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Hi all....

Happy birthday to our Mishti..!

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Tere bin na lage Mera Mann


Chapter 48


The Tender Crescendo Of Passion.


As the dinner progressed with mild Parisian music in the background..and taking advantage of a break Abir's eyes searched her...and found her.. engaged in an animated talk with none other than the chairman..


He joined them and when the senior left commented .. lightly smacking her with his shoulders..


" Winding everyone on your little finger are you..?"


Mishti looked at him mischievously..scrunching her face ..


" Jealous much...! Are you..ehh?"


Before he could give her a perky reply someone tapped his shoulder.


As Abir turned his eyes lost its warmth..his jaws tightened a bit ..


The one person who kept clear of him all these years and till now has taken up the courage to approach him...


"Hello...Saksham...!. Saksham Rana...I hope you still remember me. Abir Rajvansh!"



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Abir turned to Mishti ..blocking the newcomer's view purposely as his eyes sweeped her .,.and asked Mishti to excuse them...


Her eyes enquired and his responded in reassurance..


As Mishti moved away Abir faced Saksham..


" I hoped that I was clear when I told you to stay clear of me.. that day.!"


Abir's words were on point and blunt that Saksham did take a step back..


"Whoa..chill man .. it's been years...and we've been in same circle but I stayed away till now.. don't you think it's high time we buried the hatchet...?!"


Abir snorted and turned his head ....eyes involuntarily seeking her position...


"We don't have a hatchet to bury...and to break bread with a person who harmed my friend is not my way of honouring the friendship.."


Saksham winced at the jibe...and respected the way Abir still is... unfortunately his " friend" wanted him to" harm "her and at that time the temptation blinded him...He did get what he desired .It was a shame though she failed in her objective..


Abir Rajvansh..you never knew..!!!


She rang him up in the morning... asking him bluntly to keep an eye on Abir..and to be honest he was surprised at Piya's command..over years they have met discreetly and spent their passion... without strings..but never she was unsure of Abir as she sounded now..


And he understood the reason now... walking away from them..


Nothing more to describe her poise...


She moved like a cool golden flame..


Abir's face darkened as he saw Saksham's eyes following Mishti...


He took a decisive step closer to him and warned him in the iciest tone..


" I thrashed you to an inch of your life.. for what you tried to do with Piya..but I will decimate you if you even dare to look at my girl.....I hope you will take the warning seriously this time.and I won't even respect your brother like I did last time."


At the mention of his brother. ..Saksham retreated...Arms raised in mock surrender..



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Mishti was confused when Abir told her after the dinner that they were going out ..and that he had already made arrangements to vacate the hotel... But she decided to wait and see...


They walked hand in hand..


Feeling the breeze of the cool air ...


Mishti slid her hands around his arm ...she had worn his coat ..and was wondering why Abir was distracted...


" Who was that guy..?..the one who kinda re introduced himself.."


Mishti asked pinpointing his distraction..


Abir sighed and held her closer..


"Just an old acquaintance and a bad memory..leave it...!"


" Okay..so where are we going....umm.."


She looked around recognising the route.. seeing the Eiffel tower.


" Are we going to Andre's cafe..?"


Abir nodded and smiled at her happiness...


" Wow...I loved the place ...nice ,cozy and with a splendid view ."


" Ah..you liked the view.. good..ab Chalo.."


Mishti was intrigued by the signboard in French outside the glass door..and her wonderment increased as she stepped into an empty cafe...


" Abir yeh itna Khali Khali kyun Hein...koi holiday Hein Kya?"


" Yeah...it's closed for some hours.. maintenance.. work.."


He quipped as he guided her to the rooftop..


Mishti let out a shriek of happiness as she spotted...two familiar figures..


" Mark...! You are back..!.. Hi Andre... Abiir.. you knew Mark was coming and planned this.!!.."


She looked around to find a small enclosure on the rooftop... decorated..

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" You look gorgeous madamoisalle.."


Andre bowed and kissed her hand...as Mark happily repeated the greeting with appreciation..


Abir knew how happy she was to see Mark...


Hell ... even he missed the guy ..!


" So you are officially back Mark .. thanks for joining me here..but now can I have my date with My Lady..."


The guys exchanged a happy look and left the couple...


Mishti looked at the subtle lighting and the intimate ambience of the place ..

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She ran to the railing.. soaking in the night view as Abir stood mesmerized at the view of her in the back ground of the glowing tower...starry sky ...and the shimmering City lights....


Mishti turned to Abir.....


" You are definitely the best schemer between the two of us...So are we umm.. going to spend the whole night here...?!.."


Abir nodded... holding her gaze....tapping his chin..with a naughty smile....which widened at the sight of her blushing and lowering of her eyes..


Mishti felt him come near and he lifted her chin...


" C' mon .. let's have a nightcap..."


He guided her to the cushions as she spotted the elegent wine arrangements by the side .


" Abir..why do I get a feel that. ..this is not just a date."


Mishti looked at him quizzically..


Abir handed over her the wineglass..


" It's a date Mishti...I do live with you under a roof ..I work.. with you...but.. nothing seems enough for me...I want to love you...to share every smile of you..and to never let you be sad..."


He held her hand in his...


"I didn't know how it would feel to call you mine out loud...and the thing I am going to miss the most when we go back home.. is that..feel....so now ..I want to feel it every moment and make you feel that I am yours.. completely... irrevocably..."


Mishti had tears in her eyes as Abir confessed his feelings...


And Abir's face changed from whimsical to contrite...


" Mishti....I .."


Abir cupped her face wiping off her tears and was amused by her radiant smile..


" Ab tum has rahi Hein ya ro rahi Hein iska pata mujhe kaise chalega.."


Abir asked playfully as she rubbed away her tears..and rested her head on his shoulder.


" Tumhein pata Haina...Tum mere saath Hein toh mujhe rona kyun aayega..I never imagined that I will be lucky enough to meet you again let alone feel your love...and here I am..it doesn't matter where I am...or who all are around me...if you are near..it's enough for me..."


Abir let her finish the sip and pulled her onto her feet..


Gently removing his coat...as Mishti looked at him and the way his fingers caressed her arms...


"May I have the dance.."


His palms held hers as he asked her huskily...the faint music from downstairs was seeping into their conciousness..and Mishti nodded.....

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They slowly took the steps ..both chuckling at Abir's missed steps .later... falling into sync and daring new twirls and dips . laughing..at their pose ..


Slowly..each moment and touch... stoked the ambers of desire...as his eyes feasted on her ...


As their breath quickened ...she held on to him.. rubbing her face onto his bare chest.. swaying gently ...time stilled as both basked in each other's warmth... listening to their single beat ...


A faint movement at the entry brought back Abir from his trance..... Andre rolled in the cake followed by Mark... ..


"Happy birthday Mishti...!"


A rumbling wish reached her ears... pressed to his warm chest.... Mishti opened her eyes and looked up at him.. surprised...!


Even she had forgotten about her birthday amidst all the busy and new experiences...

Not surprising though...Kuhu and Badimaa were the ones who always kept the tab on her birthday and sometimes surprised her with impromptu cupcake wishes...and then her friends......


She looked around to see the birthday wishes on the wall shimmering at her..


" Abir...all this ...was planned by you .!."


His face glowing with childish enthusiasm..was a heartwarming sight to behold and her face too glowed in reflection...


Mishti moved away from his embrace and blushingly thanked Andre and Mark for their wishes...


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After making her blow the single candle.. Abir whispered in to her ear...


"The first of many to come..!"


And got a hoot from Andre..and Mark.. clapped in Joy..


Mishti cut the cake and before she could feed Abir ..he took it from her and fed her ...


Mark and Andre moved in and cut the cake and after helping themselves took leave hastily giving the couple their privacy back...



Mishti turned to Abir...


" Itna bada planning..that too with out a clue to this... celebration.."


Mishti pointed to the lights..cake..and the gifts Andre and Mark gave her....


Abir made her sit and hugged her tight...


" It's nothing...and whatever I do.. it will not be even in a competition with what you give me...by being in my life..."


" And I need only you to make me happy..."


Mishti bored into his embrace...


" Now...can I have my share of cake..."


Abir asked her mischievously...and at his look Mishti understood the dangerous intentions.....and moved away...


" No ..no ..Abir..no smearing..."


Mishti ran around with Abir following her with the cake..and finally got caught by his strong arm...


He pulled her onto him... smearing a blob of frosting on her lips...and swooping in to nibble...... having his share ....and the passion both of them were cautiously keeping in check triumphed over their need for each other....


His lips pressed into hers in urgency as her arms twined around his neck... giving in to his exploration..and taking the pleasure his soft bites gave her.....


Her hands moulded his hard planes over the shirt and then impatiently slid under ...to feel them...


Her lips and her touch were driving him on to a brink...and Abir broke the kiss slowly.. supporting her...he can't lose his control now...this was her special day..and it was more than enough for him that she was in his arms...


Mishti looked at him with longing eyes..and they widened as Abir turned her around...


A cool touch made her look down to see a beautiful pendent.....the double infinity studded with diamonds...




Abir turned her to face him admiring the delicate golden chain and the pendent...


Mishti trailed her fingers along it in awe ..


" Abir...this is.. incredibly beautiful...lekin..itni expensive..".


She paused as she saw a flicker of hurt in his eyes... which he masked swiftly....


" Now ..you must be tired na..the meet and dinner..then this..Chalo..I'll show you the loft...you freshen up and rest...I"ll come after seeing off the guys..."


Abir directed her to the side steps of their enclosure and pointed to her a kind of modified attic..


Mishti felt awful as she took to the upward steps ..


Abir did all these things for her and she just had to act ingrate...but it just slipped out of her mouth...and he should know she doesn't need expensive presents ....his love and presence held more weight...


But not now...he won't show it ..but it was as though she could feel his hurt..and it was not arrogance of a wealthy man...but genuine hurt..


Her eyes widened at the sight in front of her ...

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The attic was partially roofed with glass windows and the cozy sleeping arrangement... Just beneath the exposed roof and an open plan bathroom.. to the inside..


Everything beautifully decorated....


As she moved taking in the beauty of the minimal lighting and natural moonlight she felt Abir...his touch in the cushions arranged ...the rose petals fragrancing the bath tub...


He did all this by himself...


For her...

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Abir walked back .. berating himself...


He shouldn't have taken her comment seriously...of course he knew she doesn't care much for jewelry..but she wore the one he gifted her all the time... without any quibbling..


And she was adept in reading him like an open book... he was sure if she did catch his fumble..she would feel bad...


He took the necessary things to arrange before she freshened up..and jogged up..


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Abir straightened up after setting their wine glasses on the table...then placed his watch and wallet by the side..


He looked at the clear night sky ..a faint chill in the air...and exhaled..but his breath struck as two hands wound around him...


Mishti pressed her face on his back... nuzzling the warm hardness...


" Abiir..I am sorry...I shouldn't have said that...I love whatever you choose to give me....and I mean it..I am sorry for hurting you..."


Abir kissed her fingers...


She did feel bad and now she is sorry for hurting him.... could he not keep his ego quiet for one day..!


He turned and looked at her...


She stood there... looking upto him....her honest eyes betraying the ambers burning in them....and then her shy lashes making an effort in vain to mask it....


She was waiting up for him...!


His eyes widened at the realization as she lifted her arms ....


The fabric slithered slowly and pooled at her legs..


Abir stood there... definitely shocked and in awe at the beauty unraveled in front of him....


Mishti had thought herself bold enough to carry out this ..but now shyness enveloped her .. and shot an uncertain look at Abir...


Her eyes held all the innocence and fear...


His eyes zoomed to the glittering pendent resting now in the valley of her orbs...and the subtle shimmering of the waist chain... giving her a surreal look in the night light...


Abir opened his arms...


Just as she surrendered before him in every way....he too submitted himself before her .. unconditionally..


Her eyes widened and the rush of trust and happiness in them was subliminal..


His arms enfolded her tightly ...as he pressed light kisses on her hair ... allaying her fears...


After a moment he lifted her chin..his eyes glinting mischievously.....


" To be honest I was wondering all evening whether...uhh.."


Mishti had pinched him at his light joke...


" Seriously...I am amazed..! now they make such gravity defying stuffs too...."


He laughed merrily at the way she tugged her bralette...and scooped her up in his arms.. eying her bare legs... greedily.....to the waiting bed...


It was natural for them to snuggle under the duvet and talk as they did on all the nights they sneaked to be together..


But each lingering touch and caress...were registering a high note of emotions..


Both were skirting around..the obvious... stoking the embers of passion ...by tiny kisses ..cuddles and caresses as they talked about the beauty around them ..


And those tiny kisses cuddles and caresses slowly turned into demanding...


His hands were given free passage and were now roaming on her body with a delight of discovering new curves and dips...


The ecstastic bubbles forming and bursting in the pit of her stomach ..


The goosebumps sprouting all over her body..


The blush deepening into a reddish hue..


The racing thump of her heart beats...


All were elevated to a higher plane...as his lips started their journey on her soft skin to an undetermined destiny... nibbling and laving all the way... making her tremble with want...


Her fingers fisted on to his silky hair as her heightened senses relayed the smooth chafing of his five o clock shadow...along her sensitive skin...to the dip of her navel...


She jerked as his tongue swirled her navel...


Tiny shockwaves coursing through her..at the onslaught of his ministrations....


Her arched frame.. begged for more and he was more than ready to oblige....


Her hands clawed at his shoulders...and as the intense wave of ecstacy subsided he cradled her in his embrace.. soothing her bewilderment...


She wanted to feel him and tugged at his shirt roughly... causing the button to pop out...


His silent laugh at her impatient act rumbled in his chest and Mishti was a bit embarrassed for a second...


Then to his shock she sat up on her knees and did the same honors to the rest of the buttons...just for the heck of it..!


" There ...laugh as much as you want.."


She said craftily as she watched Abir's heartwarming laugh.. .. Laughingly he pulled her onto him.. and whispered huskily...


" Did I tell you how much I love and miss my bossy girlfriend...!..my fiery girlfriend.."


At this comment Mishti blushed..and Abir caressed her cheeks lovingly...her arms wound around him shifting away his shirt on his back...her lips found his and nibbled on its fullness..and then returned his favor ardently as her lips paid tribute to his chiseled planes ..... inhaling his essence.. making her feel light headed..


Abir stilled when he realized where her hand stopped.....


His eyes flew to lock into hers...in an unasked question .


She nodded her answer... trying to mask her shyness...


She was sitting up as he joined her....his heart skipped several beats as he drank in her moonlit curves...


Realisation that they were wading into unchartered waters..was dawning onto both... being semi clad was not helping at all in reigning or hiding the urge to sate the unknown yearning..


The kisses grew more demanding and the age old instinct to feel skin on skin...was taking over..


He moulded her thin lace clad mounts as she twined her hands around his neck.. letting him so the honors...


He made her turn away.. hugging her from the back.. pressing kisses along the small of her back.. making her arch as he kneaded her softness....


And then she turned to him...her lips impatiently seeking their solace...


His passion now ..knew no bounds as his fetish was displayed..to him in their pebbled beauty....for him to be taken...


Her fingers dug into his hair.. pulling and fisting... as he inflicted sweet torture to her hardened nubs..


Abir was realising through the haze that he wouldn't be able to control himself if he continued at it..and tore himself away from her ....


" Umm.. Mishti..woh.."


As he took in her aroused glowing look he let out a groan and hugged her tight... looking at the star studded sky...


Mishti knew something was troubling him...and the way he was retreating gave her the clue...


" Abir..."


" Uhmm.."


" You told me that you will wait for me till I trust you ... with out fear or doubt...?"


" Hmm.."


' I am ready...I trust you..and I love you...and you were the only boy I loved ...the only man I love ....and ..and I want you...!"


Abir turned to her ...


" Mishti ..are you sure..this is an important decision for me too..and I don't want you to regret your judgement..,! I won't lie..I want you..just as my next breath..hell even more than that....but as much as I want you now ...I want you happy and safe more..."


Mishti pressed a kiss on his lips... rubbing herself onto him...in answer...and got his reply in kind...


He moved over her...unleashing the tender pangs of passion.... showing her the stars ...even with her eyes closed....


The wave was mutual as they together scaled the heights of passion.. when the time came and he was prepared...their eyes .... even in the liminal haze... held their gaze...


Totally understanding the value of the gift they were giving and taking...


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Both lay sated snuggling in a wonderous Bliss...


Abir kissed her a hundredth time... knowing very well that she didn't take the decision lightly..and now it was his responsibility to take care of her ...


Mishti looked up at him as he got up and before she could say anything he scooped her up..and for a moment his eyes were shocked to see the evidence of what he had taken from her ....his eyes misted at the thought of her pain to give him his pleasure...


Mishti revelled in the way Abir was tender and patient with her... allaying her fears and doubts... giving her so much pleasure before she felt the sting...and he was gentle...with her...letting her set the pace..


And even after...he never left her ... pressing kisses on to her hair... holding her in his arms....


The warm water dip he gave her was stinging at first..but then it became soothing... alleviating her pain and soreness..his arms around her soothing away her insecurities...


He had even changed the sheets and made the bed by the time she changed into her nightdress.....the one she used to tease Abir...and came back to the bed..


As they spooned under the duvet... comforting each other in their closeness...Mishti realized that the love she felt for him before this commitment had transformed into a much more deeper ...much more broader and much more Fuller .. feeling..


He was irreplaceable in her life..


now ...


He became her lifeline..


Her soulmate and her bodymate...


Her Partner in every sense...


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Same night New York..


Meenakshii was happily involved in planning the surprise party for Mishti...


Though Kunal and Kuhu had planned a small family celebration , when Meenakshii suggested about inviting the Saxena's over for the evening dinner...they agreed readily...and Kethu's face glowed...




Same night.. Toronto


Piya looked at the pics send by Saksham..


Happy faces... looking at each other.. with secret smiles..


Last year..they had talked about how he was going to be in the consortium...and she has dreamt herself beside him ..as his plus one..and center of attention....and now ..


Mishti...!


And what infuriated her further was the fact that Saksham didn't want to involve further...he made that clear to her...and that too pricked her much..


" You used me once and today I got the full brunt of my act when I looked in his eyes... after all these years.. Now..I am being polite..but. you are not worth Abir's anger a second time... !"


What was with that 20 something girl that made even a committed white collar bully like Saksham turn soft and now he was telling her... her worth...!!!


Well now it's time to amp up her scheme...


She looked at the calendar...


she was biding the time...to corner him from all sides. And make him hers..!



Same night

India..

Rajgadh.!



The leather clad feet crushed the dry leaves mercilessly.. as a robust figure walked to the courtyard of an abandoned house..


The long and dark shadow of the man as he stood still at the center of the courtyard fell on the house..


As if both were reacquainting after a long time...


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Paris


Abir looked at the beautiful lashes resting on her rosy cheeks...


The rhythmic ups and downs of her bosom..and the way her palm..rested close to his heart..as if his heart beat was her lullaby...


His mind was overwhelmed with emotions...as if he had everything in the world... right beside him...


The girl who elicited a protective feeling with her widened eyes ..now elicited the feelings of possessiveness and passion within him..


His eyes took in the plump lips...and his heart beat quickened...


And as if in response she parted her lips ... moved closer to him... wrapping her arm around him snuggling deliciously....


Abir pressed a light kiss on her hair and cocooned her in his arms...


As his eyelids grew heavy he was wishing to God that this night should never be over.


Little did both the souls knew about the shattering tempest laying in wait for them....just ahead the curve of their life journey..


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Edited by suryavni - 5 years ago
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What a magnificent, awesome beautiful chapter!👏Take a bow! You’re a master at storytelling! 👌👍👏


So my guess was right, Saksham indeed was sent by Piya to spy on Mishbir! Oh Gawd this Piya is really disgusting, 🤢she used Saksham in hopes of winning over Abir? But it didn’t work in her favor, only caused fight between them. And she’s still FWB with Saksham? Wonder why Abir never realized piya’s ugly intentions?

Who is Saksham’s brother?

Cool golden flame is a great description of Mishti in the rose gold gown.😍

Wow Abir’s planning for her birthday is just picture perfect! 😍 He booked Andre’s cafe and Mark joined them too! Is Mark’s vacation over?

Loved Mishti’s rooftop birthday celebration with Eiffel Tower views, romantic emotional Abir, their slow dance, cake, gifts, plus Mark and Andre’s friendly presence!👍🏼
Such a memorable birthday party for Mishti.😍❤️⭐️

Thanks for Mishti’s superb birthday sequence as I always felt terrible about how badly Mishti’s birthday ended in the show!😭

What a beautiful gift Abir gave her, the infinity pendant! ❤️ Mishbir parallel again, she gave him infinity bracelet for his birthday! 😳

Aww Abir loves to call her his girl openly, he will miss that back in NY! Now Mark is back so Mishti won’t even be at work with him!

Ahh Abir feeding her cake then eating his share from her lips! All our unfinished tent fantasy fulfilled! ☺️🔥

Aww she hurt his feelings with the expensive comment but koi Baat nahin she will make up for it! 😳

Wow the gorgeous arrangement in the loft, the moonlit room with dim lights, the bathtub with rose petals, ahem Abir is well prepared for their night of passion. ☺️

Their lovemaking was as beautiful, sensuous and satisfying as imaginable for this passionate couple! ☺️❤️ Loved how Mishti took the initiative and shed her covering. 🔥
Gravity defying ...naughty description!😆

Loved how they cuddled, talked and caressed before taking it to the next level. ☺️
Abir’s bossy fiery girlfriend took the lead again! 😆Loved how he “prepared” her for his possession!☺️🔥

Loved it when he tried to retreat at last moment, she told him she was ready for him, she trusted him completely. Loved the culmination of their passion!☺️❤️🔥🔥🔥

One of the best written lovemaking scenes I’ve ever read! 👌❤️

Such beautiful description of their afterglow, cuddling with a feeling of complete belonging!

He’s her lifeline, her soulmate, she’s his woman forever!

Now I’m even more scared about their future, the storm that awaits them.😨

In NY Meenu invited Nihaal’s family means is she going to announce Mishti’s alliance with Nihaal?

Rajgarh scene- Oh God, Abir’s dad is back! He’s going to cause major havoc in their lives! Why do I suspect he had killed BP? And Meenu hid this secret? 🤔

Piya had planned to accompany Abir to the conference and now burning up to see Mishbir pics. Plus saksham refused to help her anymore!

Piya Looking at the calendar? I guess she’s planning to trap Abir with some false accusation about when they were staying in the same apartment in Toronto! Did she take compromising pics with him while he was drunk? Or did she.actually .....🤢

Loved how you moved rapidly between NY, Rajgarh and Toronto, like in an actual screenplay, great editing of scenes!👏👍🏼

Best update yet! 💯Looking forward with dreadful anxiety to what will happen next with our beautiful lovers! 😬🥶

Thanks for the pm! Loved all the photos to match your beautiful scene setups!❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hi Surya.. Thanks for the PM and once again a beautiful nd a hot update too 😊👌👍

Expected Mishti's birthday celebration to be something on this line and also loved the way u portrayed their love making in an aesthetic way

I also loved the way u switched between the scenes and the characters 👌👍👏

Now coming to the Celebration style.. It was so classy, elegant and so beautiful that we cld enjoy the Paris view as well as the celebration ❤️❤️

I kept watching the movie as such while reading through this because the pics u have chosen gave me such a great visual treat that I could feel it.. Be it the pendant, Paris view, the attic, the bath tub, nd not to forget the delicious cake 👌👌👏👏❤️

Hope the forthcoming storm is not as scary as I expect it to be.. The story is getting very gripping with all the elements and waiting for them to unfold one by one 👍

What a great story teller you are.. Take a bow ❤️

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U r asking for honest review..so u r so so good at story writing.love how they celebrated her birthday..but Mehul is back I think.. Piya is planning against them .. nihaal family coming for mish birthday celebration..so many things happening same time against mishbir..so we will witness their heartbreak..but yes it is much needed..kyun ki itni asani se to pyaar milta nahin..and I m sure u will make us cry in the near future but still you will do full justice to the story..and I k waiting for the next update.. dekhte hai kya hota hai age

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Thank you so much Surya for the PM 😃


I just realized you matched mishti's birthday in your FF with mishti's birthday in the show 👏

The VM was mesmerizing This is the best birthday mishti and we could've wished for! I absolutely everything ❤️


Also thank you for the photos..they really help with visualizing the setting


Loved the cliffhangers at the end..I wonder who the new character is and what piya and meenu are planning..but please don't separate mishbir 😭

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@ pallavi25

Thank you dear for your generous appreciation and love...🤗.

It's truly a pleasure to read your review..and once again you ESP'd me..😆

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@vidz70

Thanks Vidya..

Happy to know you loved this...

Well...it's fiction and imagination can take us anywhere so why not..I chose Paris..😆

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@Hello2020

Thanks dear...

Do not take stress about the future of Mishbir..mujhe bhi pata nahi Hein ki Kya hone Wala Hein..🤣

So enjoy an update at a time..

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Thank you dear..🤗

Happy to know you enjoyed the update and the VM..I know the song is old but Shreya Ghoshals voice is never old...😆

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Chapter 49


Surprises Galore..!!


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Mishti opened her eyes..



The morning twilight had lightened up the sky and chirping of birds greeted her day...


She opened her eyes slowly and then they widened suddenly..and..her instinctual stiffening was answered by an arm tightening around her waist..and as she looked with a mixture of alarm and shyness...she found him nestle his cheek onto her bosom...


Abir...


Her fingers threaded hesitantly through his haphazard hair ...


" Umm..abhi uthna mat...I need you... Mishtiii.."


Abir mumbled as he pulled her close... and whispered..


" Happy birthday... Mishti... but ..yeh batao..why do I get the feeling that I am the one going to be showered with gifts..."


He turned pulling her onto him..


Mishti looked at his sleepy smiling face ...her slightly long hair framing her face and touching him...and rested her face on his chest.listening to his heartbeats...


After a few minutes... she.said in a low voice..


" Abiir...I never did actually enjoy birthdays ..it kinda tugged fiercely that my birthday didn't matter for the persons responsible for me..but you made me forget that yesterday..."


Abir pulled himself into a sitting position.. holding her along... cradling her onto his chest..and she looked up to him...


" Thank you for letting me in your life...you are the only one who made me feel whole...."


Abir pressed a kiss on her forehead..and held her....just letting them soak in the morning vibes... not yet ready to let go the bubble of ecstacy and contentedness...


The sudden shrill of her phone startled their idle camaraderie.....


Mishti got up scrambling towards her bag..Abir looked at her enticing frame...his eyes taking on the faint marks on her arms and the hickies ....


The remainders of their passion..


" Video call. !!.. OMG...Kuhu..?! ..itni subah..it's only 5.."


" It's 12 there Mishti...calm down.."

Abir cautioned her smoothly...


Mishti put on her robe..and eying Abir getting out of the bed ...clad in boxers..she attended the call... signalling him to move away...


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Kuhu..was buzzing with excitement as Mishti took the call...


" Mishtii...happy birthday..!!.. tujhe wish karna tha ..! Ho Gaya...ab mujhe room dikhao...view dikhaao.sabkuch ..dikhana yaar...."


As Mishti moved her camera around... carefully .. Kuhu's excitement plumetted..


" Yeh Kya ..tujhe aise loft main daal Diya bro ne..aur woh khud seven star mein so rahe Hein..."


" Kya.? Konsa loft ..?"


Kunal came behind Kuhu wrapping his arm around her and looking at Mishti on the screen..


" Bhai tumhein aisa accommodation kyun arrange karega..koi room booking problems toh nahi hua na...? By the way... happy birthday BFF..if you were here you too could have come with me for the road trip..."


Seeing Mishti trying to answer..Kuhu interrupted..


" Mishti ko bolne Dena...tum...use aur sad mat karvao..woh bro wahaan use koi pinjre mein rakha Hein...aur birthday par kaam bhi karva Raha Hein..."


Mishti shook her head exasperatedly...


" Shut up tum dono...pehle Thank you for your wishes..lekin itni rat ko ..Tum donon jogging ke liye nikal rage ho Kyaa. So jaao...aur yeh Abir ki ek friend ka studio apartment Hein..and I loved it...look...its beautiful na..."


She walked to the stairs and showed them the profile of Eiffel tower...


" And ..uhh. A.. Abiir..is staying here only...with Andre...and Kuhu.. today I think your bro can spare me some shopping time.. before we board the flight....."


Amidst Kuhu's happy shreiks Kunal said laughingly..


" Haan..Bhai won't miss meeting up with Andre... And he can't leave you alone too...okay then ...now let me spend some quality time with my girl...you enjoy.your day.. don't miss me.!!!"


Kunal held Kuhu tight as Mishti looked on adoringly at the couple... already continuing their banter with easiness...


" Mishti...will send photos of my shopping list ..tum please dekh Lena...Dadi too conveyed her wishes..ab woh Soo rahi hein ..sir abhi yeh mujhe tang karne laga Hein..ssee yaa..ouch Kunal...!"


" Great..mere birthday pe tum donon ka PDA dikhane keliye call Kiya tha Kya...Kunal..!."


Mishti asked mischeviously totally forgetting Abir's presence...


" Badimaa ko mein call karloongi...aur take care you two...Kunal.. road trip safe heina...?"


To her concerned question Kunal quipped .


" I promised you na... that I will take care of her...so you chill there ..and try not to harm my Bhai...waise loft Wala idea bura nahin tha.....if it wasn't you guys I would have said romantic...! see yaa.."


Mishti let out a happy breath and turned to bump into Abir.....


He held her from falling and looked questioningly at Mishti...


" Woh..Kya tha..?..PDA...?..it was Kunal and Kuhu right...toh wahaan PDA kaise.."


Abir asked confused and seeing Mishti''s "caught red handed" bite of lips his eyes widened..


" Woh..kuch nahin..tum toh unhein jaante ho na..kuch na kuch Karthe rehthe Hein..ohh.. Abiir.."


By now she had become used to being in air without any notice...as Abir scooped her up and dumped her on the bed ...and moved over her .


" Ab toh sab Sach Sach batana.. what's going on...I was getting weird reactions from Kuhu and Kunal for a while...and now you are definitely in your bewitching mode...see I totally get that devilish glint in your eyes now..."


" Tum gussa toh nahi honge na?"


Mishti asked him in low voice....


" Well...I can't promise that..? Kya gussa karnewala koi baat Hein Kya.."


Mishti pouted a bit...


" Today is my birthday..and you can't get angry with me..."


Abir.. fearing his words offended Mishti....retracted his words hastily...


" Maine kab kaha ki mein tumse gussa Hoon..but just tell me... OMG...no.. don't.."


Abir's eyes widened as he clamped his open mouth shut with his palm . Mishti looked at him and got that Abir had caught on to the truth...


As the moment of his stupefaction passed Abir looked at Mishti..


" Seriously Mishti...!!?... kabse..??! OMG...Kunal...!!"


" and Kuhu..."


Mishti completed his sentence... clearing any remaining confusions in Abir...


" Oh God ..Mere Ghar pe itna sabkuch ho Raha tha...and I being a fool alienated myself from everyone..."


Abir who was way too much regretting his decision to stay away was now totally bemused at the turn of events...


" Aur Tum....."


He looked at her... determined..


Mishti met his gaze ruefully.. and inched back ... unintentionally letting her short nightdress to ride up.....as he crawled over her ...


" Just as I said... today is your birthday and you are giving me all the gifts in a go....So...Now that I am not mad at you.... Tell me how all this happened..."


And she did..


Mishti''s eyes saddened as she relived the rakhshabandhan day as she narrated how she came to know about Kunal's feelings for Kuhu...how she put on the conditions...


Abir too was passing through the tumultuous emotions that coursed through him that day ..and it was when she fondly reminisced how she and Kunal cemented their relationship by tying rakhi....that Abir completely recognized the communication he witnessed between them that night...


" Ab se no secrets Mishti...agar mujhe tab pata hota toh Shayad mein tumhein chodke nahin jaata..I don't want to be away from you...and whatever it is I won't leave you..I don't think I can live without you.."


Abir said looking into her eyes...and she said agreeingly...


" And I want to celebrate every day every hour and every second with you...not just my birthday or yours..."


Her eyes glinted in her conviction and possessiveness and the same spark reflected in his eyes...


"And I just need to be near you... .. nothing else matter...I am happy with you...and happiest in your arms like this.."


She twined her arms around his neck pulling him on to her ...an embrace which soon turned sensual...


" Abiir...chodo abhi... brush bhi nahin Kiya Hein..."


Mishti protested as his nose and lips glided along her earlobes to her cheeks ...


He looked at her ...eyes locking.... reflecting each other's need ..


" Does it matter...?"


His question brought a fresh flood of rosiness to her cheeks... and he swoopped down to nibble the deliciously parted lips.


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Meenakshii was waiting exuberantly for the Saxena's to arrive..


She had asked Kunal to specifically invite Nihaal...and Kunal had happily done so...


As she looked around the preparations with a contented heart.. Meenakshi thought of the happiness Mishti has brought to her family..


Abir was thawing towards both of them ..


The home is filled with laughter...


The least she could do was to ensure her happiness..


Kuhu & Kethu were busy checking all the naughty arrangements they made to surprise Mishti..and Meenakshi looked for Parul to get an update on Abir's arrival...


" Kya baat heiin Dii...? Aap aaj kuch zyada hi Khush lag rahi ho..?"


Parul asked as Meenakshi turned her happy face to her.


" Khush na hone ki koi wajah nahin Hein na?..aaj Mishti ki birthday hein aur jane kyun aisa lag rahi Hein ki kuch acha hone Wala Hain..."


Parul looked at her askingly with a smile ...


" Woh Bharti ka call aaya tha...aur woh bohot khush lag rahi thi...Shayad koi good news Deni Hein unhein... Mishti ki rishtha pakka hojaye toh mere dil see ek bhoj halka ho jaata...Abir aur Mishti kab pohunch rahe Hein?...Abir ka message aaya Kya?"


" Haan .. Mark ka message tha..they are on the way...will reach in about an hour. Around 8-9..."


Parul replied and a bit hesitatingly put forth the question..


" Di... Rajshri di se iss bare mein kuch baat Hui Hein Kya aapka..aur Mishti se bhi poochni heina..?"


Meenakshi let out a sigh..


" Haan...unse aur Mishti se yeh baat kehna Hein...lekin mere khayal se agar pehle Nihaal ki taraf se rishtha officially aaye toh donon iss baat ko seriously lenge na.. specially Mishti... mujhe pata Hein ki she likes him..and both have befriended each other in these months...lekin uss relationship ko aage badhane keliye koi you wajah hona chahiye na..?"


Parul looked unconvinced..and Meenakshi frowned at her reaction..


" Kya hua Parul.kuch aur baat Hein Kya..?"


Parul looked around whimsically and replied..


" Just thought about bapujis suggestion...ki Ghar ki Lakshmi ko Ghar mein hi jagah Dena chahiye...."


Meenakshi looked at her sceptically..as Parul continued..


" Woh... bapuji Kunal ki nahin Abir ki baat Kar Raha tha....now that Mishti and Abir are having a good personal and professional relationship....."


Her voice trailed and she paused suddenly seeing the range of emotions on Meenakshi's face...


A spark of hope then Desperation and sadness ..


"Parul..mein aur Rajshri ek baar aise sapnon ka Mahal banaya tha...humari donon bachon ko leke...aur usko unhi haathoon se buri tarah choor hote hue dekha ..aur aise bikhar Gaya ki chah kar bhi hum unhein Samet nahi paaya..."


Meenakshi let out a deep sigh...


"Ab ek aur baar aise sapne dekhne ki himmat nahin Hein mujhmein.naahi...Rajshri ko dobarah aise sapne tootthe hue dekhkar khud bi kharna hein....woh donon door hi theek hein....isiliye us din meine bapuji ki baat ko taala tha...ab Nihaal .. mereliye aur tumhareliye bhi Abir se Kam nahin Hein... bhagwan se dua Hein ki is baar Meri baat woh sune aur sab mangal ho jaaye.."


Parul's eyes widened in understanding as to why bapuji said the statement..and she hugged Meenakshii... sharing her sense of loss...


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Mishti was having a difficult time balancing her happiness and sadness....


They had spent the whole trip together... And he made her birthday memorable...in many ways..


After breakfast Abir had taken her to a special place .... before they boarded the flight back to New York..


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" Mishti this is the Sacred heart baselica...I wanted to come here with you to seek blessings..."


Abir told her as both of them stood before the alter...hand in hand ...and she send a heartfelt prayer to almighty to protect him.. and their love...


She absolutely loved the beautiful hill top baselica and was amazed to see the whole city view from the top...in the early morning charm....on their way down Abir had directed her to a small green space and she was blown away by the view ...


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Abir hugged her from behind and said sheepishly...


" I know...it's silly...but I want to say I love you to you in all these languages... about 250.."


Mishti...was awestricken at the Wall of love...and at his words., turned and gave a smooth peck on his cheek...


" 251..."


Abir looked at her enquiringly and then his brows cleared....it was another language of love....!


And he replied in the same language...


With more ardourous expressions..!..


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OOTD Mishti

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Now as she hid her face on his chest...as they flew back...she was doing her best to hold herself together..


They had slept holding on to each other and was given total privacy by Mark and Andre...



Abir too was in a state of gloom...and it was evident by the way he held her ...and the way he pressed tiny kisses on her hair...


From tomorrow ...the bubble in which they were close to each other...content in reaching out to each other instinctively... would be no more..


" Mujhe kal se office nahin jaana...!!"


Abir voiced his despair in a petulant voice...and that made Mishti look at him..at his pout...


A small smile beamed at the corner of her lips...as love for her boy/man.. filled her inner self...


" Tum 3 saal ka bacha ho..?"


Abir looked at her...


"Kaam chor ho?"


He shook his head...


" Kal koi exam Hein ki tum ready nahin ho?..?"


Abir nodded negatively,


" Toh Kal se office kyun nahi jaaoge..? Zaroor jaaoge..!"


" Tum nahi hoga na mere saath..."


He paused..

Pulling her closer...as if to melt her into him ..


" Abiir..."


"Hmm"


" Humein thodi dooriyaan toh sehni hi hogi na..I am holding up now...ab tum bacha banoge toh mujhe strong banna hi padega na?!"


Abir eyed her sadly..and with a long drawn breath he caressed her face...


" Aur kabhi kabhi..tum bhii bachi ban sakthi ho...aur mein tumhareliye strong banoonga... okay.."


Mishti nodded... smilingly through the tear sparkling eyes...and he just kissed away the tears...


" Now ...get ready.. every one will be waiting to see you.."


Abir patted her as Mishti turned to him...a bit dull..


" Not everyone one .. Kunal Kuhu aur Kethu kahin jaa rahe Hein..road trip pe.."


" Oh.. I didn't know.." Abir quipped and made her to get freshened up..


A ping on his phone made him look at the incoming message from Kunal and his face shadowed...



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The guests were warmly welcomed and were seated...and all... especially Meenakshii noted the happiness on Nihaal's and Bharti's faces...


Nanu's face was now apprehensive and he tried to cover up his tension as he indulged in talks with Pratap..


Nihaal joined Kunal and soon the foursome retreated leaving the elders to their talks...and eventually after refreshments Bharti turned to Meenakshi...


" Meenakshi...mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi....Kya hum kahin aur baith sakthe Hein..."


Meenakshi was amused by this request and nodded readily..


" Haan haan...kyun nahi...aayiye... come to my room..."


Meenakshi eyed Parul and she nodded in agreement... and went to Rajshri's room to bring her to the hall...


Meenakshi and Bharti walked to Meenakshi's room.


Nanu's eyes followed Meenakshii in a veiled anxiety..


Pratap cleared his throat..


" Yashpal ji... Bharti Meenakshi ki se Jo baat kehne jaa Rahi Hein ..mein us bare mein aapse baat karna chahoonga...."


Nanu looked at Pratap a bit sceptically..and nodded...


" Meenakshi ji .. Rajshri ji ki beti Mishti ka Nihaal me saath rishthey ki baat Bharti se kahi thi...dekha jaaye toh I like her.. Bharti too have become fond of her..toh.. Bharti ne kahaan ki agar Bache ek doosre ko behthar jaane toh acha hoga...and we had a talk with Nihaal..."


Pratap paused and cleared his throat uncomfortably...and Nanu looked at him intrigued..


" Umm.Nihaal agreed to his Mom's idea ..but he gave us a shock... .I don't know how to say..but mere bete ko aapki Ghar ki beti pasand Hein...lekin...woh Mishti nahin Hein...!"


The relief that coursed through Nanu was visible but the next moment the question was raised in his mind...


" Mishti nahin Hein...? Ghar ki hi beti Hein..?"


Pratap smiled...


" Nihaal Ketki ko pasand kartha Hein... and it's my hunch that they have declared their feelings for each other.."


Nanu's face lit up in happiness..and he clapped in Joy..


" Yeh toh double Khushi ki baat Hein..!"


Pratap was confused..


" Double Khushi...!?"


Nanu reigned his over whelming happiness and simply nodded...


" Meri poti aapki Ghar ka bahu bane ... aur Nihaal Jise Abir ki hi tarah hum Pyaar Karthe Hein woh is Ghar ka daamad bane .. double Khushi ki baat Hein na.."


Pratap nodded and let out a relieved breath..


" I knew for sure that you would understand our dilemma... even Nihaal sounded confused . He told us that he and Mishti have a good friend ship and he always respected her sense of responsibility..but....We can't make decisions for our children regarding such matters..I know it's tacky when the rishtha swap takes place...but I hope we'll be forgiven for this..."


Nanu got up and Pratap followed..


" Ismein maafi maangne wali koi bhi baat nahin Hein...aur aap dono khul ke humse yeh baat kaha ki aapko Mishti pasand Hein lekin Nihaal ko Kethu pasand Hein..bachon ki zindgi ka savaal Hein...unka bhi sunna chahiye.."


Kuhu..came hurriedly in to the hall... followed by Nihaal Ketki and Kunal..


" Nanu...Abir bro aurr Mishti aa rahe Hein... let's start.."


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The hallway was dim...


Mishti was relieved of her luggage by Sam and Abir had told her to go in...


She walked in followed by Abir.


Seeing the emptiness in the house Mishti looked at Abir ... concerned...who looked at her blankly..


" ..Kunal Kya sabko leke Gaya Hein Kya.. lekin jo pics bhej rahe the usmein woh teenon hi the....mein Badimaa se milke aati Hoon.."


Mishti said and as she reached the hall...


A spotlight fell on her....


" Abiiirr..."


Mishti stopped in a mixture of confusion and surprise..his name coming in to her lips....and bumped onto Abir...as the golden cool light..cascaded over them...


Abir steadied her...


Happy birthday Mishti got displayed on the side...and party lights brightened with loud confetti pops...


Rajshri..stood there in the front.. supported by Kuhu and Kunal..


Parul stood with Nanu.. and Kethu..


Pratap and Nihaal stood on side and Rajshri welcomed Mishti with open arms...


Just as Mishti was engrossed in the surprise,love and the shreiking wishes from the youngsters...


Abir's eyes flew to Nihaal's and got the reassuring wink...and then he saw his Mom coming to them... followed by Bharti..aunty...who looked a bit ruffled..


Meenakshi's eyes went straight to Abir's...


Abir's face stiffened and he met her gaze squarely..


The anger in her eyes were directed to him only ...


Meenakshi looked at Mishti and her face changed into a smiling one..


" Mishtiii. Beta ... happy 21 !"


Mishti hugged her Chotima and Massi and then thanked everyone for this lovely surprise..


Kunal Kuhu and Kethu ...all got tight thank you hugs from her...


"Hey..! Bhai ko bhi ek hug de hi do .. Mishti.. Surprise inke help se nahi ho pata...aur time pe tumhein wapas bhi laya...toh unhein bhi haq Hein.."


Kunal pulled Abir in front of her .. amidst his mild protest...


For a moment their eyes met sharing their intimate secret ...


Abiir opened his arms and Mishti hugged him lightly.. murmuring a thank you...


Nihaal and Nanu were in splits but held on to their wits witnessing Abir and Mishti hug in front of the family...


Sam rolled in the cake and Kuhu and Kethu flanked Mishti as she cut the cake amidst the cheer...


" Pehle kisko milega cake...?!"


Kethu wondered loudly... unaware of the Undercurrents happening...


" Ismein itni doubt kyun...Nanu ko...!!"


Mishti moved to Nanu with a slice but Nanu stopped her ...


" Mishti beta aaj toh tumhein kisi aur ko mithai khilana Hein....mein Meenakshii se bola that ki tum is Ghar ki Lakshmi ho...aur aaj tumhare hi wajah se khushiyaan is parivaar mein kadam rakha Hein...

Iska mooh meetha karvao pehle ..."


He pushed Nihaal to the front gently and before Meenakshii could protest ..he. announced..


" Kethu keliye Nihaal ka rishtha aaya Hein..!"


There was a eruption of cheering all at once as Mishti jumped with joy... Kuhu's exuberant OMG...and Kunal's whoop...!


Abir's face brightened and a visible relief of tension was seen on Pratap and Bharti's faces..


" OMG...this is the best surprise ever ...thank you for this gift..."


Mishti fed the whole slice to Nihaal and hugged him tight ...


Abir congratulated his friend ...


Kethu was standing stunned at Nanu's words along with Parul who too had no idea what was happening...but she rose to the occasion and congratulated Bharti and Pratap..


Meenakshi exchanged a look at Parul .. both knew it was futile to say anything now as Nanu himself approved this alliance..


Meenakshi's eyes went back to Abir ..who now stood by Kethu ..a hand around her as Kunal teased her mercilessly.. and Kuhu beaming with Joy... Rajshri smiling serenely...


Cake was distributed to all..by the staff..


" Ab hum Jiju bula sakthe Hein na... Kethu...Jiju ko akela mat chodna..."


Mishti said and Kuhu nudged Kethu to Nihaal's direction ..


A shy Kethu..stood beside Nihaal...still in disbelief..


" Mishti..aaj tumhara birthday hei na...sorry beta yeh sab uske beech mein ho Raha hei..bohot bohot badhayiyaan..."


Bharthi wished her and gave her a small gift..


"Nahi Aunty..aapne toh mujhe sabse Khushi denewali khabar dii Hein..I am so happy this is happening now.."


Mishti took her aashirwad..


Others too gave Mishti her gifts...and it was then Kuhu noticed Mishti''s pendent...


" OMG...this is lovely....Teri selection mast Hein....Paris shopping...huh.."


Mishti looked at Abir... looking at her intently...his eyes now doing a naughty smile...


" Umm..haan...kinda self gifting...!"


Mishti fumbled at his steamy gaze... trying not to blush..


As the elders seated in the hall..the youngters retreated to the patio....


Kunal set up the music and twirled the birthday girl to the center... after Kunal Nihaal did two steps with Mishti who then pushed him to Kethu...with Kunal hooting..at the pair..


Before Kunal could claim Kuhu...Abir pulled Kuhu to the dance floor...


" Tum donon mujhse kuch chupa rahe ho..na..?!!"


Kuhu looked stunned at the Stern but low voiced question and looked at Mishti who was dancing with Kunal with masti...


"Mmmishti ne bataya...Kya? lekin..bro..woh..hum.."


She stammered ...and hung her head...


" Haan ..lekin I suspected both of you...and then I heard she talking about your PDA.. today.."


Kuhu blushed red and shot a look at Kunal..who was staring at them a little confused...


Mishti caught the look and Abir's face...


" Abir ko pata chal Gaya Hein...!"


Mishti dropped the ball ..


" Ehh ..what OMG.. Bhai...ko pata chalgaya...?! Mishtiii .ab Mera khair nahin.. please mujhe bachana ..okay.!!.."


" Eww..aise bheegi billi ki tarah rahoge Kya. Koi apne Pyaar ke liye Kya Kya nahin Karthe...Chalo ab haq se use apne pass le aao.."


Mishti motivated him playfully... enjoying Kunal's tension...


Kunal took baby steps towards Abir and as Abir looked at him....he stopped.Then taking a deep breath..


" Bhai ..may I cut in..."


" Kyun.. Tumhara BFF ki birthday Hein..usko entertain Karo...we are cool here ..heina Kuhu...?!"


Abir said candidly enjoying the look of frustration on Kunal's face...


Kuhu... in a torturous dilemma nodded bothways..and Mishti couldn't stop her laugh..


" Sab pol kholkar has rahi Hein..have some merci yaar.."


Kunal turned to Mishti... begging her..


Abir let go of Kuhu.But looked at Kunal sternly


" We are going to have the talk...abbi keliye ...ummm..le Jao..."


Abir smiled widelyas he said the last part. and Kunal let out a loud sigh..


He turned and hugged Mishti.


" Thanks yaar..Bhai ko manane keliye..."


And then turned and hugged Abir...


Kuhu looked at Mishti and said a hushed thank you.. happily as Kunal pulled her to him..



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Abir looked at Mishti...


She looked at him..


Abir slowly opened his arms..


Mishti looked around..


Kunal Kuhu... moving in their own world..


Nihaal Kethu had already moved to the garden holding hands... immersed in talking...


She looked at her home...

And moved swiftly into his embrace...

sashaeying to the music...

his arms holding her waist ..and hers holding on to his arms..



Abir moved away from Mishti twirling her ...then pulled her close...


Eyelocked.... they moved slowly.. minutes passed by as the couple indulged in their closeness....then realising the situation and looking around a bit awkwardly... Abir twirled Mishti again..


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At the hall..


Parul had video called Nidhi Mami...and shared the happy news...


Meanwhile Sam got a call and he moved to convey Meenakshii the message..


A smiling Meenakshii listened to Sam and just as a sunset brings darkness..her face shadowed in panic...


Still ...she nodded a yes ..


Her eyes moved to the door...and then to Rajshri..


Since only the hall was lit and the foyer was dark the persons who walked in were not entirely visible to the people in the hall...


A tall bespectacled man and a short plump lady in Salwar.. entered the hall..


At Meenakshi's eye command Sam put on the lights ..and everyone looked around .


Rajshri's lips moved in awe...as the mist forming in her eyes thickened...


" Shourya...!!"


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Edited by suryavni - 5 years ago
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Very nice update . I can feel the happiness there. You are very good at words . Keep writing.

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Thanks for this long and delightful chapter! The title is so apt, it’s indeed full of surprises for everyone! ⭐️

Mishbir morning after scene was sweet, romantic and sensuous! 🔥 Abir is always in the mood and Mishti is his willing captive! ☺️

Both got “gifts” on her birthday😳

Good thing KuKu didn’t see Abir in their love nest aka loft bedroom, they would be even more shocked than him! 😛 But Abir saw and heard them!

KuKu think Abir is making Mishti slog and stay in a junky place, if only they knew! 😆
Nice to see KuKu so close and comfortable with each other.

Abir shocked and surprised to learn about KuKu. He never guessed, no wonder Nanu calls him gadheda.😆 But I Wish Mishti or Kunal had confided in him before he went to Toronto, then he wouldn’t stay away and suffer for 6 months and Piya wouldn’t get the chance to trap him like she’s planned. This is why it’s bad to keep secrets from the people you love.


Ahh the magnificent sight of Sacre Couer,😍 we saw it from afar but didn’t get to go up, too many steps!

Wow, the Wall of Love! Never knew about this place! I can see Ami tomake bhalobashi written there!😆 Mishti’s language of love #251 is adorable 😘😙

Abir wants to say I love you in all 250 languages, but first he should say it in front of everyone. This hide and seek is going to cost them dearly.🤔

European lovers also put locks on all their bridges with their names inscribed on them and then throw the keys in the river.

Aww Abir being a petulant child, doesn’t want to go to office without Mishti, her three questions.😆...he’s her man child. 🤗❤️

Meenakshi, Nanu and Parul all shocked at the Rishta swap. I’m glad that Nihaal honestly admitted his feelings to his parents and stopped their proposal for Mishti. 👏 Honesty is the best policy!

So good to see Nanu as the true elder, as the decision maker in the family, he approved of Nihaal Ketu match right away! What a relief for Mishbir and Nanu....and Nihaal too! 😆

Wow, Meenu and Rajshri had dreamed of Mishbir match when they were kids!😲

If only the kids hadn’t fought back then....and now it’s high time Mishbir should tell their secret to the family before everything is ruined by Piya and past family secrets. Why aren’t they telling the elders? Why hide their love when they have already committed to each other in every way? I don’t understand this secrecy!😕😔

So KuKu lied about their road trip as they wanted to surprise Mishti on her birthday and Abir played alongwith them? Mishti certainly got a fabulous 21st birthday party! 😍

As well as Abir’s birthday “gifts” in Paris!😳☺️

Chalo birthday hug ke Bahaney Mishbir hugged in front of the family! 😆 How did nanu and Nihaal control their secret mirth?😂

Why did Meenu look angrily at Abir after Nihaal’s mom switched Rishta ? Does she blame Abir for this?😕

Aww Mishti fed the first piece of cake to Nihaal as ghar ka damaad, poor Abir that slice belonged to him! 😭

Wish Mishbir and KuKu were as honest with their elders as Nihaal is with his parents.

Great dance setup by Kunal on the patio, all 3 couples danced. ❤️

Beautiful song selection to dance to, lovely song by Atif Aslam. Wow, Ileana D’Cruz! She’s gorgeous! 😍

Kuku’s guilty reactions that Abir knows about them, Mishbir teasing KuKu was cute and funny. Loved their dialogues there.😆

Mishbir slow dancing to Atif song I’m in dreamland! ❤️

The shocker at the end, Shaurya and Varsha arrived! 😲 Are they here for Kuhu? Has Varsha finally accepted Kuhu after all these years?😕

Are they here to reveal the dark secrets connecting the two families? Regarding the tragedy in the past? Will this secret affect Mishbir relationship?🥶

Loved Mishti’s white lacy top. And all the Paris pictures! Kudos to your detailed research! 👍🏼👏

Loved this update too! You’re building the suspense really well! 👌Cannot wait for the next part.

Thanks for the pm!🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Omg another blockbuster update Surya 👏


Mishbir's morning scene was amazing and loved how abir found out about Kuku's truth. Kunal calling the loft romantic and inquiring about why mishti staying there instead of the hotel was funny. I wonder how kunal will react when he finds out about mishbir


I felt so bad for mishbir when they were returning from paris..I hope family finds out about them and accepts their relationship so they don't have to pretend in front of everyone anymore


I was so scared when Nihaal's family came in but your surprised me with the best rishta swap ever 🤗Also since meenu said she wished to pair mishbir many years ago hopefully she won't object she finds out about mishbir's relationship


Nihaal and nanu's reaction when mishbir hugged in front of the family was cute


So the guy in rajgadh was shourya not mehul?

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Posted: 5 years ago

R dey going to seperated now??

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Plz don't let d family know abt them now

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chup chupke romance has their own charm. I want more dat kind of romance

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I am rooting for priya.

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Hoping her to do something grand

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