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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ParijatGirl

Thank you sweety๐Ÿ˜Š

Urs welcome dii

U will update today??

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Soso70

Sorry I'm late. Life is busy for now.

Jalal is total arrogant. What an expectation

he will loose the bet and also his Porsche to Mirza ๐Ÿคฃ

Think the mysterious girl in the cafe is Jodha

She surely curse herself that she agreed this marriage

I'm curious how both will react, when they finally meet

Awesome update sweetie ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’– Thanks for update ๐Ÿ’•

Thank you so much sissy๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Urs welcome dii

U will update today??

I will try sweety... if not maybe tomorrow๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

CHAPTER 8



Jalal's phone buzzed, indicating an incoming text message, he read the text on his phone, suddenly his anger rised while reading the msg from jodha "I can't come, I have urgent work. JODHA"

"Why didn't you tell me earlier that you couldn't come !!! I've been waiting for 1 hour, and you just texted can't come !!!" Jalal replied jodha's msg.

"sorry ..."

"You damn village girlโ€ฆ let's go now mirza !!!" Said jalal to mirza in anger...

"She didn't come?!?!?! Yeaaaa ... so I got a new car ..." Jalal can only glare at mirza.

"The bet is still valid, I'm sure she didn't come because she must be feeling embarrasse ... she realized that she wasn't good enough for Jalalludin Akbar" mirza just shook his head...

while a beautiful girl stood by the window, looking far ahead as if she was thinking of a big plan ... "You will get what you "want" jalal. You will know who I really am" said the girl smiling with sarcastically...

*************

Finally Jalal and Jodha's wedding took place, the wedding was carried out very simply, very privately, only their close family members and best friends were present, no doubt the wedding party was only attended by no more than 30 people.

This was done by the request of Jodha and Jalal agrees because he thinks this is very beneficial for him that his other friends (except Mirza) will no one know about his marriage. The marriage was carried out in both Islam and hindu style. In all rituals, jodha covers her entire face with dupatta. And until now Jalal haven't see jodha's face.

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Meanwhile somewhere in a hospital room, a beautiful lady was lying on hospital bed and a handsome man beside her was holding her hand, there are many medical devices attached on the lady's body to support the life of her ...

" jo ... dha ... I'm sor...ry ... ... jo ..." said the woman weakly.

"Don't talk too much... take rest I will always take care of you" said the man while holding back his tears.

"I'm sorry ... I've ...made ..you ... suf...fer..." suddenly the sound of the heartbeat machine beside the woman beep sounded fast, the man was frantic he rushed to call the doctor .....

.

.

"Doctorโ€ฆ the patient's pulse is decreasing" said one of the nurses.

"Quickly give an injection so that his heart rate will rise again ..." said the doctor to the nurse while the man was only able to stare from the outside with full of anxiety and praying for the woman.

***********

The maulvi end the nikah after asking consent to jodha and jalal.

*******

"forgive us sir ... we have tried our best but God wants another ... we are sorry... "said the doctor, the man just stood there frozen while tears run down on his cheeks.

"Good Bye SALIMA... May your soul rest in peace..."

************

"Congratulations Jodha, now you have become my daughter in law ... may god bless you with happiness in life.. beta.." Hamida said emotionally while hugging Jodha.

while Jodha just nodded her head with the dupata that still covered her face. Jalal who stood beside Jodha just smiled sarcastically .

*********

This day of a big event especially for these 2 beautiful women, Jodha and Salima. On this day Jodha enters a new world and holds the title as Mrs. Jalalludin Akbar while Salima enters the immortal world leaving mortality.

"I will fulfill your last wish ... I promise I will find Jodha for you" thought the man.

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After the reception party end, jodha and jalal went to their new apartment- a wedding gift from jalal's parents. They were in silence during the trip. Jodha purposely did not remove her dupatta from her face so that Jalal would not see her face as she wanted to surprise Jalal.

"Your room is upstairs and mine is downstairs" Jalal said to Jodha who only answered with a nod.

Jodha entered her room, she opened her little dupatta to observe her room. when she was enjoying the night view from the balcony of her room, suddenly Jalal rush into her room.

Jodha was surprised by the arrival of Jalal in her room. Jodha tried to be calm, still looking out of the window and turning her back on jalal she remained silent waiting for what Jalal would do in her room.

"Listen ... I'm not someone who likes small talk. Just to the point. I don't know what the real reason for you to accept this ridiculous marriage... Honestly, I actually don't want to marry you but because my parents threatened me I was forced to agree and marry you ... "said jalal bluntly to jodha.

while jodha just listened quietly to everything jalal said while keeping her back on jalal. "I don't want to waste my youth by being tied to a marriage that doesn't suit my taste so I want to make a agreement with you about this marriage" said jalal while putting a big brown envelope on Jodha's bed.

Jalal again continued. "Read the contents of this agreement, if there are points that you do not understand ask me or if you want to put forward some conditions you can add them below, give it back tomorrow morning to me. tomorrow my friend Mirza come here.. so keep your attitude"

"Are you a mute or deaf village girl?!?!?! Why are you just silent ??? you understand what I'm saying ???" jalal is getting annoyed with jodha's silence. Jodha finally reacted to Jalal's insolent attitude

"Have you finished babbling, if you don't have anything else to talk to me anymore, get out of my room, I'm tired!"

Jalal was very surprised to hear Jodha's attitude. By holding back his anger he was about to move out from the girl room, but he was stop by jodha..

"wait ... !!!" jalal stops at once and turns to Jodha. "Do not forget to close the door ... !!!!!!! knock on the door first before entering someone else's room ... !!! SHOW YOUR MANNERS, Mister!!!" jodha's word make Jalal lost for words. immediately jalal comes out of Jodha's room and closes the door a little hard.

"you arrogant man !!! don't have manners !!! don't have discipline... what do you think ..I want to marry a man like you ... eeww!!!" Muttered Jodha annoyingly seeing Jalal's behavior.

She saw a brown envelope lying on her bed, she opened the envelope and began to read the contents of the agreement made by Jalal. after she read it and she understood the contents of the letter she signed it, and went sleep after changing her dress.

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Next morning, Jodha groomed herself in front of the mirror to make sure her makeup was the way she wanted ... suddenly someone knocked on her door "hey ... village girl ... come out, my friend wants to meet you ... hurry up.. we will wait for you downstairs ... !!

"yes ... I'll be down soon!!! " said jodha.

Jodha again saw her appearance in front of the mirror making sure everything looked perfect with a sly smile jodha said to herself" IT'S SHOW TIME "

**********

Jalal and mirza were talking and they heard footsteps going down the stairs, Jalal and Mirza immediately turned their heads towards the stairs ... at first there was only a pair of tiny, typical female feet going down the stairs, both Jalal and Mirza were both tense waiting for Jodha's figure. Either Jalal will get a new car or Mirza who will ride home in Porche Jalal's car. and.... both of them looked stunned with their eyes wide open mouths to see the female figure in front of them.

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EXCUSE ME FOR GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES

THANK YOUU๐Ÿ’•

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Posted: 5 years ago

nice chapter!

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome part๐Ÿ˜‚

I am loving it to bits Jodha is going to teach him a good lesson & will bring him down to the world of reality

So marriage is over now & the game has begun

Salima cs & details will be needed

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon๐Ÿ™‚

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update dii๐Ÿ’–

So now jalal and jo got married and jalal is treating her like a village girl๐Ÿ˜กand showing his attitude

Really like to know how will jodha bring him back to reality and crush his attitude

Will like to know abt Salima and the other man who was with her

Will wait eagerly how jodha has done her makeup and also who won the betโ“

Continue it soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

Take care๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Love u๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

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Posted: 5 years ago

You are making us more and more curious about their first meeting

Soo good update
marriage is done

Jalal showing attitude haa....jo will teach him good lesson

Cant wait more for next update, pls update soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you didi๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it dear

Awesome part๐Ÿ˜‚

I am loving it to bits Jodha is going to teach him a good lesson & will bring him down to the world of reality

So marriage is over now & the game has begun

Salima cs & details will be needed

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon๐Ÿ™‚

Thank you didi๐Ÿ˜Š

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