OS - It Hurts 14*1 - Page 2

Originally posted by: loquacious_soul

This is absolutely amazing🤗. I loved how you conveyed a whole array of emotions in such a short OS.❤️ Arnav' agony and struggle after seeing her was heart breaking🥺.

Thank you so much dear 💕

Originally posted by: Vindria12

The OS is so good❤️Loved it🤗

Thanks 🤗

Originally posted by: sanoniti

Your writing is wonderful dear you portrayed the emotions too well but I don't like khushi here how can she leave without saying anything to Arnav or her family that too on her marriage day if only she told him the truth they should not have wasted 5 years of their togetherness.

Thank you so much :)

She was broken when her parents abandoned her, she didn't had courage to face Arnav after that.

I would try to give a story with better ending next time :)

Originally posted by: coderlady

She could not have sent him a message before leaving? And even if she took the responsibility for the child, she could have told him.

Thanks for reading :)

She wasn't confident to face him after her parents abandoned her. I tried twist the tale but seems like no one is happy with it :(

Originally posted by: Savera84

Good one Shiri! 👍🏼

It was a love marriage and they were Arnav and Khushi. So, I am sure something must have happened which took her away from the wedding and she still loves him. The twist was good.

Cheers.....

Thank you so much ❤

Glad you like it 🤗

Originally posted by: ShiriFictionPen

Thank you so much dear 💕

I think I need to work on writing the climax scenes 😅😅

I wanted to drop a bomb at the end but seems like no one liked the twist 😳

Haha! I don't know about liking or not but it was definitely a twist that was unexpected. So you managed the suspense well 😳.

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

Haha! I don't know about liking or not but it was definitely a twist that was unexpected. So you managed the suspense well 😳.

Thanks 🤗

She shuld have talked, loved it

Emotions potrayed excellently

But sry dumb story line

She ran aways from the wedding to the hospital for her friends who were dead by the time she reached, in the period of technology she cannot even inform anyone hell she cant even just say to anyone before leaving(a wedding house full of people), a note????

When she came back everything was over??? What was over did everone dissappeared?? Vanished or died..

Common everyone was angry but a normal confrontation with arnav her inlawas or her parents could have solved everything.

Very lame story line..