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Originally posted by: divyadaya13
Loved both chapters๐
Thank you didi๐คโฅ๏ธ
Sorry for commenting late...I was quite busy
So now coming back to the chapter i mean chapters๐the updates were love.....I liked jalal's conditions and jo agreed to sleep with him it means she trusts him๐ฅณ๐Jo's effects on jalal ๐คฃhe is literally shameless ๐ allover they are a naughty couple๐jalal's jealousy when she talks about surya....awwwโบI hope she realises her love...eagerly waiting for Thursday
Best regards,
Ananya ๐ฉ
Sorry for commenting late...I was quite busy
So now coming back to the chapter i mean chapters๐the updates were love.....I liked jalal's conditions and jo agreed to sleep with him it means she trusts him๐ฅณ๐Jo's effects on jalal ๐คฃhe is literally shameless ๐ allover they are a naughty couple๐jalal's jealousy when she talks about surya....awwwโบI hope she realises her love...eagerly waiting for Thursday
Best regards,
Ananya ๐ฉ
Thank you dear๐คโฅ๏ธ
Didi updateee today is Thursday
CHAPTER 22
After the incident that night, the relationship between Jalal and Jodha got closer, they didn't hesitate to kiss wherever and whenever they wanted, even though the words "I love You" didn't come out of their mouths but they had each other.
and Surya still often tries to meet jodha, although now jodha does not hate him like before still jodha can not completely forgive.
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Days pass.....
one fine morning, both jodha and jalal got ready to go to their respective work, they were surprised when they opened the door there were so many flower bouquets lined up neatly in front of their apartment door, they confused about who does this until surya appeared carrying a bunch of jodha's favorite flowers.
"Happy Birthday cherry baby ..." said surya while handing the flower to jodha. Jodha and Jalal were surprised by seeing surya. "I will never forget anything related to you cherry baby. I wish you to have life full of happiness," said surya, and jodha just smile at him. "This is a gift for you .. open it .." said suya while handing a small box to Jodha, hesitantly Jodha accepted the gift and open it. it was a beautiful necklace with a heart-shaped pendant.
"This is very pretty, thank you surya." said Jodha. Jalal was getting stifled by seeing the drama in front of him.
"sweetheart, you are getting late to work ??" said Jalal curtly, surya who knew what Jalal meant, went from there after bid bye to them.
"Why didn't you tell me that today is your birthday?!?!" Asked jalal annoyed at jodha,
"I ... I ... also forgot that today is my ... birthday..." said Jodha. "So far I have never celebrated my birthday, but surya..."
"do not mention the man's name again in front of me!!!" scolded jalal who immediately left jodha without saying anything.
"SURYA ... I know what your plan is.. i will not let you approach my wife again, bas***d!!" said jalal angrily to himself.
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That day jodha came home late from the village, when she arrived at the door of her apartment jodha saw a pink envelope that written "To: JODHA", she opened the letter and started reading it.
"Happy Birthday, my wife, I wish you a long and healthy life full of happiness and joy, I'm sorry I just saying it now. On your special day, I want to say something important, you asked me why I care for you even though I hate you, at that time I didn't know what the answer is, even now I still haven't found the answer. But one thing I found is that I feel sad when you cry, I feel very happy when I see you smile, I like your scolding, your kisses, your hugs, everything in you.. I can say that now my goal to live is YOU, my heart beats your name, I breathe through YOU, if this is what people mean LOVE, that means JALALLUDIN AKBAR LOVE JODHA SHARMA.
I LOVE YOU, SWEETHEART
P.S. dont tease me
Your JALAL"
Jodha cry in happiness after reading the letter. jalal who heard a crying sound from outside opened the door and immediately hugged jodha who was crying.
"Happy Birthday my wife .. i love you, sweetheart," said jalal softly which made jodha cry even louder. "Hey ... Don't cry here. people will think you are crying asking for responsibility because I impregnated you." jalal teases which makes jodha laugh in her tears.
Once they entered in the apartment, Jodha was surprised by the state of the apartment full of balloons everywhere ...
"oh my god...."
"you like it??" Asked Jalal.
"thank you .. my husband..". said jodha and kiss jalal's cheek.
"Just cheeks ??? lips ??."
"Give me a present first then I'll give you a kiss!!!"
"i will give your gift later, now blow the candle before that make a wish first." Jodha closes her eyes and pray...
"oh god, i want to live with jalal until my last breath" then jodha blows out the candle.
"now we eat, I cook especially for you," said Jalal as he led jodha to the dining table,
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"Now give my gift," said jodha, Jalal hands over a large box to jodha, Jodha is enthusiastically ripping the gift wrapper, curious about what gift Jalal gave her,but when she opens the box, she was surprised.
"where is the gift?? why is it empty ?? are playing with me??" said jodha annoyed, while jalal just smiled.
"Indeed I only gave you this empty box because there are so many beautiful things in this world that I want to give to you and I want to present them one by one to you sweetheart. This box will hold the memories of every moment in our lives." jodha can not hold back her tears hearing jalal.
"hey ... this should be my happy day, why are you making me cry so much?!!!" jalal just hug jodha.
they looked at each other full of love, they could feel each other's breath. Jalal kiss jodha's lips softly and passionately, this time jodha kisses jalal with the same passion, but the soft kiss turns into a hot and demanding kiss, jodha moans in kiss making jalal deepen his kiss, jalal break kiss and kiss jodha's neck makes jodha writhe in pleasure.
"Jo.โฆ please help meโฆ I can't control myself anymore, please." pleaded jalal.
"Jalal .. I .. Iโฆ don't wantโฆ youโฆ youโฆ Stopโฆ" said Jodha giving her approval to Jalal. jalal happily carried his wife into their room.
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Jalal slowly made jodha lay on the bed, he keeps looking at jodha intensely.
"I'm ready to become mrs. jalal." said jodha smilingly. Without thinking, Jalal immediately crushed Jodha's lips full of desire, to which Jodha replied with great desire, Jalal kissed Jodha's neck leaving some kiss mark traces there. Jalal started to take off jodha's clothes one by one, he was amazed when he saw the beauty of his wife's body. he didn't leave a single inch in jodha's body. Jodha keeps moaning in pleasure.
"are you ready to go further sweetheart ..." asked jalal hoarsely. jodha just nodded doubtfully, felt a little afraid because this is the first for jodha.
"hold on me sweetheart." said jalal
Jalal began to unite their bodies, "Aaah ... jalal ..." screamed jodha in pain and tears run down her cheeks.
Jalal paused for a moment as their bodies perfectly mingle, giving Jodha to adjust to him. he wipes her tear with his lips. Jalal began to move slowly in rhythm, then he moves faster. both were moaning in pleasure.
"look at me jo .. I want to come with you .." They stare at each other lovingly on the verge of despair of their desires. they scream each other's names as they reached their peak of pleasure.
"I love you Mrs Jalal" whispered jalal. They fall asleep hugging each other, enjoying the love that has grown in their hearts.
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FORGIVE ME FOR THE SPELLING AND GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES...
THE NEXT UPDATE WILL BE TOMORROW....
THANK YOUUUU...๐ค๐
Wow soo good update
โค๏ธ
Amazing chappy
He confessed
Jo should also say her love
Consummated too
Update soon
Thanks for Pm
Loved it dear
Awesome part๐
I loved how Jalal surprise her on her birthday๐ beautiful๐โจโค
Surya intention to me seems doubtful but good that Jalal is keeping a watch
Finally they become as normal couple Consumating their marriage
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon๐
Awesome chapter โค๏ธ
Saya ingin pembaruan berikutnya segera .. jika tidak saya akan membunuh Anda ๐คฃ๐
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