OS Rihaan/Riansh: O Yaara

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hey guys so my first ever OS in this forum probably the second if not first of my life. Please hear this song while you read. Personally haven’t managed to do that to date myself reading and hearing simultaneously. So best of luck to you all. Please leave comments and tell me your thoughts if possible.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KPT1cIZT5-0

O Yaara

Bin Kahe Suno O Yaara

Humne To Yunhi Dil Haara

He saw her coming down from the stairs. She was in a pink saree looking stunningly gorgeous as always thought Vihaan. “Mrs. Pretty Rai Singhania” is all that came out of his mouth in a whisper. A slow smile came on his face.

Jeeke Naa Mil Paaye Toh

Marr Ke Tujhe Paa Lenge

Looking at her, he got lost in her once again. This is happening a lot these days focus, he needs to focus. He can’t afford to get distracted. It can cost him dearly in this game. Meeting her halfway in the hall they both went towards the breakfast table together for the morning meal.

Chhu Kar Dekhun

Toh Dil Ko Ho Yakeen Ho Yaara

He forwarded his hand to take the porridge at the same time she forwarded hers and her hand came under his and held by him accidentally. Both looked at each other and had an eye lock. She took her hand back hesitantly feeling awkward.

Bin Kahe Suno O Yaara

Humne To Yunhi Dil Haara

He entered their room. She was standing in front of the mirror taking out her jewelry. In a daze, he walked towards her.

Aankhon Mein Teri Khone Ki

Tere Kareeb Hone Ki

With her kohl eyes, she looked at him through the mirror. Standing behind her, he stopped and looked at her. Those eyes have always been a mystery for him. Something was in them that no matter how hard he tries he just couldn’t stop himself from drowning in them. Be it Vihaan or Vansh none of the guys stood chance. He had been here for just a few days and yet here he is caught up in her spell in such a short time. Vansh being her husband never stood a chance thought Vihaan with empathy.

Hone Lagi Aadat Mujhe

Tujhpe Fida Hone Ki

She turns around to walk away but the free end of her saree gets stuck in his watch. Turning around she tries to free it from the watch. Coming closer to her with an intense gaze he looks at her, raising his hands without removing his gaze from her, he tucks it out from his watch and frees it. She looks at him once and walks away.

Aisa Nasha Aankhon Mein Tha

Haaye Madhosh Hum Huye

Watching her walking away he remembered the day of Ishani’s marriage whenRiddhima got drunk and they had their almost first kiss. Those drunken eyes of hers still haunt him at times.

Tujhe Chhu Le Bin Chhuye

Pyaas Bujhe Bin Piye

With a longing in his eyes, he kept looking at her from there. At night when she sleeps he often finds himself staring at her sitting beside her side of the bed on the floor. These days more than often he finds himself pulling away from his hands with great effort from touching her whenever he was about to touch. The physical contact be it as small as an insignificant as a handhold, a hug, or a small caress he craves for it. Something, anything that can make him feel connected with her in some way, any way possible. These days those moments he gets only when she goes to sleep.

Tujhe Palkon Pe

Rakhun Saja Ke Yaara

That day he saw a totally different side of hers carefree, childlike, innocent, naive, and oh so vulnerable. That day he had this uncontrollable urge to hide her and protect her from all the evil eyes and cruel intentions.

Bin Kahe Suno O Yaara

He can’t tell her about himself but do give her subtle indications about himself hoping she’ll catch it up.

Tu Yeh Kyun Kahe Humnasheen

Koi Kurbat Hi Nahin

Mein Yeh Kahun Ishq Hai

Chhu Le Zara Dil Ki Zameen

He remembered what happened two days ago. Well Vihaan being his usual flirty self could not stop himself from being any different with his MissPretty Rai Singhania and Vansh in him wanting and craving for her and her affection might have forgotten his facade for a moment and crossed the limits of physical decency set for Vihaan for a moment.

“You are here to act as Vansh but that does not make you Vansh. So don’t you dare cross your limits with me.” Riddhima had said angrily to Vihaan.

“I am” thought Vihaan with pain but couldn’t say anything but give a sad tight smile to her in agreement with a head nod. It’s been since then they haven’t been on talking terms if not needed or if not in front of the family.

Likha Hai Jo Dil Pe Mere

Aaja Who Dikhaun Tujhe

Tera Hu Mein Tera Hi Hoon

Itna Bata Doon Tujhe

Come to think of it he had been doomed from the very beginning from the moment he laid his eyes on her at his beach party. From the moment he laid his eyes at her he hadn’t been able to look anywhere else not when she has been in his vicinity at the least. Kabir was right the girl was his doom even if Kabir might not have sent her to cruise that day he may have gone after her in her search. Even if Kabir would have loved her truly and not seen her as a mere pawn Vansh would have gone after her and made her his at all cost. At times he wonders did he ever loved Ragini at all because whatever he felt for her in the past comprises nothing in front of what he feels for Riddhima. He saw oh he saw everything and heard everything ok. Thanks to the cameras he fitted in the entire mansion without anyone’s knowledge and he’ll have to admit all these days had been an eye-opener for him and quite informative.

The day he fell from the cliffRiddhima wasn’t supposed to come there but she came and saw him falling from the cliff. He was afraid she might end up doing something drastic and she would have had Kabir not stopped her. This I’ll have to say was the best and probably the only good deed Kabir had done though for his own selfish reasons but he did. Maybe I’ll make things less painful for him. Then he also remembers the confession of his and the traitor of the family Mrs. Anupriya Rai Singhania on the poolside, how they both mother-son duo manipulated all of us along with her, how they framed and trapped both of them. He also saw how Kabir pushed Riddhima in the pool and then electrocuted her from live wire and then threatened her using Ishani. The day he met Riddhima as Vihaan, she had hurt her foot in the temple, how while applying ointment she looked at Vansh’s picture probably remembering him and missing him, how that leech Kabir entered their room without permission and tried to touch her only to be kicked by her bravo girl. Everything he saw and heard everything and every time when Kabir misbehaved or threatened or tried to harm her the rage he felt oh would have been enough to destroy the whole world and even then it wouldn’t have been enough. Every time she cried for him he felt like going to her and take her in his arms everything else can be damned.

Dil Mein Gar Ho Ijazat

Chupaa Loon Yaara

He remembered the day he proposed to her for marriage rather ordered her well he couldn’t let her reject and leave him. He would never except to anyone not even himself but he doesn’t go around marrying every girl he has a doubt about. At the least, that’s what he told himself at that time that he is marrying her to know her truth and reach the person behind her. Truth be told he had other ways he need not marry her to get to know her truth. He wanted her alright and he couldn’t let her go. When she resigned from the job he knew he had to stop her and in a way that she won’t be able to walk out on him and leave him. Hence he did what he had to.

Bin Kahe Suno O Yaara

He never told her neither did she ever said those words but he never really needed her words to know her feelings for him. He knew when her feelings started changing for him. He knew those glances she threw at him when she thought he wasn’t looking. Least she will know he never really stopped looking at her from the moment he saw her for the first time.

Jeeke Naa Mil Paaye Toh

Marr Ke Tujhe Paayenge

He remembered the day he jumped from the cliff and then the day she took a bullet for him. Why is it that one of them had to reach the doors of death for them to come closer? Be it her or be it him every time they had to go through this ordeal.

Chhu Kar Dekho Toh

Dil Ko Yakken Ho Yaara

Bin Kahe Suno O Yaara

Humne To Yunhi Dil Haara

Like every other night here came another one where he’ll spend it by just staring at her from afar. For now, he’ll have to make do with it only but soon the distance between them will be gone he will make sure but for now, he needs to remove the people who are responsible for the separation both are going through from this house and their life for good. Giving her the last look soon he thought and went to sleep.

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Abhyudaya thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago
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love it dear. Simply love it. Simple yet presented very elegantly. The background music takes everything.


I really wish to see Vansh doing the same thing as he did the story. Not taking revenge on Ridhima like regular ITV man, but making sure to watch everything happening and trying to stand with Ridhima.


❤️

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Very Nice , Hope this happens on the series too


Very well written

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is too good. Glad you wrote this. If you can please do write another part of this os💕
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

love it dear. Simply love it. Simple yet presented very elegantly. The background music takes everything.


I really wish to see Vansh doing the same thing as he did the story. Not taking revenge on Ridhima like regular ITV man, but making sure to watch everything happening and trying to stand with Ridhima.


❤️

Hope so yaar because if revenge is what he is going after then there is nothing new and that we haven't seen before already the route the makers have taken from today's episode is why I never see any ITV show regularly. To date, there hasn't been a show that I have watched from beginning to end without a miss. Thanks though 😊❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This was so beautiful, couldn't keep my 😭


well written his torment and affection. Wow! ❤️


👏 please don't stop writing on their jodi!

You have a way with words

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Your story felt like a soothing melody🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very well executed with words.

Simple plot but very effective.

Loved the way you presented. Hope something like this happens in show but that I know moot point.

Loved Vansh perception, his feelings for Riddhu baby.

Great work buddy.....if possible turn it into SS or TS would love to read further.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This was absolutely beautiful.......it showed the vulnerability of Vansh.....his love for Riddhima....❤❤❤❤❤❤


This is something i really want to see in the show.....but damn god knows what is going on or what will go on in the show....to be honest i don't have much expectations nowadays.....at last it is Indian television.....which sadly prefers number of episodes rather than giving a bang on story😐😐😐...



But damn these forum stories are absolutely mind blowing .....❤❤❤❤

Continue writing like this plz ....loved it ❤❤❤

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is so nice.


It is so good to see Vansh's perspective being written.


Very heartwarming!

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