you that I don’t want to get married.
In this age do you want me to get married?People will mock our family.
Yamini:I don’t care what others will think about your marriage.But I want you to get settled.
Swati also came there.
Avantika stared at Yamini:Really Maa?You don’t care about what people think?Then years back why did you do that sin?Why did you separate me from someone I love the most?
Yamini became upset.Swati was confused.
Yamini:Are you taunting me?But Avantika…I did it only for your better future.Any mother will do what I did.
Avantika:But your so called good decision made me alone.
Yamini became upset.
Avantika walked out painfully.
Swati:What is Avantika aunty saying?I can’t understand anything.Who did you separate her from Nani?
Yamini became dull.
Yamini:Don’t remind me of the past Swati.I don’t want to remember it.I am only worried about Avantika’s future.When I leave this world she will be alone.Knowing her past somebody brought a proposal for her.But she is not ready to accept him.
Swati:Who brought proposal for Avantika aunty?
Yamini:A gentle man named Vardhan Chaudhary.
Swati said in her mind:I think Avantika aunty could not forget her past lover yet.That’s why she is not ble to move on.I have to find out her lover.If possible I will unite them.Only then everything will be good in her life.
Swati is Avantika’s best friend Kkusum’s daughter.Kkusum and her husband Abhay are living in Dubai.After schooling,Swati returned to India.Since then Swati has been staying with Avantika and Yamini as she has no grand parents.She calls Yamini ‘nani’ as she considers her as her own grand mother.
Vardhan was driving his car.He got a call.He became emotional seeing the number on the phone screen as it was Avantika’s call.
Vardhan:Avantika!
Avantika:Vardhan…without even consulting me you contacted my mother and expressed your wish to marry me.Why?What is your intention?Years back itself I had told you that I don’t want to marry you.Then why are you still after me?You found my college and came there like a typical stalker.Right?Now onwards don’t even think of meeting me.Still my answer is ‘no’ to your proposal.So stop stalking me.Good bye.
Avantika cut the call.
Vardhan became upset.
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