The Invincibles- A RudhiTa OS - Page 2

😆😆 loving the comments! ❤️

Originally posted by: Soma84

Alright! So this os is included the list of ffs/o.s which are the reason for expecting too much from makers on potential Rudhita scenes 😳

I loved how u didn't fail to add the iconic individual gestures of Rudhita according to scenes. Like Anirudh seating on his knees, Bondita hiding behind Anirudh instead of regular Hands-on-waist pose.

It's a wonderful depiction of myriad of emotions. 👏

Now, knowing about Bon's age, her gestures in the end like cupping Ani's cheeks and a couple of dialogues did seem a bit OTT 😜 even Ani kissing her palms too 🤭 but that's okay i guess.

Given the fact that we have already seen highest OTT in hira mandi track when Bon said all those Dil dhadakna, Pati-patni jap etc etc 🤣 , this little OTT (that i felt) from this OS is fine. However I'll be too pretentious if I said that i didn't like those gestures you have beautifully penned down

So in nut shell, it's indeed a lovely O.S and will definitely wish for similar scenes to be telecasted...❤️ though we know it won't but sochne me kya jata hai😉

OTT!!! indeed buddy! Kafi OTT tha... But yaarrrr... creative liberty le li miene thodi si! Mujhe bhi likhte hue hassi arhy thy... aur darr bhi lag rha tha ke kahin yahan sab ko yehi na lag jaye ke kuch pedophlic scenes likh diye hain... But I am glad for your lovely comment and appreciation Thank you so much buddy...

This is amazing and very good to write the depth of both feelings and to understand what both of them are going through 👏

The story is so real that you can put yourself in Anirudh and Bondita shoes, why a moment so scary 😧 can leave a mark on you for the rest of your life.

please could you translate the following for me to understand more because my Hindi is not very good

Ohh Bhagvan... kia ker dia miene yeh? Bondita, mujhe maaf ker dou please...miene uss waqt tum per vishwaas nahi kia tha... tumse ghussa hua tha... jab uss admi ne tumko haath lagaya tou mien wahan nahi tha tumhien bachaane ke liye. Maaf ker dou mujhe please...”

whisper, “Inhi haathon ko chot pohanchai thy na uss ne... mien usay nahi chhodunga Bondita.”

Abh sab theek hai Bondita. Iss admi ko iske kiye ki saza tou mien dilwaon ga hi, mager iski asal saza hogy jab tum isko iske saray sawalon ka jawab himmat se aur bahaduri se dou gy. Iss se daray beghair. Yeh kuch nahi ker sakta tumhara abh. Iss liye iss se darne ki abh zarurat nahi hai.”

A very big 🙏 if you have the time👍🏼

Yesss!I've read your os about menstruation and it was fabulous 🥰🥰🥰

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Buddy! 🤗 Thank you soo much! Your appreciation means a lot... 😳❤️ Yar mere ko bhool gaya hai 'Members Only' aur 'Do not copy' walay commands... Can you help?? 😕 Dont want to see my OS in one of the fanfiction blogs or Instagram posts... 😕

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Mujhe khud yaad nahi hai behen 😭 even i want to add that but bhul jaati hu😕

What an amazing os! The way u showed how anirudh helps bondita regain her self esteem was really nice. Wish to see something like this in the show😍😃

Hey, What should I call u??

This was an amazing OS!⭐️

I loved it thoroughly! Ani's realising her fear, hugging her to make her feel protected and making her strong again was bliss to read❤️

And I loved this line: He was giving her something that only a few people give in this life to others- To return someone’s lost confidence

Loved ur writing👍🏼

Originally posted by: Doc.love

OTT!!! indeed buddy! Kafi OTT tha... But yaarrrr... creative liberty le li miene thodi si! Mujhe bhi likhte hue hassi arhy thy... aur darr bhi lag rha tha ke kahin yahan sab ko yehi na lag jaye ke kuch pedophlic scenes likh diye hain... But I am glad for your lovely comment and appreciation Thank you so much buddy...

Arey bilkul le sakte hain... Kyun na lein! 😉

Art itself is a creativity. And creativity always enhances beauty of anything.

Keep writing buddy🤗

Btw, what shall i call u?

Originally posted by: screen22

This is amazing and very good to write the depth of both feelings and to understand what both of them are going through 👏

Heyyy buddy! Thank you soo much for such a beautiful review... ❤️🤗

The story is so real that you can put yourself in Anirudh and Bondita shoes, why a moment so scary 😧 can leave a mark on you for the rest of your life.

Beatings usually leave a mark and scar people for life.The makers have brought it again and although they keep showing glimpses of her fear of being beaten again, but the problem was that Aniruddh had never actually told her or you know, placated her fears before... I mean... he told her that HE would never beat her... but he never told her that he would avenge her too... Something she would definitely have looked forward to, keeping in mind how much she relies on him and how much his trust is important for her.

please could you translate the following for me to understand more because my Hindi is not very good Sure! 🤗

Ohh Bhagvan... kia ker dia miene yeh? Bondita, mujhe maaf ker dou please...miene uss waqt tum per vishwaas nahi kia tha... tumse ghussa hua tha... jab uss admi ne tumko haath lagaya tou mien wahan nahi tha tumhien bachaane ke liye. Maaf ker dou mujhe please...”

"Ohh Lord, what have I done! Bondita, please forgive me. I did not trust you at that time, I even got angry on you. When that man touched you, I was not there to protect you from him. Please forgive me.."

whisper, “Inhi haathon ko chot pohanchai thy na uss ne... mien usay nahi chhodunga Bondita.”

" (that man) hurt these hands na... I will not spare him Bondita...(for hurting you)"

Abh sab theek hai Bondita. Iss admi ko iske kiye ki saza tou mien dilwaon ga hi, mager iski asal saza hogy jab tum isko iske saray sawalon ka jawab himmat se aur bahaduri se dou gy. Iss se daray beghair. Yeh kuch nahi ker sakta tumhara abh. Iss liye iss se darne ki abh zarurat nahi hai.”

"All is well now, Bondita. I will not spare this man, but his real punishment would be to see you confidently and bravely facing him, answering all his questions correctly, without ever getting afraid of him again. He cannot harm you now, so do not be scared of him anymore. "

A very big 🙏 if you have the time👍🏼

When you took out the time to read my OS and write such nice comments, how can I not do something so little for you? 🤗 I am sorry, I should have added translations in the OS only for non- Hindi readers... Next time if i write something again, I will remember this. 👍🏼

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Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

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Mujhe khud yaad nahi hai behen 😭 even i want to add that but bhul jaati hu😕

Pata chal gaya mere ko.. A very sweet person, Asfia has helped me out...

its MEMBERSONLY and NOCOPY with [ ]

at the beginning of the post.. 🤗