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Avi take a bow 🙇🏼‍♂️🙇🏼‍♂️

"This is most refreshing, Complex and beautiful thriller story on AKDHA😳 simply befit of it's title Entangled love ❤️!."

"And each chapter has amazing Title to 😳!."

"Not for once it's bore me, instead it's keep me hook to it from beginning teaser to 9ch !."

"The way you make us relate with character, 😳 it's to good 👏!".

"At once, we feel disappointed by people like Abul Shah😳!."

"we feel bad for Amer Royals😒!."

"we despise evil guy like Adham😡 !."

"we feel pity on person like Ja🤓!."

"We Get spellbound by the fierce shrewd portrayal of Jo 😎 !."

"Each character has it's own Role to play that to amazingly hat's off to your writing 👏!."

"Still cannot believe it's your first work! 😆!."

"Though we want truth to be out soon and flower of love bloosom 😆 !."

"I think the way story going on that's not what your plan is yet 😉!."

"I has my prediction set, I can see how this going to be with all the clues and story come far 😳!".

"But I won't Penn down here to spoil the fun for other😆!." As you work hard to keep the suspense 😊

"But one thing I'm unsure about wish to know it's happily ever after or not?."

Originally posted by: Soso70

The story's going on. Everyone has their own plan. I like your lines about the garden. for him, it's a symbolic sign of their ruined relation. Think he wants renovation of the fort because in memory of their past relation and his guilt about his role in Adhams evil play. He's lost in old memories of Jodha.

Past part beetween Jalal and Bharmal speak of the deep entanglements.

Interesting how Adham play his game further. His admission that he used Jalal... and his annoncement of importance of King Bharmals room... certainly he has something in his evil mind. Despite his current situation. he's eaten away by his hatred and revenge. Maybe he again try to use Jalal to gain his goal.

In Veers conversation with Jodha he almost gave his disguise away. Jodha calls for evidence against Angel of Death and kick him out. There's so much hatred in her tormented soul. All because of treason, power and desire of others. What a plot. Great! She also wants to use Jalal to gain her goal. But I think deep inside of her there are feelings for him. the thin line beetween love and hatred... but she doesn't want to admit it to herself. too hurt by his supposed actions

On the other side Jalal also wants to use her to gain his goal. everyone tries to take advantage of the other in this triangle relation.

Hope, the truth will come to light. Let's see how they find together. This part truely deserves the title curse of love

awesome part. waiting for continuation

thanks for pm Avika 💖💖

take care

Oh my how I get extremely delighted by your beautiful review ♥️ I'm speechless how well you get my mind and the plot here

This is awesome thank you thank you so much 🤗

"Yes you are absolutely right, Everyone gas their own plan their present is Result of their past action and their plan are result of their present action and concern of their future! 😳

His renovation of fort decision you got absolutely right! 😉 as well his other plan which Jo thought to 😆

"But over all deep down they're aware the Ploy of fate is bigger than their plans(eventually the Author Akka me 😆! If they're not then you are ☺️

The past part of Bharamal and Ja is symbolic of their fate now to! 😉

"You has analysed very well he indeed have evil plan in heads but he will able to execute them or get to use Ja or not only time will tell 😳

I thought it will get funny AK want to use JA and Ja wants to use Jo and Jo wants to use Ja 🤣

"At time it will be reveal who they are it will turn out shocking for sure 😆

Yes he almost gave his identity but get to hold onto him, but let's see Jo caught it or not! 😳 for now she didn't but who know 😉

"About their feelings they all are suffering cause of their emotions only even if Jo hate him Then to she has place for him in heart after all there's always thin line between love and hate! 😉

Same goes for Ja to determine to prove Jo wrong he's turning out to hate her as well not knowing who she's 😆

"And about Adham though he's paying for his deed he's to shameless to learn a lesson and repent! 🤬

You are absolutely right all are planning to take advantage of other but what will happen at end only I know 😆

Thank you so much, for such a beautiful and lovely big review ♥️ I feel like dancing as soon I saw this ☺️

Thanks lot 🤗

Take care 😳

Originally posted by: James12

Avi take a bow 🙇🏼‍♂️🙇🏼‍♂️

"This is most refreshing, Complex and beautiful thriller story on AKDHA😳 simply befit of it's title Entangled love ❤️!."

"And each chapter has amazing Title to 😳!."

"Not for once it's bore me, instead it's keep me hook to it from beginning teaser to 9ch !."

"The way you make us relate with character, 😳 it's to good 👏!".

"At once, we feel disappointed by people like Abul Shah😳!."

"we feel bad for Amer Royals😒!."

"we despise evil guy like Adham😡 !."

"we feel pity on person like Ja🤓!."

"We Get spellbound by the fierce shrewd portrayal of Jo 😎 !."

"Each character has it's own Role to play that to amazingly hat's off to your writing 👏!."

"Still cannot believe it's your first work! 😆!."

"Though we want truth to be out soon and flower of love bloosom 😆 !."

"I think the way story going on that's not what your plan is yet 😉!."

"I has my prediction set, I can see how this going to be with all the clues and story come far 😳!".

"But I won't Penn down here to spoil the fun for other😆!." As you work hard to keep the suspense 😊

"But one thing I'm unsure about wish to know it's happily ever after or not?."

Thank you thank you so much Alex 🤗

I'm glad you enjoy the story 😳

The best about writing story are to make reader hook to it and make them relate to character to make them pic side as well 😳

And by your review it's seems i am succeeding in this 😳 I'm very thrill to know ☺️

Thank you 🤗

Well about happily ever after so yes be assure it is indeed happily ever after tale 😳 my first work I won't like to end it on sad note ☺️

Thank you so much and feel free to Penn down your prediction to 😳 it may help me to write as well ☺️

Thank you 🤗 take care 🤗

Originally posted by: Akdha_Saumya

Amazing chapter👍🏼

Thank you 🤗

Take care 🤗

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it dear

Awesome part

Hope truth is out soon & things are settled

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

Thank you 🤗

I'm glad you are enjoying my work 😳

"Sure if will be out and things will be settled ☺️

I will try

Thank you 🤗 take care 🤗

Wow amazing update

The title " Curse of love" totally suites

Thanks for update

Originally posted by: Jjlove

Nice update

Thank you 🤗

Take care 🤗

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Wow amazing update

The title " Curse of love" totally suites

Thanks for update

Thank you 🤗 glad you liked and find it befit the title to ☺️

Thanks lot 🤗

Take care 😳

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Ress😊

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Originally posted by: Evil_Flower_08

Oh my how I get extremely delighted by your beautiful review ♥️ I'm speechless how well you get my mind and the plot here

This is awesome thank you thank you so much 🤗

"Yes you are absolutely right, Everyone gas their own plan their present is Result of their past action and their plan are result of their present action and concern of their future! 😳

His renovation of fort decision you got absolutely right! 😉 as well his other plan which Jo thought to 😆

"But over all deep down they're aware the Ploy of fate is bigger than their plans(eventually the Author Akka me 😆! If they're not then you are ☺️

The past part of Bharamal and Ja is symbolic of their fate now to! 😉

"You has analysed very well he indeed have evil plan in heads but he will able to execute them or get to use Ja or not only time will tell 😳

I thought it will get funny AK want to use JA and Ja wants to use Jo and Jo wants to use Ja 🤣

"At time it will be reveal who they are it will turn out shocking for sure 😆

Yes he almost gave his identity but get to hold onto him, but let's see Jo caught it or not! 😳 for now she didn't but who know 😉

"About their feelings they all are suffering cause of their emotions only even if Jo hate him Then to she has place for him in heart after all there's always thin line between love and hate! 😉

Same goes for Ja to determine to prove Jo wrong he's turning out to hate her as well not knowing who she's 😆

"And about Adham though he's paying for his deed he's to shameless to learn a lesson and repent! 🤬

You are absolutely right all are planning to take advantage of other but what will happen at end only I know 😆

Thank you so much, for such a beautiful and lovely big review ♥️ I feel like dancing as soon I saw this ☺️

Thanks lot 🤗

Take care 😳

Oh thank you ☺️

You're very welcome Avi 💕💕

I really love your story. How you spin the threads, show the human abysses, describe emotions and also link the paths of fate together.

I thought it will get funny AK want to use JA and Ja wants to use Jo and Jo wants to use Ja

It will be a pleasure to read, how they use each other and how they will react if the come to know how their fate is linked.

But over all deep down they're aware the Ploy of fate is bigger than their plans

I'm sure you will play fate. I'm curious how fate (akka Avi) will do 😆

Keep it exciting 🤗