Tu Zaruri Sa Hai Zinda Rehne K Liye- A RudhiTa OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Heyyy Nima... 🤗 Thank you soo much buddy for your lovely comment.

Yar I dont think they will dwell a lot on Bon's emotions. They didnt even let her go into a teeny weeny bit of PTSD after the HM track. She is never shown even recalling that time...and she is never shown to discuss it with Aniruddh. So clearly, the makers are not very keen to focus on her emotional growth and journey. I wont be surprised if one day she ends up telling Aniruddh how much she loves him just like that... 😆 Taaliyan bajatay bajatay bulwa dein uss se, koi pata nahi hai... 😆

Your writing is worth praising for dear🤗

I don’t remember if I’ve ever commented on your menstrual one os or not(maybe I was a silent reader then😆) but after reading that I knew you have so much potential as a writer!!

You are so right about Bon’s mental state after HM track.. makers were not interested in that.. it’s not right.. kids are tend to get scared after watching someone’s death(here it’s rasiyabaj) or so much violence. And like you mentioned, makers didn’t care to show her emotions regarding that incident .. they could have at least made Ani to talk to her regarding that but no they didn’t wanna do that😡
That’s why I do not want them to disclose ani bon marriage when Bon is still a child ..

anyways nice talking to you dear 🤗

Looking forward for your next os

Originally posted by: nims23

Your writing is worth praising for dear🤗

Thank you buddy... you are too kind❤️🤗

I don’t remember if I’ve ever commented on your menstrual one os or not(maybe I was a silent reader then😆) but after reading that I knew you have so much potential as a writer!!

I dont think we have interacted before. But I have seen you in the EDT and AT. Never got a chance to properly have a convo... 😳 Wahan itna kuch horha hota hai aur itni speed mien horha hota hai ke mien catch up hi nahi ker paty!😆🤪

You are so right about Bon’s mental state after HM track.. makers were not interested in that.. it’s not right.. kids are tend to get scared after watching someone’s death(here it’s rasiyabaj) or so much violence. And like you mentioned, makers didn’t care to show her emotions regarding that incident .. they could have at least made Ani to talk to her regarding that but no they didn’t wanna do that😡

I remember that they incorporated the psychological angle during the bedwetting track. She used to wet her bed because of her fear as she had seen her father dying because of a snake bite. At night, during her sleep, that fear in her sub-conscious mind would take over and she would lose control over her bladder.

That was a very good thing to highlight and I was impressed ke accha point daala hai in loagon ne.

That was wht I was thinking too ke shayad HM track ke baad us ka kuch tou emotional breakdown dikhayein ge. Shes just a kid who should never have even learned the things she learned at that time.

But nahi dikhaya makers ne aisa kuch. Clearly, unka bilkul mood nahi hai emotional journeys ko touch kerne ka aur yahan atay hum jaise loag jo apne hi alag world mien alag hi stories bana rhe hote hain.. 😆
That’s why I do not want them to disclose ani bon marriage when Bon is still a child ..

Aniruddh would take care of the matter very sensitively and intelligently. Bondita once asked him ke ager bacchon ki shadi ghalat tou kyun hoty hai bacchon ki shadi? Aur kia humari shadi bhi ghalat hai?

At that time Aniruddh had told her that he would explain her everything once she grows up.

But I think Bondu ka emotional intelligence already buht ziada hai aur jo kuch woh already dekh chuki hai, I think she will be able to endure the shock if Aniruddh explains to her intelligently.

So I dont really mind even if she finds out now too... 😳

anyways nice talking to you dear 🤗

Likewise buddy... 🤗❤️

Looking forward for your next os

Haha... hopefully soon! 👍🏼😳

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Originally posted by: Doc.love

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You are right Ayesha. We haven’t interacted before :) I am active on EDT but not AT 😆

I haven’t watched bed wetting track but what I know from the written updates that it was a psychological angle. Like you said it’s very good point they made!! But somehow I still feel if she would come to know about herself being a victim of a sati ptatha, she could be slipped in to a depression(when she would realize Sampoo was about to burn alive!!..,.Believe me, kids are tend to take day to day normal incidents very seriously and here she was about to see her sis burning alive)..Ani could definitely help bon but only if makers decides to do that!!🙄 if they are showing a story of a child surrounded by all kinds of kupratha then they need to show the impact of it on that child!! Ok I will stop here before I go in and on 😆

Sorry if I wrote too much.. 😆😆

Bye Ayesha 🤗

Ayesha🤗 Glad you were able to post it 👍🏼

It was lovely ❤️ and i loved the explanation of Mohobbat and Ishq and Pyaar which you gave

Ani realizing he loves her ❤️ awwwww🤗

I want to know how he will tell her when she grows up🤪 Ek aur part likh do😆

PS: sorry mujhko long reviews dena nai aata 🤪 episode ke bhi nai de paati hu 🤣 but i loved it 😳

Ayesha🤗

I just completed reading it and I am too smiling like them both.😆

First of all your description about love and mohabbat.. Though I didn't knew about it but I had always thought mohabbat is something more than love.. And now thanks for clearing it. 🤗

Coming to your story.. Yes Bondita will be so broken knowing the truth of her marriage and at the tender age it will affect her more.. And all penned emotions of yours were on point.👍🏼Ani's restlessness, his world is incomplete without Boni.. And her presence around him adds colours to his life.😳

Him getting irritated by her behavior and the way he dragged her from kitchen to the study just to have a conversation with her.

And the talks between the two.. Ani's realisation and Boni understanding what she is for Ani.

I loved everything and the way you have portrayed their emotions.❤️

Still my favourite part will be Ani telling Boni.. She is his sansaar too. ❤️

Can't we get to see such a beautiful scene in the epi..

I don't know what I am telling but if possible do continue it.. 🤪

With Ani confessing his love..

It will be treat to read.🤗

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Awwww Akshata...❤️🤗 You are soo sweet. Thank you so much buddy for trying to help me out to post this OS in the first place, and then appreciating it so much.. 😳🤗

I am glad you liked the picture of love that I painted. I was afraid people may not be able to connect with it... 😳

Aww... I was happy to help...

Forget about connecting, I was lost for a moment. I didn't know if I was reading this or was I imagining this in my head... You have written it beautifully Darling❤️ ❤️

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Ohh my God!!! I am soo happy to see your comment buddy... 🤗 And you have praised my writing and my OS so much... i am so glad!🤗❤️ I am actually in a state of awe...I am amazed that someone would love my writing so much! You just made my day buddy. Thank you soo much...sach mien...dil se.❤️

Lots of love to you for such a heartfelt comment...

Can I request you to write just one more part of this!When Bondita has grown up and Anirudh confesses his concealed feelings! Phew!it will be fantastic🤪

Please doc ,ek bonus update toh mangta hain!Look how people are going gaga over this! Pleaseee do something for the insatiable us👍🏼

What a beautiful explanation ❤️

This is exactly what I have thought off when bondita will come to know about their marriage truth..Exactly 💯 💯 it has matched with my expectations fully...I really want to see exactly all these in the show..I want that bon will be reacting as a lifeless doll and ani will confess his heart out to her that she is not only zimmedari but peace of his mind❤🧚‍♀️

Amazingly written 👍🏼

Ayesha🤗

You're a really good writer

Tum kamal ho ladki , how beautifully you have expressed each and every emotions. 😍😍😍