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Amita, I will try my best not to hide in a cocoon 😛

I hope you are doing well! Nice to see U on the forum :)

Thank you,

Bhavini

I have gone through a very, very, very tough time of my life, but I am doing better than before.

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

I have gone through a very, very, very tough time of my life, but I am doing better than before.

Hey! Are u in contact with the members of Forum?

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Hey Chetna,

Thank you for reading both stories; wow U read it 5 times. Thank U for the encouragement :). I have started writing RKG.

Bhavini

What about me ..I have read RKG numerous times making it impossible to count.RKG is the story I always want to read again and again.It cast spell on the reader making it difficult to come out..it is a trap woven by you.Bhavi thank you for this TRAP.🤗

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Amita, I will try my best not to hide in a cocoon 😛

I hope you are doing well! Nice to see U on the forum :)

Thank you,

Bhavini

Bhavi I have not left the forum for a day..It works like a stress buster for me.I learn new things here.. I try to improve my English,too.

Awww... U R a sweetheart. Of course, I know you love the Rkg storyline. You have read the story multiple times.

Amita, I just read RKG and the first 10 chapters really need to rework. Too much Hindi English mix. One day I will rewrite the entire story, but I will continue RKG first. :) Even though there was too much grammatical error, extra fluff, and Hindi English mixup, I still enjoyed reading it so much. I don't know why I loved it.

I am so glad you stick to the forum :)

Your English is perfect; I never thought you needed to work on it.

I am throughout Gujurati Medium, so I struggle sometimes, but I feel reading helped me a lot to improve my language.

Bhavini

I read your RKG several times still not enough of reading it. It has that much magnetic pull on us. Sometimes I feel guilty for not knowing Hindi. Even then I love your stories. I am glad to know you are to rewrite it one day.

May god be with you in all walks of your life.

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Awww... U R a sweetheart. Of course, I know you love the Rkg storyline. You have read the story multiple times.

Amita, I just read RKG and the first 10 chapters really need to rework. Too much Hindi English mix. One day I will rewrite the entire story, but I will continue RKG first. :) Even though there was too much grammatical error, extra fluff, and Hindi English mixup, I still enjoyed reading it so much. I don't know why I loved it.

Who cares about grammatical error, extra fluff and Hindi English mixup.I care about the story line,it's content,the banter, mysterious Radha and her attitudes, your narrative style.. everything is top notch.. looking forward to witness their conversation where you left..A frustrated Jalal an embarrassed Pinaj an approaching Radha..

Bhavi!!! Main soch mein padh gayi thi achanak se I received your messages at night ... I logged back in forum and realized you also started coming back on forum! I need a chat with you bhavi 😈

Maybe next weekend...

kal kaam hai thats why I’m heading off to sleep now... but wow great to know you’re willing to continue! Let’s have a chat next weekend. It’s been too long.... love you ❤️