FF : Tere bin na lage Mera Mann. Chapter 62 updated 23/02 pg: 78 - Page 46

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Posted: 5 years ago

A very good update.their morning romance was so good.. their 251th language of love and their talk way back to home..I was also feeling bad... hope Mark and Andre help them in their bad times.mishtib3 questions . missing yrhpk and mishbir.. but u r much better than those ghatiya 2.0 writers.really happy nihaal matter is solved so no misunderstanding from that side.. their hug in front of family their chhup chhup ke romance... their embrace and their dance everything so beautiful.. but now it's time for seperation.. varsha and shaurya are here..ab kya hoga...wahi hoga jo manzoore writer hoga.. just love your story.. really waiting how every secret unfolds and how they will affect mishbir...I want to see their pain their guilt.. their need for each other.theiragony nd pain... waiting for the update.. thank you for a wonderful story

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: suryavni

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@ pallavi25

Thank you dear for your generous appreciation and love...🤗.

It's truly a pleasure to read your review..and once again you ESP'd me..😆

Your comment on VM still pending..😳

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You’re welcome! 🤗 A huge Thanks and applause for you for keeping Mishbir alive in our imagination. Reading your story feels like I’m watching a brand new show with RheSha as Mishbir, their newer and more improved, modern versions! ❤️😍

We can visualize all the scenes, dialogues and characters! Every chapter seems like a gripping, exciting episode and I read every update at least 2-3 times before replying. This is definitely one of the best fan fictions I’ve read so far in my IF experience! 👏👏👍🏼👍👌

My ESP is correct in which scenario? Piya or Mehul? 😆
Regarding your VMs I loved all of them, song and scene selections were all perfect. Only honestly I didn’t like the song Janeman!
My favorite VM of yours is Tu jahan main wahan, I’ve watched it 10-15 times already. Everytime I watch it I feel really sad thinking about Mishbir separation 😭 The song/VM gives me strong separation vibes 😭



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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Thanks for this long and delightful chapter! The title is so apt, it’s indeed full of surprises for everyone! ⭐️

Mishbir morning after scene was sweet, romantic and sensuous! 🔥 Abir is always in the mood and Mishti is his willing captive! ☺️

Both got “gifts” on her birthday😳

Good thing KuKu didn’t see Abir in their love nest aka loft bedroom, they would be even more shocked than him! 😛 But Abir saw and heard them!

KuKu think Abir is making Mishti slog and stay in a junky place, if only they knew! 😆
Nice to see KuKu so close and comfortable with each other.

Abir shocked and surprised to learn about KuKu. He never guessed, no wonder Nanu calls him gadheda.😆 But I Wish Mishti or Kunal had confided in him before he went to Toronto, then he wouldn’t stay away and suffer for 6 months and Piya wouldn’t get the chance to trap him like she’s planned. This is why it’s bad to keep secrets from the people you love.


Ahh the magnificent sight of Sacre Couer,😍 we saw it from afar but didn’t get to go up, too many steps!

Wow, the Wall of Love! Never knew about this place! I can see Ami tomake bhalobashi written there!😆 Mishti’s language of love #251 is adorable 😘😙

Abir wants to say I love you in all 250 languages, but first he should say it in front of everyone. This hide and seek is going to cost them dearly.🤔

European lovers also put locks on all their bridges with their names inscribed on them and then throw the keys in the river.

Aww Abir being a petulant child, doesn’t want to go to office without Mishti, her three questions.😆...he’s her man child. 🤗❤️

Meenakshi, Nanu and Parul all shocked at the Rishta swap. I’m glad that Nihaal honestly admitted his feelings to his parents and stopped their proposal for Mishti. 👏 Honesty is the best policy!

So good to see Nanu as the true elder, as the decision maker in the family, he approved of Nihaal Ketu match right away! What a relief for Mishbir and Nanu....and Nihaal too! 😆

Wow, Meenu and Rajshri had dreamed of Mishbir match when they were kids!😲

If only the kids hadn’t fought back then....and now it’s high time Mishbir should tell their secret to the family before everything is ruined by Piya and past family secrets. Why aren’t they telling the elders? Why hide their love when they have already committed to each other in every way? I don’t understand this secrecy!😕😔

So KuKu lied about their road trip as they wanted to surprise Mishti on her birthday and Abir played alongwith them? Mishti certainly got a fabulous 21st birthday party! 😍

As well as Abir’s birthday “gifts” in Paris!😳☺️

Chalo birthday hug ke Bahaney Mishbir hugged in front of the family! 😆 How did nanu and Nihaal control their secret mirth?😂

Why did Meenu look angrily at Abir after Nihaal’s mom switched Rishta ? Does she blame Abir for this?😕

Aww Mishti fed the first piece of cake to Nihaal as ghar ka damaad, poor Abir that slice belonged to him! 😭

Wish Mishbir and KuKu were as honest with their elders as Nihaal is with his parents.

Great dance setup by Kunal on the patio, all 3 couples danced. ❤️

Beautiful song selection to dance to, lovely song by Atif Aslam. Wow, Ileana D’Cruz! She’s gorgeous! 😍

Kuku’s guilty reactions that Abir knows about them, Mishbir teasing KuKu was cute and funny. Loved their dialogues there.😆

Mishbir slow dancing to Atif song I’m in dreamland! ❤️

The shocker at the end, Shaurya and Varsha arrived! 😲 Are they here for Kuhu? Has Varsha finally accepted Kuhu after all these years?😕

Are they here to reveal the dark secrets connecting the two families? Regarding the tragedy in the past? Will this secret affect Mishbir relationship?🥶

Loved Mishti’s white lacy top. And all the Paris pictures! Kudos to your detailed research! 👍🏼👏

Loved this update too! You’re building the suspense really well! 👌Cannot wait for the next part.

Thanks for the pm!🤗


Thanks for the detailed review my dear...

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Now that the story is getting into muddy waters I am a bit scared... hope to keep up with your expectations.....

Yeah past has a nasty way of catching you off guard...

I hope I can pull it off..

Thanks a lot for your encouragement..

As to Amish ..it's hinted in the prologue and I want to reach there....

Next part may be a drag...but it's story...so one chapter dedicated to the sideplot...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumaiya27

Omg another blockbuster update Surya 👏


Mishbir's morning scene was amazing and loved how abir found out about Kuku's truth. Kunal calling the loft romantic and inquiring about why mishti staying there instead of the hotel was funny. I wonder how kunal will react when he finds out about mishbir


I felt so bad for mishbir when they were returning from paris..I hope family finds out about them and accepts their relationship so they don't have to pretend in front of everyone anymore


I was so scared when Nihaal's family came in but your surprised me with the best rishta swap ever 🤗Also since meenu said she wished to pair mishbir many years ago hopefully she won't object she finds out about mishbir's relationship


Nihaal and nanu's reaction when mishbir hugged in front of the family was cute


So the guy in rajgadh was shourya not mehul?


Thank you dear 😘🤗

I liked the best rishtha swap ever...!!

Yeah...it didn't hurt anyone na...

There is still time for the family to find out na..??😆

@B It's Mehul only..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarcastic_me

R dey going to seperated now??

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Plz don't let d family know abt them now

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chup chupke romance has their own charm. I want more dat kind of romance

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I am rooting for priya.

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Hoping her to do something grand

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Ooohhoo..

Sabr ka phal ... separation hota Hein...🤣

You wait...

Abir need to do a lot of work here to get into everyone's good books ...

Hope you like that ithu sa sadism .. for now..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Hello2020

A very good update.their morning romance was so good.. their 251th language of love and their talk way back to home..I was also feeling bad... hope Mark and Andre help them in their bad times.mishtib3 questions . missing yrhpk and mishbir.. but u r much better than those ghatiya 2.0 writers.really happy nihaal matter is solved so no misunderstanding from that side.. their hug in front of family their chhup chhup ke romance... their embrace and their dance everything so beautiful.. but now it's time for seperation.. varsha and shaurya are here..ab kya hoga...wahi hoga jo manzoore writer hoga.. just love your story.. really waiting how every secret unfolds and how they will affect mishbir...I want to see their pain their guilt.. their need for each other.theiragony nd pain... waiting for the update.. thank you for a wonderful story


Thank you dear🤗


Hope you like the next part too..

It's a drag but I'll make up for it later...I hope..😃

Thank you again for your encouragement❤️

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|~~Tere bin na lage Mera Mann~~|


Chapter 50




The hall was lit with birthday decoration lights and the foyer was dark..


The persons who walked in were not entirely visible to the people in the hall...


A tall bespectacled man and a short plump lady in Salwar.. entered the hall..


At Meenakshi's eye command Sam put on the lights ..and everyone looked around .


Rajshri's lips moved in awe...as the mist forming in her eyes thickened...



" Shourya...!!"


***


As the Rajvansh's and Saxena's looked on..... the uninvited guests entered the hall..


Shourya Maheshwari was certainly uncomfortable...as he walked in with his wife Varsha...who was equally hesitant....


Meenakshi walked to them folding her hands in greeting..


" Jai Sreekrishna.. Shourya...Radhekrishna Varsha."


Shourya and Varsha returned the greeting...still unsure ....


Meenakshi's eyes were asking a silent question to Shourya and he stiffened at her gaze...


But then ...as his eyes fell on Rajshri..the rush of pain in his eyes were tangible...



In a second he became a boy...


The boy who returned after an epic quarrel with his mom..now seeking her forgiveness..


Rajshri was under a tumultuous rush of emotions...


Life was never fair to her son ..


All past pain and regret were unlocked with in her .... seeping and flushing into her senses...as if the pain was afresh..


****


She lost Akshara just years after her marriage to Naitik...Naman orchestrated that tragedy...and even though Shourya was married just after Akshara ..he and Varsha had struggled a lot with Varsha's inability to conceive due to her medical condition...They had Ananya after long 6 years...it was happy times for them till Ananya's 15 th birthday...


The day the world came to know about Shourya's illegitimate daughter..


When a 7 year old girl was dumped at Maheshwari's...with a suicide note..


Everything went downhill from that day ...! that moment..!


The betrayal Varsha felt was genuine and no mother could justify her son's actions in the face of the wrath of a betrayed wife....


But the innocent soul which was in no way responsible for the fallout even though she was the reason... was left alone in the world....


Vishambar had such a keen sense of duty... Already they had took in Mishti...and with the loss of Akshara still fresh in her mind..she decided to support Vishambar.. even when Varsha refused catagorically to live under the same roof as Kuhu..!.


Shourya had to choose between ..


His two daughters...!


His parents and his wife...!


It was heartbreaking for Rajshri to see her son leave home....


And Mishti... though she was only an eight year old she single handedly managed Kuhu..


Bewildered herself at the change in the family atmosphere she had sheilded Kuhu from the unpleasantness...


Vishambar then decided to send Kuhu to Anshuman's home..under Jasmeeth's care..


She still doesn't know why he took such a decision...


May be it has to do with what happened to Mishti....on that horrible day...!


But then in a matter of days her world stopped... spinning..and fell on her crushing her ... completely..


The accident... Vishambar's death...and the horrible accusations and charges....


***


Shourya didn't come back...and after all these years....


Now..


There he stood...the fine young man has now turned into an Austere Gentleman...


Her eyes brimmed and vision cleared a bit...and as she sank into the sofa ....


Shourya reached to her...


Meenakshi looked at Parul...who was looking at the reunion with teary eyes..and mouthed to bring Mishti and Kuhu...


Then signalling Nanu , Bharti and Pratap to follow her she gave privacy to Rajshri... knowing very well the importance of this day for her ..



There were no words spoken between the mother son duo...


The heartbreak he experienced seeing her now... a shadow of the old self..... was evident as he kneeled in front of her...and laid his head on her lap... removing his specs.. wiping off his tears.,


Her fingers caressed his hair and face eagerly.... controlling her sobs...


Hearing the hard sobs coming from Varsha...

Rajshri's raised her eyes...


The girl whom she and Vishambar loved just like Akshara...


She had dreamed to be her friend and mentor and a mother to her ...


But fate had other plans...


Varsha had to take a stand for her self respect..and while she respected Varsha for that ...She had to take care of two girls...


Unwanted by the very people who were responsible for them...


And all of them payed the price...


Rajshri beckoned her and Varsha fell on her feet.. seeking forgiveness....


****



Meenakshi had seated Pratap and Bharti in the study along with Nanu...


The Saxena's knew a bit about Maheshwari's..and Meenakshi gave them an idea about the newcomers...


" So it's Kuhu's parents...!"


Bharathi summed up and Meenakshi nodded.


***


At the patio



The music has changed into a peppy number and Nihaal and Kethu too joined the fun-filled dance along with Kunal's showing off of his hip-hop dance skills and Mishti and Kuhu complementing him ... with their moves...


Abiir stood in the side adoring her ... youthful vivacity...


He turned his smiling face as he heard hurried steps coming their way...and his smile vanished as he saw Parul teary eyed and red-faced..


" Massi...Kya baat Hein...?!" Abir asked concerned..


Seeing his mom in distress Kunal went to her ... hugging her as she protested saying she was fine..


By that time Mishti had shut off the music and Kuhu was asking Parul what happened...


Parul looked at the girls..


" Woh...Tum donon se Milne koi aaya Hein.."


" Hum donon se. Ab New York mein kaun aayega...woh bhi..itni late ..kaun Hein aunty..??!"


Kuhu was confused...


But as Parul looked at Mishti she found her eyes widening...in mild surprise..and eagerness...and knew she expected this...


Mishti looked at Abir excitedly and his eyes too widened in realisation of what was happening...


Before Kuhu could ask anything more... Mishti grabbed her and ran...


" Mishti...tum...itni bhi jaldi kyaa Hein...haath toh chodo...mein aajaoongi na.."


Mishti didn't pay attention to her protest and dragged her the same to the hall...and came to a stand still seeing the tableu in front of her...


" Tum..dekho...mere haath mein mark aagayi..Kitni Zoe se pakadoge yaar...itni bhi Kya....."


Kuhu paused her hushed monologue and looked at the person's sitting at her Dadi's feet...


And her mouth opened wide in a shocked surprise..


Mishti looked at her with a heart and face brimming with excitement..


" Tere Papa aur Mumma aaye Hein...!!"


Kuhu felt weak and took a step back... clamping her mouth which was about to call out for her Papa...!


Kunal supported her..

Abir too had followed Kunal and looked at the family reunion happening around them...his eyes moving to Mishti in askance...


She smiled through tears and nodded animatedly...


" Mishti...yeh sab...I can't believe..Papa is here ...and .."

Kuhu hesitated ...


" Ab Chalo..milte heina...it's been so many years..aur Ananya di kahaan Hein..."

Mishti pulled Kuhu again...her excitement bubbling up every second..


But Kuhu was not budging and clung to Kunal...

" No.. Mishti...woh..she she won't like it..I.. I.. will be here..tum milke aao... wait...Ananya di..... tumhein kaise pata Ananya di is coming?"


Mishti smiled widely..


" Tumhein pata tha.....yeh sab aane wale Hein..??!"

Kuhu was looking at Mishti....dumbfounded..


" Well I didn't expect this to happen so soon..but haan..mein aur Ananya di ..we were working towards this day and it happened..ab Chalo..."


Kuhu looked at Kunal and Abir...and then to Parul who joined them...


" I trust Mishti Kuhu... tumhein papa se milna chahiye...and we'll face everything ... together.. okay no need to panic.."


Kunal's words were helping Kuhu as tried to hold off her panic .


She nodded and took a deep breath...


Parul was mildly surprised to notice an odd intimacy between them..but then Abir pulled Kuhu into a hug....


" Go tiger...you can do it..."


Kethu too patted Kuhu in support...


****



" Aajao bachon.dekho....yeh..kaunn....."



Rajshri called out as she saw Mishti and Kuhu huddle at the hallway.. along with an inquisitive Abir and Kunal...


Shourya got up slowly... helping Varsha to get up..and turned with an emotional face to see his daughters....


Kuhu and Mishti...!


And defenitely Mishti had earned that recognition...


From both being victims of same misfortune..

To her teaming up with Ananya and the tireless effort to bring Varsha to her senses..


5 years back Mishti had contacted him...


Then with her help he had established a relationship with Kuhu...a distant one but nonetheless a bond...he also lend a hand financially... even though Mishti refused when he told her he would love to support her too...


It was the first time he was meeting them in person..and the emotional excitement was evident in his face as he turned....


And he froze...!

All warmth drained from his face in a fraction of a second turning it painfully Stony...



***



Abir released Kuhu from his affectionate hug and pushed her lightly towards Mishti...


Mishti''s face beamed at him as they shared an intimate happiness....and he followed them with Kunal and Nihaal by his side...


And as he walked up to them Abir was taken aback by the cold hard stare he was getting from Shourya Maheshwari..



****



Kuhu lingered behind Mishti as she was clearly sceptical about introducing herself to the lady who refused to accept her...


But.. Varsha was wiping off her tears and smiling at them..!


"Mishtiii.."


" V maa.."

Mishti reached Varsha.. pulling Kuhu with her a bit forcefully...who now looked scared..


" Pehle mein..V maa...thank you so much for this...ab aap mujhse nahin apni beti se baat kijiye...!"


Mishti gently pushed Kuhu to Varsha...


Rajshri looked at Mishti in surprise..


" Mishti..Tum.?. tumhein.?!!."


Mishti nodded to Rajshri and went to hug her... sharing her happiness...


Kuhu now looked lost and frozen...

Not knowing what to say or do...


Shourya looked at Varsha intently...and she looked at him... mixed emotions reflecting in each pair of eyes....


Kuhu... wringed her hands in utter desolation...

She longed to hug her Papa....but feared Varsha's reaction.


It was Varsha herself who broke the impasse...


"Kuhu ..beta..Kya Tum mujhe maaf Kar sakthi ho...I was totally broken woman then to take a rational decision..and it took years for me to let go of a bitterness..... lekin ab Kya mein tumhari maa ban sakthi Hoon...??!"



The plain and simple apology was more than enough for Kuhu to melt into her embrace among the teary cheers of the Rajvansh's and Mishti..



Rajshri hugged Mishti tight...


" Thank you beta...tum woh kaam Kar dikhaya Jo mein barso pehle nahin Kar paaya..."


" Mein akeli kahaan Badimaa...Di bhi thi saath mein....lekin woh ab Meri Jan lene wali Hein..."


Mishti said with a bit of contrition...


" Ananya bhi ismein shaamil Hein...lekin ab woh toh Khush hi hongi na..."


Rajshri was confused as to why we Ananya be angry at Mishti..


"I didn't tell them about your condition Badimaa..you told me that you wouldn't want them to come back just because you were ill..."


Shourya and Varsha now looked at each other in hurt...



*****



Pratap and Bharti didn't want to intrude into the family matters and they wanted to leave..

Meenakshi agreed to it and after taking permission from Nanu...she took them to the hall...


Seeing Meenakshii.....Rajshri beamed with happiness.


Meenakshi introduced the Saxena's to Maheshwari's..


" Varsha . Shourya , tum donon yahaan aaye bohut bohot Khushi ki baat Hein....aur aaj toh Mishti ka janamdin bhi Hein..."


" Haan.we know..thats why we came here straight from the airport.. even though it was late... flight thoda late ho Gaya tha...Ananya and her fiance just stopped to keep the luggage at the hotel..she was adamant about coming here today..."


Varsha said smilingly...


Mishti''s face lit up..


" Jiju bhi Hein...!"


Kuhu turned to Mishti...


" Jiju...!!?? Tujhe toh sab kuch pata Hein...aur hum sub se Sab kuch chupakar rakha...not done Mishti.."


"Not done ki bachi...Kaisa laga Mera surprise??!"


Kuhu.. looked at Mishti for a long second..and hugged her tight...


" I love you and ab aur koi surprise nahi... okay.?"


***


Meenakshi noted the way Shourya was eying Abir..who was standing his hands tied on the front..with a happy face along with Kunal and Nihaal..


A sigh escaped her and Shourya looked at Meenakshi...


A look that held a lot of hidden meanings...



Rajshri was in awe...


" Ananya ki Shaadi ...!"


"Haan Maa...ladka toh usne khud chuna Hein...aur humein bhi bohot acha laga... London mein investment banker Hein...aur family Punjab ka famous khandaan Hein...baaki details aap Mishti se hi pooch lo..."


Shourya said with a smile...


Nanu became emotional....


" Sach mein aaj bohot saari khushiyaan Ghar aagayi Hein... Mishti ki janamdin see shuru hoke Kethu ki rishtha... Shourya aur Varsha ka barson baad Rajshri aur bachon se milna...aur ab poti ki Shaadi ki bhi khabar ...bhagwan hum sab ke khushiyaan hamesha barkaraar rakhein...."



Saxena's congratulated Maheshwari's as they returned the complement learning about Kethu and Nihaal...


Pratap and Bharti got ready to leave... Pratap looked at Nihaal in askance and he signalled that he will be home later.



Just as they took their leave another young couple made their way through the door...


The man was asserting something to his partner as he looked around for confirmation..and the lady was looking confused as well...


Both acknowledged the elder couples with a polite smile as they left... looking at them intriguingly.. and entered the hall...


Varsha spotted them and said to Rajshri..


" Dekho Maa ,Ananya aa gayi...."


Mishti turned and looked at the girl..who was an exact replica of Varsha...short vivacious and strong......who stood at the hall entrance..


" Ananya di..."


" Neerav ...!!"


Abir and Mishti exclaimed simultaneously...


And realising that they did spoke in sync looked at each other in surprise...


" I told you...there is only one Abir Rajvansh..!!."


Neerav said to Ananya...who was now happily surprised...


" You know jiju...?"


Mishti asked Abir curiously...


Abir was stunned but recovered swiftly.and walked upto Neerav greeting him with a hug...


" Arre..Meri do do behnein Hein yahaan aur Neerav ka Gale milke swagath ho Raha Hein...kahaan Hein birthday girl...?? And Kuhu Kaisa laga surprise??!"


Mishti looked at Kuhu...who was stunned to see Ananya...


Kuhu shook her head in disbelief as Mishti laughed out loud seeing her expressions...


" Kunal... Kethu...this is the perfect time..ek pic le lo na chatterbox Kuhu ke silent moment.."


" Mishtiii...mein tumhein na....aaj Teri birthday Hein isliye maaf kardiya ...dobarah kabhi bhi mere saath aisa mat karna..."


Kuhu rolled her eyes at Mishti...


" Now are you finished.girls....I am waiting...,"


Ananya said excitedly...


As all looked and cheered on Mishti and Kuhu both ran to Ananya welcoming her with a tight embrace..


Ananya was in tears as she hugged Rajshri asking forgiveness for not doing this sooner...


She greeted Meenakshi and Parul with respect and hugged Kethu congratulating her ... learning about Nihaal's rishtha with her...


She fervently thanked Nihaal for helping her sisters and hugged Kuhu asking her forgiveness for not being a good sister to her as Mishti was to her...



***



" Abir "


Abir extended his hand to Shourya introducing himself...


For some seconds Shourya didn't react but then hesitantly shook hands with Abir..his face now a blank mask...


Kunal was greeted warmly..and Abir felt the nagging discomfort on Shourya's behavior towards him...


Abir deftly introduced Neerav as his friend to the family.. alluding to their professional relationship....as Neerav looked on with an amusing yet rueful look....



Later after all introductions and another round of cake serving Shourya asked Nanu his permission to take Kuhu and Mishti with them...


Abir froze as he heard this request and looked intently at Shourya...and then at Mishti...who too seemed surprisedly shocked...



Before Nanu could say anything Meenakshi interrupted..



" It's totally okay ..ki aap apne betiyon ke saath time spent karna chahthe Hein.... lekin aap log itne lambe flight ke baad thake honge... Mishti bhi abhi aayi Hein Paris se...I think it would be good for everyone to get proper rest...you all can stay here ..no need to go back to the hotel.."



" Haan Shourya beta...yehi theeek rahega... Rajshri ko bhi rest ki sakth zaroorath Hein...tum Kal le jao na bachiyon ko..."



" No Yaahpal ji..thank you for your hospitality..but hum toh already aap logon ke Ghar Bina inform kiye aaye Hein aur luggage toh already hotel mein Hein...aur Meri bachiyon par aapka poora haq Hein... Meenakshi ji..jaise aaplog theek samjhe.."



Shourya said with humility...



Ananya looked at Mishti with a smile.. who was rummaging through her bag..



" I think Mishti aur mere paas iska solution Hein...heina Mishti..."



" Yes and here it is...!"



Mishti dangled the keys of the new home...


" See how well we planned everything...Neerav..Meri shadi toh Mishti hi plan karegi okay...I know she is your favorite already..but Kuhu ko abhi Jan na baaki hein..!"



Mishti gave the keys to Varsha...



" Yeh aap ke Ghar ka keys...Kal hotel se check out kar lijiye and I will be sending the location...hum wahaan milthe Hein.. Badimaa ke saath...."



Varsha and Shourya looked astonished at Mishti...



" Wow...Kya planning Hein Mishti...yeh sab itne secretive hoke Kar dala.."


Kunal sounded a bit miffed..


" Utna secretive kaha... Kuhu se hi toh chupaya...aur Tera exams tha...tujhe kaise involve Karthe.. woh....Abir helped me to do all the set up.."



" Bhai... OMG!! you roped in Abir Bhai in your plans..!!.not bad Mishti...!"



Kunal said entirely impressed by her...as Abir let out a relieved breath...



Nihaal who was conversing with Neerav..at a point looked at Abir...with a question in his eyes and Abir nodded in answer... Nihaal's smile on that nod was cautious......



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Later


Mishti tossed and turned in her bed...


Jetlag combined with the days excitement had stolen her sleep...


Everything was perfect..


but the unknown dread..


The destiny of her life....


Was nagging her vaguely...


She sat up ... wishing for his comfort..and amassing enough courage... she silently got out of her room... keeping to the walls and gently knocked Abir's door...


It was opened at the first knock...and she was pulled in roughly....kisses rained on her face...and he held her tight...


" For a moment I thought I am going to lose you... today..and I felt choked... Mishti..."


She made him sit on the bed and cupped his face ..


" Kya mein tumhein kabhi chodke jaane wali lagthi hoon ? Haan... mujhe bhi tumse door jaana achi nahin lagthi... lekin Kal ek din humein door rehna hi hoga..

Kal Badimaa ko Ghar le jaana Hein...aur itne barson ke baad V maa aur Ananya di se mili Hoon...thoda time unke saath bhi spend karna Hein na mujhe..."



Abir nodded half heartedly...


" Hmm....Yeah ...okay... I get it...but I am going to miss you....."


He seated himself leaning on the headboard and pulled her onto him.... Making her lay on him....


Mishti pressed her face onto his chest....her heart stifling still in the fear of impending gloom...and looked up at him seeking reassurance..


" Abiir...sab kuch ache se hi ho Raha Hein...in fact Jo mein me sapne mein bhi nahi Socha tha woh ho Raha Hein mere saath...ek jaana pehchana lekin Ajeeb sa dar feel Kar rahi Hoon....ki kahin Sab ki khushiyaan Meri wajah se..."


Abir kissed her...hard. ...stopping her..


Wanting to make her forget all the insecurities that ...he knew ,..would pop up if she dwelled on it....


And he was a master at distraction...


Kissing and fondling away her worries... And she in return allayed his antsiness.. caresssing and feverishly reciprocating to his arderous touch...


After an intense make out... Mishti laid her head on to Abir's shoulders...and asked the question which was niggling her that evening...


" Tum Neerav Jiju ko kaise jaante ho..? He is located in London and an investment banker at that...did you guys meet professionally...? I saw that He was genuinely happy to see you..."


Abir sighed...


" Neerav was my senior and kinda my mentor while I was doing my MBA in hospitality management...he helped me through a difficult time and I would say our discussions helped me to give a strong investment foundation to RGC...but umm.. something happened and even though I had immense respect for him I had to cut ties... umm...his brother was my class mate too..."



Mishti looked on...as Abir continued uneasily..



" You met him yesterday.... Saksham is Neerav's brother..."


Mishti looked at Abir with widened eyes...her lips forming Neerav's name...



".. OMG.... Neerav Rana....!!"


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: vidz70

Hi Surya.. Thanks for the PM and once again a beautiful nd a hot update too 😊👌👍

Expected Mishti's birthday celebration to be something on this line and also loved the way u portrayed their love making in an aesthetic way

I also loved the way u switched between the scenes and the characters 👌👍👏

Now coming to the Celebration style.. It was so classy, elegant and so beautiful that we cld enjoy the Paris view as well as the celebration ❤️❤️

I kept watching the movie as such while reading through this because the pics u have chosen gave me such a great visual treat that I could feel it.. Be it the pendant, Paris view, the attic, the bath tub, nd not to forget the delicious cake 👌👌👏👏❤️

Hope the forthcoming storm is not as scary as I expect it to be.. The story is getting very gripping with all the elements and waiting for them to unfold one by one 👍

What a great story teller you are.. Take a bow ❤️


Thank you so much for the encouragement dear....

And I hope I can do justice to your hopes and expectations...❣️

Do continue to read and comment..

Much appreciated🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

So all dis has been planned by priya 🥳🥳🥳🥳 smart girl.

Waiting for separation now 💃💃💃💃

I feel neerav's brother rishta will come for mishti n her family will agree 🌚🌚🌚

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you Surya for the PM 🤗


So many developments in this chapter. This is probably the best mishti ki wajah se scene/episode/chapter. Mishti is always trying to make everyone happy ❤️


BM-Shourya-Varsha reunion scene was so emotional. Varsha has finally accepted Kuhu..I really liked how you wrote that scene. So happy to see Ananya back! I love her and Mishti's bond


Did Naman kill Akshara? and I wonder why Shourya is so cold towards Abir..is it because of what Mehul did? Or is it because mishbir's childhood fight?


The revelation that Neerav and Saksham are brothers was amazing and unexpected. Excited to know more about them and how they are related.


Finally I love how you have added so many layers and that too without any plot holes 👏


Ps: thanks for clearing that the guy in Rajgadh is Mehul indeed

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