Arshi FF - "The Captive Heart" part 3 on 3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

Hello!

Hey 🤗

Sorry for reserving the comment quick and editing it late 😆. I came online to message someone and saw your PM at the same time. So I reserved the post but became busy with other things later on.

That's completely alright😳 I was just trying to post on my fanfiction when I saw your res post and got surprised how quick it was 😆 then I knew you will take time to read and gave view to 😳 thank you😊

Read the chapter just now. Arnav is quite confused. He says he understands how mutual consent is important but is still keeping her captive against her will. His thoughts and actions don't really match up.

"His heart on conflict action depend on complex brain often lead to act which differ from what we feel. 😳 in this update I try to keep it out from his side, like how he at once was read to back off and let her go then next minute full confident to keep her confused soul 😆 hence his act doesn't match his words 😳

No wonder Khushi hates him. Even if he is not responsible for the murder of her lover, Arnav's actions from the very first day are despicable. It's going to be an uphill task for him to change her opinion.

"For now he had his reason, but not justified to her, or any sane person out there because you cannot reasoned out the abduction ever 😳 sure it's going to be one hell roller coaster ride 😎

Waiting to see how he does that in future chapters 😳.

"Thank you so much 🤗for giving try to this and looking forward to how the leads work further 😳

Love,

Stuti

🤗thsmk you Stuti take care 😳

Originally posted by: bubulswt

amazing update hope Arshi will talk to each other

and start with at lest with friendship

Thank you 🤗 I'm glad you liked it 😳

Communication is key let's see what they do 😊

Thank you for your feedback 🤗

Take care 😊

prologue

Has he kidnapped her? Because he loves her?

chapter 1

He is not as bad as he seems. He took away the land but provided another shelter to those kids too. He was looking for a girl for a few years?

Did he end up getting obsessed with her? She had every right to slap him. He feels bad about it now and wants to apologize.

chapter 2

She thinks he got her boyfriend killed, but he didn't. So what happened to him?

Full of misunderstandings.. i hope they talk and clear them out. Please continue the story. I would love to find out what really happened

Originally posted by: coderlady

prologue

Has he kidnapped her? Because he loves her?

Perhaps yes, for now love or obsession seem perfect reason but more you will come to know in story 😳

Thank you for giving your valuable time over my work here 😳 and leaving your precious review 😊

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 1

He is not as bad as he seems. He took away the land but provided another shelter to those kids too. He was looking for a girl for a few years?

Yes, he was Intrested in the land, but on cost of getting the people or kids living there on road wasn't his plan either 😳

Yes he's looking for one who has effect on him more than anyone! 😊

"Thank you 🤗 for your precious review ❤️

And valuable time on my work ⭐️

Originally posted by: coderlady

Did he end up getting obsessed with her? She had every right to slap him. He feels bad about it now and wants to apologize.

No obsessed but he behaved disrespectfully with her, An it was enough to get him slapped and rejection 😆

He feels bad about it and wish to mend his mistake 😳

Thank you 🤗 so much for your valuable review ❤️

And precious time on my work 🤗