Rudhita FF- 5 Times in London (update- chapter 2- part 2 on page 9) - Page 4

Originally posted by: castlebones

Thank you sooo much for your beautiful comment. But mostly thank you for encouraging me🤧😊

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Great work T ❤️👍🏼 Looks different and fresh and this have a very good scope to continue😳 Thanks for starting this unique one🤗

Your writing is beautiful and please Keep continuing this dear and keep writing more ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: RekaC

Great work T ❤️👍🏼 Looks different and fresh and this have a very good scope to continue😳 Thanks for starting this unique one🤗

Your writing is beautiful and please Keep continuing this dear and keep writing more ❤️❤️

Thank you dear...😊

Behen ab rulayega kya!! 😭💔 vulnerable Ani & his inner turmoil always gives me pain.. & you potrayed this so beautifully..❤️❤️ Loved this mature Bondita.. Mujhe Nehi pata tha Tu itni achhi writer hain.. Waiting for next part.. 😳

Waise sorry for late ha.. Kan pakad ke sorry like Ani did.. Channel work was engrossing me fully.. Now it is in a steady position, so I'm free.. ⭐️

Originally posted by: Shrabana99

Behen ab rulayega kya!! 😭💔 vulnerable Ani & his inner turmoil always gives me pain.. & you potrayed this so beautifully..❤️❤️ Loved this mature Bondita.. Mujhe Nehi pata tha Tu itni achhi writer hain.. Waiting for next part.. 😳

Waise sorry for late ha.. Kan pakad ke sorry like Ani did.. Channel work was engrossing me fully.. Now it is in a steady position, so I'm free.. ⭐️

😈Yes!! This is nothing compared to what's coming in the next chapter😉

🥺Really?!? Thank you so much Shrabu💕

Bondita is not mature yet, she is...growing up and with that her confidence and understanding of a situation is growing too.

Aww...*blush*☺️nahi re, I'm not a writer, it was just a thought stuck inside my head and you know, if you want to read a story that's not written yet, write it. I did exactly that...

I know the flow of the story is not good, at some places it seems disjoint...but I'm working on it. If you have any suggestions for me, please share, it will be whole heatedly appreciated❤️😊

It's absolutely ok🤗how can i be angry when i know you are busy with those beautiful vm's of yours!! They are such a feast for my eyes, ears and heart...

I'll update as soon as I can, shotti!!!

Nice update dear... You wrote the emotions of Ani very well👍🏼👏

Amazing work.. keep going❤️😳

Everything is very clear emotionally and heart warming but my Hindi is not very good so apologies, if it was translate in English, I could understand the story more I will be able to write more.

Thank You 👏

Originally posted by: RekaC

Nice update dear... You wrote the emotions of Ani very well👍🏼👏

Amazing work.. keep going❤️😳

Thank you so much dear❤️😊

Originally posted by: screen22

Everything is very clear emotionally and heart warming but my Hindi is not very good so apologies, if it was translate in English, I could understand the story more I will be able to write more.

Thank You 👏

Thank you so much for your comment 😊❤️

Especially when you took the time to read it even though you don't understand hindi well🥰so again thanks...

About translating in english, you can PM me the parts you don't understand I'll translate it for you🤗

You see I'm writing everything in english except their inner thoughts and conversations. If everything is written in english it will lose the feel of BB and if I add the translation with the hindi dialogues it will hinder the flow of the story. I'm new at this writing thing and this is the style of writing I'm comfortable with. I'm really really sorry for disappointing you😢 🥺☹️

If you still want to read it I'm here to help😊

T 🤗

It is really beautiful. Education has been always close to my 💓.

Loved Ani's dialogues. It's so true a girl and woman has to sacrifice her career for familial responsibilities 😒, but bon is so lucky to get a husband like Ani. 😳 He understands its value and took a decision that is painful for both of them, but will yield greater dividends in future. 😊 😊

Loved Bon's arguments too. She understands that whatever is he doing , is only for her well -being. Although, she let him go today but in future she would definitely ask him what is her place in his life. 😊

Ofc, Ani has other reasons for sending her away but the primary reason is her education only. Would love to see how Ani fight his feelings now.

Waiting for next update now.