Happy end with a bang. - Page 2

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Wow, it is very different, awesome, wonderful

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Originally posted by: RadhaChauhan

Lovely write-up! You summed up all of it so beautifully. Always a pleasure to read.

@ RadhaChauhan Thank you for feedback. It is so nice to read an analytic feedback for a poem...❤️

Originally posted by: sammy17

👏👏👏 Arre koi award toh de iss khurri nu ❤️👏

@ sammy17 bolo...kya award deneki soch rahe ho...?

Bahot sara❤️🤗chalega waise..!

Summed up everything in a single go... Loved it.

Speechless 👏Superb

Originally posted by: Jiss555

Speechless 👏Superb

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I’m glad they end pakhi and virat story 👏

Originally posted by: MyThoughts

In Nasik,when his battery sank,

A girl saved him, Shivani bua her power bank,

The 'junoon' girl danced as if she had drank,

Still he lost heart, at just '2 day wala' camp.

He thought it's a 'true love', an illusion to be frank,

Left the hotel room, with her number on his hand,

Matured, the girl was, as much he could understand,

But the girl was a narcissist, had lot on her demand.

The girl blocked his number when he did not identify,

In anger the girl said, she would marry another lad,

Douchbag, he thought, their love was all grand,

Promised he would preserve it till life has an end

Then he met a 'muffat' girl who had got first rank,

'Connection' he felt with her, that 'Kaynaat' had designed

Married he got with the girl, saying it is just 'farz' errand,

Nothing just a 'deal' he said, leaving the girl almost blank.

His heart started beating, seeing the girl,all saree clad,

Enjoyed he lot with her, leaving the other girl in angst,

Soon to realise the other girl was not the image he had,

But real mature was the girl, everyone thought was mad,

Started he falling for the girl which he never had planned

Ignoring now what he feels, burring his head in sand,

One day he would know the 'True love' after a lot of pang.

What he then does is to see,to have happy end with a bang.

Wow! Excellent 👏👏

Originally posted by: njain16385

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Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Wow! Excellent 👏👏

Dhanyavaad..😊

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