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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhiya_cute

Wow waiting for How is this boy and girl.


Thank you so much

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyDriYa

Congratulations for your OS...

Thank you so much

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Posted: 5 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: taahir004

Congratulations on your new FF


A Curious Prologue


Is there two couples ?


or is the 1st couple the same boy that broke

the girls heart


looking forward to the 1st update

Thank you so much

This story have lots of twist and turns and yes you will get to know soon

Nect part updating please read it and good your views

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Posted: 5 years ago
#14

Character entry


Sorry i forgot

Abhay raichand aka vivian dSena - chand and haseena son


Haseena raichand aka kishwar merchant (mother of abhay)


Chand raichand- father of abhay(when abhay was 12 years old he died)



Pia jaisawal aka sukirti khandepal - orphan list her parents in an accident


Panchi dobriyal aka Vahabeez Dorabzee- daughter of dobriyals


Mrs madhu Dobriyal - musha and panchi mother


Arab dobriyal- father of misha and panchi


Other character will introduced soon and those who knows that how to do pic work please tell me will add pic too





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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 1


Girl is crying like hell.she felt cheated.he cheates her for another girl.the girl is none other than pia

Girl(pia) : why it's happening to me.why its always happens to me.first my parents leave me.and now I got cheated.she is repeating her parents

Flashback....

A small girl(8 years old pia) is playing with toys.her dad came and called her name.she ran to her dad and hug his legs. Her dad take her in his arms and kiss her on forehead and give her a giftt.she get happy.

A lady came there.she is none other than pia's momh named sugandh.

Sugandh: raj what are you doing.you wil spoiled her.

Raj(pia's father) : oh look baby someone is jealous from you

Both father and daughter laugh while sugandh is seeing tgem with open mouth.

Sugandh : I am not jealous OK,it just that you always did this.

Raj: so what I am doing it for my daughter.

Sugandh: I know raj but we should be careful right.

Raj: sugandh she is a small child.

Small pia (lovingly) : yech mumma I am a chmall girl.(yes mumma I am a small girl )

Raj: ohhh my daughter is so cute.

Sugandh: akhir beti kiski h.

Raj:yes mine.

Sugandh:no mine.

And they both start arguing.small pia is enjoying this.at last they both stop .

Raj: ok fine,we will ask pia.baby tell me you are my daughter or mumma daughter.you love deda or mumma the most.

Sugandh: yes baby tell your father that you love your mumma the most.

Raj: tell baby that you love your deda the most.

Sugand: no mumma

Raj: no deda.

Sugandh:no mumma

Raj: no no no she love me the most.

Again argument start.little pia seeing this while wild eyes.at last sugandh shouts.

Sugandh:stop it

Raj: what.

Sugandh: let her speak.

Sugandh and raj: pia baby tell us,you love dada or mumma the most.

Little pia with confused face watching both of them and at last she told.

Pia: deda.love deda.

Raj: I love you too my child.

Sugandh( with fack sad face): pia you love deda not mumma,you both father daughter made a team and

Sugandhre is happiness in the forgot about me.no one love me.

She turned her face and make a fake sad face

Both father and daughter : mumma

Sugandh turned to them: what

They both kiss cheeks

Both: love you mumma.

Sugandh with smile: love you too baby

She kiss pia check and take her in her arms.

Raj:love you so much sugandh thank you for giving me this family.

Sugandh: love you too.

They hug each other,a family hug. There was happiness in the house.

Flash back ends***__

Present time

Pia: I was so happy on that time but Who knows that these happiness was not for so long.who knows that these happiness destroy too fast.my happiness got destroyed with my parents death.I still remember that day.I can never forget that day.

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Finally write something.please forgive me for my mistakes.

Please do vote and comments.your comments will encourage me.so please give your precious views about this story so that I can improve my writing.so don't forget to do vote and comments


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Posted: 5 years ago
#16

Nice update.👏

Poor Piya got cheated by who? Abhay?😭đŸ˜Č

Oh no.😭

Also she has no family😭

Flashback with baby Piya was super cute.😎

Please update soon. I wondering what is going to happen next.😛

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Posted: 5 years ago
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interesting story 👏 add me in pm list please 😉

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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

Waiting for, feeling sad for piya đŸ„ș

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Posted: 5 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Abhiya29

Nice update.👏

Poor Piya got cheated by who? Abhay?😭đŸ˜Č

Oh no.😭

Also she has no family😭

Flashback with baby Piya was super cute.😎

Please update soon. I wondering what is going to happen next.😛

Yes lia is facing too much but so much twist and turns are waiting for you all please enjoy

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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: barki

interesting story 👏 add me in pm list please 😉

Yes shure updating next part please enjoy reading and do gives suggestion too

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