Mineil SS "The Good n the Evil" part 4 pg 33 updated on 27/03/2022 - Page 12

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Main to sharam se paani paani ho jaungi☺️

Aur wo toh behosh ho jayega🤣

He always ask me to let him read my stories and the chats on IF. But I have strictly warned him to stay away. I told him that what I write here or comment, its my alter ego...a totally different world...he should not come here ever🤣

🤣🤣 I think it's same for all of us 🤣our later egos 🤣

but he should read your works. He shall know the writer in you and how good you are Anjali. He will be your best critic also .

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Bechara chhup jayega kahi sharam se🤣

He will also fly in air seeing your loveable comments on him. Just like Minnu's Neil disco and rib dancing😆

Originally posted by: anjali0111

☺️☺️

Thoda thoda🤣

We knew it 🤣

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Main to sharam se paani paani ho jaungi☺️

Aur wo toh behosh ho jayega🤣

He always ask me to let him read my stories and the chats on IF. But I have strictly warned him to stay away. I told him that what I write here or comment, its my alter ego...a totally different world...he should not come here ever🤣

Alter egos🤣 true 🤣but he should read sordid ☺️ make him read it and also neil kitten ones ☺️ am sure he will be proud of you in all ways

Originally posted by: su_94

🤣🤣 I think it's same for all of us 🤣our later egos 🤣

but he should read your works. He shall know the writer in you and how good you are Anjali. He will be your best critic also .

Thats what I fear. He will laugh at me for eternity.

He is a well read person and also grammar nazi😆 The speed with which he finsihes a book still amaze me.🤪

First he will point out mistakes like some school teacher. If I had wrote in a notebook then he would have marked it all with red pen🤣

Then he will give his comments on story or plot which I am sure wont be of any use🤣as he is not much into the feel, the thought process, the character development.

So better he stays away🤣

Originally posted by: su_94

He will also fly in air seeing your loveable comments on him. Just like Minnu's Neil disco and rib dancing😆

Sharma jayega bechara🤣

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Alter egos🤣 true 🤣but he should read sordid ☺️ make him read it and also neil kitten ones ☺️ am sure he will be proud of you in all ways

Dont know he may be angry for using some personal moments☺️🤣

Or I am just thinking too much....men never remembers anything😳🤣

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Dont know he may be angry for using some personal moments☺️🤣

Or I am just thinking too much....men never remembers anything😳🤣

See you two will know if personal or no but not readers . Actually it's good way to find out what audiences think,react 😉🤣 you two can have personal laugh , blush, moment

@bold 💯 fact 🤣 after work done they 😈 idiots😈

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

@bold 💯 fact 🤣 after work done they 😈 idiots😈

yeah but girls remember each and every move of ages 🤣☺️🤣

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Thats what I fear. He will laugh at me for eternity.

He is a well read person and also grammar nazi😆 The speed with which he finsihes a book still amaze me.🤪

First he will point out mistakes like some school teacher. If I had wrote in a notebook then he would have marked it all with red pen🤣

Then he will give his comments on story or plot which I am sure wont be of any use🤣as he is not much into the feel, the thought process, the character development.

So better he stays away🤣

Raja sa sounds like dangerous brainy. If he sees our language, grammar here then🤣

@bold 🤣 I can imagine this 🤣 I remembered Neil kitten 🤣 when he catches her leaving for trip🤣

School days 🤣i use to hate when those teachers would round off mistakes with their red pen😈🤣 show off like 🤣

True if he had seen the show or had feelings for characters then he would have understood or even given good feed back