A request to the CVs

Hello to everyone reading this!

I just wanted to vent out my dissatisfaction with some of the issues with the ongoing track. (Also didn't want to hijack someone else's thread. I am not PP. 😭) Thus, this post. If by any chance, the CVs read this (I so hope that they do), I so want them to incorporate at least a few of these , and if other forum members stumble upon this, firstly, thank you for being here, and secondly, please please do share your views on this.

Here it goes.

So, these are a few things that I want to be incorporated into the show.

1. Virat NOT demeaning Sai: I can tolerate the family members being against Sai (that's what lends the 'masala' to the show). But can we please have a fearless IPS officer standing beside his wife and Ma too? At least Virat should not demean Sai. I had said this in an earlier post as well, the behaviour of Virat towards Sai in situations of the living room drama, doesn't sit well with his character arc that has been developed since the GC episodes. Virat knows how fearless, courageous and selfless Sai is, and thus, one would expect him to trust her when everyone else doesn't, stand by her, when others want to cut her roots, and protect her, when others are up in arms against her. However, he falls short of the expectations that we have from him.
2. A gesture/ritual that is personal and unique to SaiRat: Their eye-conversations have my heart. I would love if this is developed throughout the show and shown to be something very personal to them, and understood also by these two only. Or, anything else can also be added. How I'd love to see PP's face when these two have their silent conversations through their eyes. I am a sucker for little things like this, which ooze love and care for the other person. So, yeah.
3. Once her classes begin, Sai should be specifically asked NOT to do the household chores and focus on her academics. Being a bright girl that she is, it is so atrocious to see her making breakfast for the entire family and then going to college (read somewhere that this is what happened in other versions). FFS, she's not even 20 yet and being subjected to too much work already. Had she been in GC, she wouldn't have been subjected to all of this, so now that Virat has stepped into her father's shoes (wrt taking care of her, I mean), I would want him to understand and acknowledge that her academics require all her strength and focus.
4. Lastly, someone please put two ounces of sense into Virat.
   A UPSC topper, who would have scored at least 33 pc in the CSAT should have ample logical reasoning and aptitude. Then, why in the world does he not understand what "beizzati" is Sai hinting at? You constantly putting down your wife in order to please your best friend of 2 days is the beizzati that Sai and the viewers are equally miffed at. Please stop that, in the name of GOD! Please do. Understand the concept of boundaries and privacy and apply that in your life by not allowing Pakhi into your room for the late night conversations, when your wife isn't comfortable with it.

In the middle of my exams and lots of assignments from my internship, this is all I can think of right now, and would genuinely appreciate the views/comments of all the lovely, intellectual members of this forum.

Cheers,

Radha

• He says stuff like she is immature, a bacchi or needs to take help from Pakhi or the other family members to further her studies and/or life, which really dampens our spirits. Also consider showing us how Virat and Sai together work to empower Ashwini and even further free Mohit-Karishma and their side of the fam from the chungul of Bhavani Kaku. Sai and Karishma are both very frank about their opinions, and she would truly make a wonderful confidante to her and vice versa. Mohit is also a gem and want to see more of his bonding with his Vahini - just to show Virat how the relationship actually looks like, based on mutual respect!
• Also, just to emphasise, we want Pakhi to witness it as a third person, not with intrusion in every scene with her pravachan and gyaan which potentially has the ability to establish and further the bonding between them.
• It is okay for her to do things if she has the interest (for Ashwini, Shivani, Virat and Devi), but it certainly should not be a compulsion on her to give anything to a family who is constantly out to berate her and have no humane respect for her either.
• He tried it to some extent and then Pakhi left for her house, but he should really not be bothered about such dhamkis as it is not his responsibility and/or part of his vaada to allow her into their personal space.
• Sai needs to ask for the entire story of Virat-Paakhi. She is basing her assumptions thinking they were maybe together as bestfriends for a long time, in love and she is coming in between them. Knowing the reality might help her to get a stronger grip on how to deal with Pakhi.
• Sai should be allowed to enrol as Sai Joshi and should add Chavan only when she has the rights and respect that a Chavan bahu is entitled to. Forcing their name on her identity should not be part of TMK's sharyantras.
• Show us Devyani's story and if there is anything else to be uncovered which will help us to understand why she is that way. Would love to know more about Ashwini, Shivani, Mohit and Karishma's parellel storylines too. They should not be in focus only while interacting with the main cast, please help us understand their characters too!
• Kindly dont try to evoke sympathy for us for Pakhi. She had enough instances/chances to voice her dissent and move away from the narrative (not for drama sake, but for her own self-repect) and if she had an ounce of regret and humanity left before SaiRat's wedding, her character has now been destroyed by the plot to the extent where all she wants is to desire her devar, which is eeeks!, especially the way it is portrayed. Furthermore Bhavani and the others instigating and encouraging her to continue her drama, and the focus that is given to her over the lead couple makes us want to rethink watching the show.
• Samrat: Dead/alive/on mission? Give us a concrete idea of what is happening with him and if he is going to be back. On the money front, would love to see him freeze the funds once he is back and realizes how they kept Pakhi due to their greed for his wealth. Want him to have a strong front and literally ask his entire family and Virat/Pakhi how they could treat him that way, as if he is a pawn to a game to obtain what they wanted (power/money/love)

Well written! Truly think there is scope for change in the story to better suit the viewer interest. Adding my own minor details if you dont mind. If you do, let me know and I'll delete the post, did not mean to invade yours at all 👍🏼

Originally posted by: RadhaChauhan

Hello to everyone reading this!

I just wanted to vent out my dissatisfaction with some of the issues with the ongoing track. (Also didn't want to hijack someone else's thread. I am not PP. 😭) Thus, this post. If by any chance, the CVs read this (I so hope that they do), I so want them to incorporate at least a few of these , and if other forum members stumble upon this, firstly, thank you for being here, and secondly, please please do share your views on this.

Here it goes.

So, these are a few things that I want to be incorporated into the show.

1. Virat NOT demeaning Sai: I can tolerate the family members being against Sai (that's what lends the 'masala' to the show). But can we please have a fearless IPS officer standing beside his wife and Ma too? At least Virat should not demean Sai. I had said this in an earlier post as well, the behaviour of Virat towards Sai in situations of the living room drama, doesn't sit well with his character arc that has been developed since the GC episodes. Virat knows how fearless, courageous and selfless Sai is, and thus, one would expect him to trust her when everyone else doesn't, stand by her, when others want to cut her roots, and protect her, when others are up in arms against her. However, he falls short of the expectations that we have from him.
2. A gesture/ritual that is personal and unique to SaiRat: Their eye-conversations have my heart. I would love if this is developed throughout the show and shown to be something very personal to them, and understood also by these two only. Or, anything else can also be added. How I'd love to see PP's face when these two have their silent conversations through their eyes. I am a sucker for little things like this, which ooze love and care for the other person. So, yeah.
3. Once her classes begin, Sai should be specifically asked NOT to do the household chores and focus on her academics. Being a bright girl that she is, it is so atrocious to see her making breakfast for the entire family and then going to college (read somewhere that this is what happened in other versions). FFS, she's not even 20 yet and being subjected to too much work already. Had she been in GC, she wouldn't have been subjected to all of this, so now that Virat has stepped into her father's shoes (wrt taking care of her, I mean), I would want him to understand and acknowledge that her academics require all her strength and focus.
4. Lastly, someone please put two ounces of sense into Virat.
   A UPSC topper, who would have scored at least 33 pc in the CSAT should have ample logical reasoning and aptitude. Then, why in the world does he not understand what "beizzati" is Sai hinting at? You constantly putting down your wife in order to please your best friend of 2 days is the beizzati that Sai and the viewers are equally miffed at. Please stop that, in the name of GOD! Please do. Understand the concept of boundaries and privacy and apply that in your life by not allowing Pakhi into your room for the late night conversations, when your wife isn't comfortable with it.

In the middle of my exams and lots of assignments from my internship, this is all I can think of right now, and would genuinely appreciate the views/comments of all the lovely, intellectual members of this forum.

Cheers,

Radha

I love thier eye conversations.. they should show more of that .. and Virat should do that ONLY with her NOT with pakhi

Agree Radha. Love their non verbal conversations as much as i love their scenes! Hope CVS take these suggestions

Originally posted by: far78

I love thier eye conversations.. they should show more of that .. and Virat should do that ONLY with her NOT with pakhi

IKR! Those conversations are so wholesome and the way Pakhi is peeved by them, I enjoy that so so much.

I don't want Virat to do ANYTHING with Pakhi. Let her go, man. 🤣

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Agree Radha. Love their non verbal conversations as much as i love their scenes! Hope CVS take these suggestions

I so hope that too, Neeraja. Talking of their eye conversations, it would make their relationship all the more special. For instance, for lack of a better example, (I can't remember anything else rn) Naina drank alcohol only with Kabir in Yeh Jawani Hai deewani. That was supposedly their "thing."

Dancing in the rain was Ashar and Khirad's thing. SLT.

Would love if CVs actually show some of it. :)

Originally posted by: far78

I love thier eye conversations.. they should show more of that .. and Virat should do that ONLY with her NOT with pakhi

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Well written! Truly think there is scope for change in the story to better suit the viewer interest. Adding my own minor details

Hello! Thanks a ton for taking out the time to comment your views. You've mentioned all the points so articulately. Some of these were there in the back of my mind, but couldn't write about them due to paucity of time then.

Point 1: Don't even get me started on him calling Sai immature! It gets on my nerves everytime. 😭

Yes, would love to see Shivani, Mohit and Karishma side with Sai. I love how Shivani and Mohit have chosen their own paths and deviated from the so-called Chavan family ideals. Such people siding with Sai would be great to watch.

Point 5: Exactly. I actually expected Virat to himself divulge all the details of Pakhi and his relationship to Sai. That would have been a real treat to watch. But on the contrary, this guy is going on manipulating all the information about him and Pakhi. As his wife, Sai has every right to know of his past relationship (I don't want to call it a relationship, but a fling), especially when that woman lives under the same roof as you and barges into their room and their life at every possible opportunity she can find. Not done.

Point 6: Oh yes! Absolutely! Sai has been shown as an independent woman, please don't change her.

Point 7: Yeah. I think they'll go on to show this sometime later, but with this also comes the misunderstanding between Sai-Virat and him throwing her out of the house (saying this from the discussion on other versions). If they show Virat throwing Sai out of the house like that, I would rather have him die than continue with the series. Please, don't show this CVs. Please.

Point 8: Agreed*1000.

Would add more if something comes to my mind.

P.S. I am writing this on 4 hours of sleep in the past 26 hours, so if there's some incoherence, please excuse.

Originally posted by: RadhaChauhan

Hello! Thanks a ton for taking out the time to comment your views. You've mentioned all the points so articulately. Some of these were there in the back of my mind, but couldn't write about them due to paucity of time then.

Point 1: Don't even get me started on him calling Sai immature! It gets on my nerves everytime. 😭

Yes, would love to see Shivani, Mohit and Karishma side with Sai. I love how Shivani and Mohit have chosen their own paths and deviated from the so-called Chavan family ideals. Such people siding with Sai would be great to watch.

Point 5: Exactly. I actually expected Virat to himself divulge all the details of Pakhi and his relationship to Sai. That would have been a real treat to watch. But on the contrary, this guy is going on manipulating all the information about him and Pakhi. As his wife, Sai has every right to know of his past relationship (I don't want to call it a relationship, but a fling), especially when that woman lives under the same roof as you and barges into their room and their life at every possible opportunity she can find. Not done.

Point 6: Oh yes! Absolutely! Sai has been shown as an independent woman, please don't change her.

Point 7: Yeah. I think they'll go on to show this sometime later, but with this also comes the misunderstanding between Sai-Virat and him throwing her out of the house (saying this from the discussion on other versions). If they show Virat throwing Sai out of the house like that, I would rather have him die than continue with the series. Please, don't show this CVs. Please.

Point 8: Agreed*1000.

Would add more if something comes to my mind.

P.S. I am writing this on 4 hours of sleep in the past 26 hours, so if there's some incoherence, please excuse.

Thanks for the critique! Would you like to send this across as an email to SP? 👍🏼

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Thanks for the critique! Would you like to send this across as an email to SP? 👍🏼

Arre! 😆 I think they've already started taking notes. Aaj k episode mein Virat speaking up for Sai was so so amazing. I loved how he shut up both Ninad and Omi Kaka. So much so that even Shivani bua couldn't control her amazement. 👏

I just hope CVs continue this streak and implement our other suggestions too.

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